Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ784Q6PDTTH40A62CFG8FCD

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Duration:
3m 13s
Cost:
$0.039996
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone burned against Rory’s collarbone. Heat seeped through her jumper, sharp and insistent. She pressed two fingers to the crimson gem. The silver chain bit into her skin. The air ahead rippled like water struck by a stone. A vertical tear split the damp London evening, edges fraying into silver thread. The Veil gave way. Nyx flowed past her shoulder. Their silhouette bled into the distortion, shadow stretching thin before snapping taut. Violet light flickered deep within the dark mass. Isolde stepped forward first. Silver hair caught the streetlamp glow, then swallowed it. Her boots touched the wet pavement. No print remained behind her. She passed through the shimmer without hesitation. Rory gripped the Fae blade. Moonsilver bit cold into her palm. The leaf-shaped edge hummed against her pulse. She stepped through. Damp asphalt vanished. Warmth slammed into her chest. The air thickened, heavy with crushed petals, roasted sugar, and something metallic underneath. She staggered, boots sinking into soil that yielded like fresh bread. The ground exhaled. Fragrance rolled over her tongue, sweet and cloying. Above, the sky burned amber. Not sunset. Not fire. A permanent, honeyed dome that cast long, bruised shadows across rolling terraces. Vines climbed stone retaining walls, thick as ship ropes. Leaves shimmered with oil-slick iridescence. Fruit hung heavy, skins mottled in violet and gold, dripping sap that pooled in shallow clay channels. Rory wiped her mouth. The taste of copper and apricot clung to her lips. Isolde stood ten paces ahead. Her lavender eyes tracked the horizon. She lifted a hand, fingers tracing the air. The roots remember footsteps that never fell. Walk where the earth breathes. Do not taste what bleeds gold. Nyx materialised beside a stone trough. Their form solidified, shoulders broad, outline sharpening into something almost human. Violet eyes scanned the terraces. The whisper of their voice scraped against the warm wind. This place eats silence. The stones hum. The soil pulses. I feel teeth in the dirt. Rory sheathed the dagger. The cold metal left a ghost ache in her fingers. She adjusted the pendant. The crimson stone throbbed in time with her heartbeat. She followed Isolde’s path up the nearest terrace. Bootsteps sank. The earth rebounded behind her, erasing every mark. She paused. Pressed her heel down again. The soil swallowed the impression whole. No track remained. Nyx glided up the slope. Shadows clung to their ankles, stretching and snapping like tethers. They stopped beside a low wall. Fingers brushed a cluster of fruit. The skin split. Thick amber syrup oozed over their knuckles. It smells like roasted chestnuts and old blood. The flesh moves. Rory leaned closer. The pulp inside the fruit shifted. Veins pulsed beneath the rind. A low thrum vibrated through the stone wall, travelling up her boots into her shins. The rhythm matched the pendant’s heat. Isolde turned. Her gaze locked on the bleeding fruit. She shook her head once. Hunger wears a pretty mask here. The orchard feeds on want. Keep your tongue behind your teeth. A distant clatter echoed across the valley. Copper struck copper. Knives scraped against wood. Low voices wove together, rising and falling in a rhythm that felt almost musical. Laughter cracked through the warm air, sharp and sudden, then dissolved into something wet and guttural. Rory’s shoulders tensed. She scanned the terraces below. Stone kitchens sat half-buried in the hillside. Chimneys vented pale smoke that smelled of caramelised fat and charred herbs. Figures moved between timber stalls. Some wore aprons stained dark. Others dragged sacks that left glistening trails. None looked up. None paused. Nyx’s silhouette frayed at the edges. Violet light pulsed faster. They stepped back from the wall. Souls bound to ovens. Contracts written in grease and salt. They chop, they stir, they do not blink. The air tastes of their exhaustion. Isolde walked past them. Her skirts brushed the soil. No dust clung to the hem. She stopped at a fork in the path. One route dipped toward the kitchens. The other climbed higher, winding through a grove of trees with bark like polished obsidian. Their branches curled inward, forming a canopy that blocked the amber sky. The Seer pointed to the dark grove. Time thickens under black wood. Minutes stretch. Hours collapse. Follow the crooked roots. Do not count your breaths. Rory wiped sweat from her brow. The heat pressed against her ribs. Her jumper clung to her back. She unbuttoned the collar. The pendant swung free, glowing brighter. The crimson light bled into the amber air. She stepped onto the climbing path. The soil changed. Grit replaced loam. Sharp edges bit through her soles. The air cooled by degrees. The scent of sugar faded, replaced by damp moss and petrichor. The obsidian trunks loomed closer. Bark reflected her face, warped and stretched. Nyx moved beside her. Their form flickered, solid to smoke and back. The whisper of their voice dropped lower. The shadows here do not belong to the sun. They pool. They watch. They remember Aldric. They remember flesh. Rory’s hand drifted to the dagger hilt. Cold metal grounded her. She kept her eyes on the path. Roots twisted across the dirt, knuckled and thick. They pulsed faintly, a slow contraction that matched the pendant’s rhythm. She stepped over them. Each crossing sent a vibration up her legs. Isolde glided ahead. She did not look back. Her silver hair caught the dim light, shining like drawn wire. The grove drinks urgency. Rush and you drown. Linger and you starve. Match your pace to the sap. A low chime rang through the trees. Glass struck glass. The sound bounced off the black trunks, multiplying, layering until the air vibrated. Rory stopped. The chime resolved into a melody. Slow. Deliberate. Notes hung in the warm air, heavy as syrup. Nyx tilted their head. Violet eyes narrowed. Bells forged from frozen wine. They ring for the tables. They ring for the hungry. The sound pulls the spine forward. Rory’s jaw tightened. She forced her boots to stay planted. The melody tugged at her ribs. Her stomach clenched. Saliva flooded her mouth. She swallowed hard. The taste of copper returned, sharper now. She dug her nails into her palm. The pain cut through the pull. Isolde raised a hand. The chime faded. The grove exhaled. Leaves rustled without wind. The feast calls those who carry empty spaces. You carry a blade. You carry a stone. Let them anchor you. Do not listen with your stomach. Rory stepped forward again. The path narrowed. Obsidian branches dipped lower, forming a tunnel. The amber sky vanished completely. Bioluminescent fungi clung to the bark, casting pale blue light across the dirt. The glow pulsed in slow waves. Each wave washed over her boots, leaving a faint chill. Nyx’s form stabilised. Shadows pooled around their feet, thick and still. They ran a hand along a trunk. Bark cracked under their touch. Sap wept out, clear and viscous. It dripped onto the soil. The ground absorbed it instantly. The trees feed on attention. Look too long and they take your hours. Look away and they take your path. Keep your eyes on the dirt. Rory dropped her gaze. The soil shifted colour. Blue light revealed veins of quartz threading through the grit. The veins formed patterns. Spirals. Interlocking rings. They matched the pendant’s glow. She followed the quartz lines. They curved left, then right, guiding her steps. Isolde stopped at a clearing. The obsidian canopy broke. Amber light spilled through a gap, painting the ground in long, geometric shadows. A stone basin sat in the centre. Water filled it, still and black. The surface reflected nothing. No sky. No trees. Only void. The Seer knelt. Her fingers hovered above the water. She did not touch it. Mirrors in Dymas show appetite. They do not show faces. Drop a coin and it multiplies. Drop a memory and it drowns. Drink and you become the basin. Nyx circled the edge. Their shadow stretched across the water. The darkness did not reflect. It sank. The surface rippled once. A low groan echoed from the depths. Bubbles rose. They popped, releasing scent of burnt honey and iron. Rory stepped closer. The pendant flared. Heat seared her skin. She unclasped the chain. The stone fell into her palm. It vibrated. The crimson glow bled into the black water. The surface shimmered. Shapes formed beneath. Tables. Platters. Hands reaching. Fingers stained with syrup and ash. She clenched her fist around the stone. The vision fractured. The water went still. Isolde stood. Her lavender eyes locked onto Rory’s knuckles. The stone remembers its birthplace. It hung over a roasting pit. It weighed down a chef’s throat. It knows the taste of endless courses. Keep it close. Let it burn when the path forks. Nyx moved to the far edge of the clearing. Their hand rested on a low archway carved from pale stone. Runes covered the surface, jagged and interlocking. Moss filled the grooves. The arch framed a downward stairwell. Steps spiralled into darkness. Warm air drifted up, carrying the sound of chopping knives and sizzling fat. The whisper scraped against the stone. The kitchens call. The stairs descend. The heat rises. The walls sweat grease. I hear chains rattling against oven doors. I hear voices reciting recipes like prayers. Rory adjusted her grip on the dagger. Cold steel grounded her pulse. She stepped past the basin. The quartz veins in the dirt converged at the archway. They glowed brighter. The pendant matched them. Heat radiated through her fingers. She did not flinch. Isolde moved to her side. Silver hair brushed Rory’s shoulder. The Seer’s voice dropped, barely audible over the distant clatter. The descent demands payment. Not coin. Not blood. Attention. They will offer you a plate. They will offer you a seat. Refuse the first. Accept the second. Sit where the shadows pool. Watch the hands that stir the pots. Count the scars on their knuckles. Rory nodded once. She stepped under the arch. The stone pressed close on both sides. Runes scraped against her jacket. The air thickened. Sugar and iron drowned her senses. She descended. Boots met worn steps. Edges crumbled under pressure. Dust rose, coating her tongue. The chopping grew louder. Knives struck wood in rapid succession. A voice called out, sharp and melodic, listing ingredients in a language that twisted around familiar words. Saffron. Bone marrow. Nightshade. Honey. Nyx flowed down beside her. Their silhouette compressed, shoulders hunched against the low ceiling. Violet eyes scanned the walls. Grease stained the stone. It dripped in slow trails, catching the dim light. The walls weep fat. The stairs remember spilled wine. The air tastes of burnt sugar and regret. Keep your blade low. Keep your eyes lower. Isolde followed. Her footsteps made no sound. Her shadow did not touch the steps. She paused on a landing. Her hand rested on a iron railing. Metal groaned under her touch. The kitchen doors stand open. They always stand open. Hunger does not lock its gates. Walk through the steam. Do not wipe the condensation from your face. Let it dry. Let it salt your skin. Rory reached the bottom. The stairwell opened into a wide corridor. Stone flags lined the floor. Channels cut through the centre, carrying dark liquid that smelled of reduced wine and cloves. Steam rolled off the surface, curling around her ankles. The heat pressed against her chest. Sweat traced her spine. Ahead, double doors stood ajar. Timber blackened by decades of smoke. Iron handles shaped like twisted vines. Light spilled through the gap, warm and flickering. The sound of a hundred movements collided. Pans scraped. Fires roared. Voices overlapped, chanting measurements, calling orders, laughing in short, sharp bursts. Nyx stepped forward. Their form thinned, stretching into the steam. Violet light pulsed once. The threshold breathes. The wood remembers a thousand hands. The iron remembers a thousand grips. Cross and the air changes. Cross and the floor tilts. Rory tightened her grip on the dagger. Cold metal bit into her palm. She stepped into the steam. Moisture coated her face. Salt stung her lips. She did not wipe it away. She pushed the door wider.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2030
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2030
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"scanned"
count3
7
word"whisper"
count3
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count5
11
word"vibrated"
count3
12
word"echoed"
count2
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"resolved"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count2
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
19
word"fractured"
count1
20
word"familiar"
count1
21
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"shimmered"
4"tracing"
5"footsteps"
6"scanned"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"throbbed"
10"pulsed"
11"vibrated"
12"echoed"
13"glistening"
14"loomed"
15"resolved"
16"stomach"
17"chill"
18"depths"
19"fractured"
20"familiar"
21"traced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences362
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences362
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
2"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences362
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2030
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount2030
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Rory19
London1
Veil1
Fae1
Isolde11
Seer3
Aldric1
Dymas1
Heat3
Nyx11
Violet6
Do4
Keep5
Cold3
Let4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Veil"
3"Isolde"
4"Seer"
5"Heat"
6"Nyx"
places
0"London"
1"Dymas"
2"Violet"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences164
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2030
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences362
matches(empty)
87.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean30.3
std13.77
cv0.455
sampleLengths
056
125
231
321
443
552
614
719
818
932
1016
1135
1226
1337
1411
1535
1614
1717
1844
1949
2016
2124
2256
237
2418
2536
2646
2719
2819
2949
3019
3118
3242
337
3421
3546
3614
3726
3848
3939
4026
4143
4245
4314
4428
4539
4646
4714
489
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences362
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs423
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences362
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2033
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.01574028529267093
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.002459419576979833
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences362
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences362
mean5.61
std2.83
cv0.505
sampleLengths
06
18
28
37
410
513
64
75
812
98
104
119
126
135
147
155
166
177
183
193
205
2113
2211
233
248
255
262
272
2812
299
305
3117
324
3310
345
356
368
377
385
396
406
4111
425
4310
444
453
463
476
484
4910
44.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats39
diversityRatio0.3314917127071823
totalSentences362
uniqueOpeners120
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences326
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount77
totalSentences326
matches
0"She pressed two fingers to"
1"Their silhouette bled into the"
2"Her boots touched the wet"
3"She passed through the shimmer"
4"She stepped through."
5"She staggered, boots sinking into"
6"Her lavender eyes tracked the"
7"She lifted a hand, fingers"
8"Their form solidified, shoulders broad,"
9"I feel teeth in the"
10"She adjusted the pendant."
11"She followed Isolde’s path up"
12"They stopped beside a low"
13"It smells like roasted chestnuts"
14"Her gaze locked on the"
15"She shook her head once."
16"She scanned the terraces below."
17"They stepped back from the"
18"They chop, they stir, they"
19"Her skirts brushed the soil."
ratio0.236
36.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount276
totalSentences326
matches
0"The Heartstone burned against Rory’s"
1"Heat seeped through her jumper,"
2"She pressed two fingers to"
3"The silver chain bit into"
4"The air ahead rippled like"
5"A vertical tear split the"
6"The Veil gave way."
7"Nyx flowed past her shoulder."
8"Their silhouette bled into the"
9"Violet light flickered deep within"
10"Isolde stepped forward first."
11"Her boots touched the wet"
12"She passed through the shimmer"
13"Rory gripped the Fae blade."
14"Moonsilver bit cold into her"
15"The leaf-shaped edge hummed against"
16"She stepped through."
17"Warmth slammed into her chest."
18"The air thickened, heavy with"
19"She staggered, boots sinking into"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences326
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Shadows clung to their ankles, stretching and snapping like tethers."
1"Low voices wove together, rising and falling in a rhythm that felt almost musical."
2"Their branches curled inward, forming a canopy that blocked the amber sky."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8909%