Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ786N82973DPG7Q825E8Z2Z

Run Details

Duration:
3m 16s
Cost:
$0.046920
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a heavy metallic thunk. Rory pulled the door open, ready to tell Eva she had forgotten her keys again, and the breath left her lungs like a punched-out sigh. Lucien stood on the landing. He filled the narrow frame of the doorway, immaculate as ever in a tailored charcoal suit that probably cost more than her delivery moped. Platinum blond hair was swept back from a sharp forehead, not a strand out of place. One amber eye, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that made the cramped hallway feel suddenly airless. The ivory head of his cane rested against his polished oxford. He had not changed. Or perhaps he had, and she was just remembering him exactly as he had been the night she walked away. Below them, the Brick Lane curry house vented a thick plume of cumin and scorched chili into the stairwell. Ptolemy wound himself around Rory's ankles, purring like a faulty engine, utterly oblivious to the fault line cracking open beneath her feet. You are not Eva, she said. Her voice came out steadier than her pulse. An astute observation, cherie. His French accent wrapped around the endearment like woodsmoke. He did not smile. May I come in? Rory's left hand tightened on the doorframe. The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist pulled tight against her skin, a pale souvenir from a childhood bicycle crash that felt like a lifetime ago. She should shut the door. She should throw the deadbolts, slide the chain, and pretend the last eight months had not carved a hollow space behind her ribs. But Lucien Moreau did not make social calls. If he was here, the underworld had shifted, or she had, and neither option promised safety. You have got thirty seconds, she said, stepping back. Before I decide you are trespassing. He crossed the threshold with a careful, measured gait, the cane tapping softly against the warped floorboards. The flat swallowed him whole. Eva's research had metastasized since last week. Towers of leather-bound grimoires leaned precariously against the sofa. Scrolls spilled across the coffee table like fallen leaves. Loose notes papered the walls, held up by masking tape and desperation. Lucien navigated the clutter without disturbing a single page, a man accustomed to walking through minefields in tailored wool. You are living in a paper fortress, he murmured, his gaze sweeping over a diagram of warding sigils pinned above the radiator. It is Eva's place. I am just housesitting while she is in Edinburgh. Rory crossed her arms, leaning against the doorjamb. What do you want, Lucien? He turned to her then. The amber eye caught the weak afternoon light filtering through the grease-stained window. The black one held nothing at all. I heard you were back in the city. I never left. You left me. The words landed quiet and heavy. Rory's jaw tightened. She focused on the knot of his tie, the precise dimple in the silk. Anything but his face. We had an arrangement. You needed a runner who did not ask questions. I needed cash that did not come with a trail. The arrangement expired. Did it. He shifted his weight. The cane's ivory handle gleamed. Or did you simply decide I was too dangerous to keep close? Dangerous. The word tasted like copper and rain. She remembered the warehouse in Shoreditch, the way his thin blade had slid free of that cane with a sound like a drawn breath. Remembered the heat of his back against hers, the low murmur of French, then German, then something older as he negotiated their way out of a room full of armed men. He spoke four languages fluently, but silence was the one he wielded best. Remembered the morning after, when she had found the ledger on his desk and realized he had known about Evan's connections all along and had not told her. The betrayal had not been in the lie. It had been in the quiet. You kept secrets, she said. You always do. It is what you are built for. It is what I survive by. He took a step closer. The space between them shrank to something charged and fragile. There is a difference. Ptolemy leapt onto the armchair, knocking a stack of transcribed incantations to the floor. The sudden rustle made them both flinch. Rory exhaled, slow and controlled, forcing her shoulders down. Cool head. Quick thinking. That was how she stayed upright. That was how she had survived Evan, how she had rebuilt herself in London, how she made rent delivering takeout for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress while sleeping in a drafty flat above Silas' bar. She was not a woman who broke easily. Say what you came to say, Lucien. I have got deliveries at six. He studied her. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then lifted back to her bright blue eyes. The deliberate sweep sent a traitorous heat low in her stomach. I came to warn you. The Cheung job you took last week. The package you moved through Wapping. Rory went still. What about it? It was marked. Not by the Triads. By something older. Something that tracks bloodlines. His knuckles whitened around the cane. They know your name, Aurora. They know where you sleep. The use of her full name struck like a match. Nobody called her that anymore. Not since she had shed her old life like a second skin. She pushed off the doorjamb, closing the distance before she could think better of it. If you knew it was a trap, why did you not stop me? I tried. His voice dropped, rough at the edges. I called. I sent word through Silas. You blocked my number. You told the bartender to turn me away at the door. She had. She had done it with shaking hands and a bruised pride, convinced that cutting him out would stop the ache. It had not. It had only made the quiet louder. I do not need a bodyguard, she said. I need the truth. All of it. No more ledgers hidden in drawers. No more strategic omissions. The truth is ugly. I have seen ugly. I lived with it for two years. I would rather have it than your polished half-truths. He moved then, fast enough that she did not step back. The cane clicked against the floor as he set it aside. His hand rose, hovering near her face before his fingers brushed a stray lock of straight black hair behind her ear. The touch was feather-light, devastatingly careful. Her breath hitched. She hated that it hitched. I did not tell you about Evan, he said quietly, because I was hunting the men who funded him. I needed you clear of the crossfire. I thought silence would keep you safe. I was arrogant. I was wrong. The admission hung in the curry-scented air. Rory's throat tightened. She looked at him, really looked. The sharp lines of his face, the tension bracketing his mouth, the way his mismatched eyes held hers without flinching. He was not the untouchable fixer in this moment. He was just a man standing in a cluttered flat, offering her the one thing he hoarded more than secrets. You do not get to decide what keeps me safe, she whispered. I know. His thumb traced the air beside her cheekbone, not quite touching. I am learning. Ptolemy yawned loudly, breaking the spell. Rory swallowed, stepping back just enough to reclaim her breathing room. She gestured toward the sofa, carefully moving a stack of bestiaries to clear a space. Sit. Tell me everything. And if you leave out a single detail, I will throw you down the stairs myself. A faint, genuine smile touched his mouth. It transformed him, softening the hard edges of the broker, the half-demon, the ghost she had tried to outrun. I would expect nothing less. He lowered himself onto the worn cushions, the charcoal wool pulling taut across his shoulders. Rory perched on the edge of the coffee table, knees almost brushing his. The scrolls between them felt less like a barrier now and more like common ground. Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane. Inside, the air had shifted, heavy with the weight of things finally being said. Start with the mark, she said. Lucien nodded, his hands resting loosely on his knees. It began in Marseille, he said, and the room narrowed to the sound of his voice, the steady rhythm of his words, the quiet certainty that this time, he would not look away.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:36:46.73Z" 4/27/2026, 10:36:46 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"utterly"
2"softly"
3"really"
4"carefully"
5"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1436
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"pulse"
2"measured"
3"navigated"
4"silk"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"charged"
8"stomach"
9"tension"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences157
matches(empty)
88.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences157
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"decide"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions9
matches
0"You are not Eva, she said."
1"You have got thirty seconds, she said, stepping back."
2"You are living in a paper fortress, he murmured, his gaze sweeping over a diagram of warding sigils pinned above the rad…"
3"You kept secrets, she said."
4"I do not need a bodyguard, she said."
5"I did not tell you about Evan, he said quietly, because I was hunting the men who funded him."
6"You do not get to decide what keeps me safe, she whispered."
7"Start with the mark, she said."
8"It began in Marseille, he said, and the room narrowed to the sound of his voice, the steady rhythm of his words, the qui…"
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1434
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick2
Lane2
Rory10
French2
Lucien6
Moreau1
Edinburgh1
Shoreditch1
German1
Evan3
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung2
Golden1
Empress1
Wapping1
Triads1
Aurora1
Silas1
Marseille1
Ptolemy3
You10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Evan"
5"Yu-Fei"
6"Cheung"
7"Silas"
8"Ptolemy"
9"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Edinburgh"
3"Shoreditch"
4"London"
5"Wapping"
6"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a lifetime ago"
1"tasted like copper and rain"
2"not quite touching"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean35.9
std27.22
cv0.758
sampleLengths
034
15
294
341
414
521
685
715
878
922
1026
1133
123
133
1453
1523
16118
1715
1825
1982
2013
2146
226
2330
2455
2531
2632
2725
284
2920
3057
3139
3265
3312
3416
3552
3631
3764
386
3942
98.56% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences157
matches
0"was swept"
1"are built"
2"being said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs266
matches
0"was just remembering"
1"was hunting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences157
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount785
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.034394904458598725
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01019108280254777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean9.15
std6.79
cv0.743
sampleLengths
09
125
25
324
416
519
611
74
820
919
1022
116
128
134
149
154
164
177
1826
195
2023
218
2216
239
246
2517
265
277
289
299
3012
3119
3222
334
349
358
365
375
3813
397
408
413
423
436
443
4514
464
474
489
4910
38.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.31210191082802546
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount72
totalSentences148
matches
0"He filled the narrow frame"
1"He had not changed."
2"You are not Eva, she"
3"Her voice came out steadier"
4"His French accent wrapped around"
5"He did not smile."
6"She should shut the door."
7"She should throw the deadbolts,"
8"You have got thirty seconds,"
9"He crossed the threshold with"
10"You are living in a"
11"It is Eva's place."
12"I am just housesitting while"
13"He turned to her then."
14"I heard you were back"
15"I never left."
16"You left me."
17"She focused on the knot"
18"We had an arrangement."
19"You needed a runner who"
ratio0.486
51.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences148
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien stood on the landing."
3"He filled the narrow frame"
4"Platinum blond hair was swept"
5"The ivory head of his"
6"He had not changed."
7"Ptolemy wound himself around Rory's"
8"You are not Eva, she"
9"Her voice came out steadier"
10"An astute observation, cherie."
11"His French accent wrapped around"
12"He did not smile."
13"Rory's left hand tightened on"
14"The small crescent-shaped scar on"
15"She should shut the door."
16"She should throw the deadbolts,"
17"You have got thirty seconds,"
18"He crossed the threshold with"
19"The flat swallowed him whole."
ratio0.818
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences148
matches
0"If he was here, the"
1"Before I decide you are"
2"If you knew it was"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"One amber eye, one black, fixed on her with an intensity that made the cramped hallway feel suddenly airless."
1"Ptolemy wound himself around Rory's ankles, purring like a faulty engine, utterly oblivious to the fault line cracking open beneath her feet."
2"The small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist pulled tight against her skin, a pale souvenir from a childhood bicycle crash that felt like a lifetime ago."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4723%