Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78C6E16DFCT5SB7AHRMES0

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.008456
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through the ancient oak ring ended in a sudden drop of temperature. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter. The grass beneath her boots felt too soft, springing back with the weight of deep summer soil despite the late October chill. Wildflowers carpeted the ground. Bluebells. Foxgloves. White nightshade. All blooming out of season. She checked her watch. The second hand twitched, then stopped. She didn’t bother resetting it. She dropped her paper takeout bag into the loam and stepped fully into the clearing. The Heartstone hung heavy against her sternum, the crimson gem catching the weak moonlight. It had been warm in the restaurant back room. Now it burned. The air smelled of damp earth and crushed mint. Aurora dragged her gloved fingers through the moss clinging to the first standing stone. The wood felt slick, almost oily. Silver sap coated the leather. It pulsed in time with the pendant. She wiped it on her pants. A branch cracked to her left. She turned. Nothing but tall grass swaying in a wind she couldn’t feel. The movement smoothed out too quickly, like a hand pressing down a sheet. She frowned. Her left wrist throbbed. The crescent scar ached with a familiar heat. She pressed her thumb against the cut in her skin. Show yourself. The words felt flat in the dense air. A reply came from directly behind her right shoulder. Not a voice. A mimicry of her own tone, layered over dry leaves scraping stone. Rory. She spun. The clearing stood empty. The oak stones formed a perfect dome overhead, blocking the sky. The wildflowers leaned inward, faces turned toward the center. I came for the key. Yu-Fei handed me a dumpling carton with an iron key taped to the cardboard. The address pointed here. To the pocket. To the grove. Evan is dirt. Eva is a rumor. The stone remembers. You don’t breathe. You’re borrowing air. We borrow everything here. Time. Light. Breath. We keep it. The Heartstone flared. Crimson light seeped through the fabric of her shirt. Heat washed her skin. She unbuttoned two buttons and let the pendant rest against her collarbone. The gem was warm. Steady. A compass pointing down. What portaling leads here? The iron key wasn’t on any map. The map ends where the stones begin. The door opens when the stone sings. Your blood sings. A shape parted the shadows. Too tall. Too thin. Limbs jointed in places they shouldn’t be. It stepped into a sliver of moonlight. The skin held the texture of bark, veined with silver. No face. Just a hollow where eyes should sit, and a mouth that split vertically. You want the pendant. I keep my deliveries. Always sign for receipt. I don’t leave things behind. Nothing leaves. Nothing stays. You run. You run until the stones eat your footprints. You run until the flowers drink your sweat. You run until the hour stretches into days. The watch stops because the ground swallows time. Look at your shoe. She glanced down. The laces had frayed into silver threads. The leather had softened to raw hide. Frost tracked across the silver sap on the grass. Her breath plumed white. She slowed. I run because the alternative is worse. Evan breaks things. He doesn’t understand how to put them back. I break patterns. I find the seams. Seams tear. You tear yourself. Cardiff rain washes your father’s lectures down the gutters. Welsh textbooks rot in your mother’s study. You trade law for cardboard boxes and grease stains. You hide above a bar. You listen to footsteps. You hear them now. A chorus of whispers rose from the grass. Dozens of voices. All female. All sounding like her. Stay. Stay. Stay. The words overlapped, warping into each other until they formed a low hum. The wildflowers trembled. Petals unfurled further, revealing dark centers that pulsed with the same crimson light as the gem. I’m not hiding. I’m tracking. The key led to the grove. The stone points to the monolith. I drop it off. I walk away. That’s the job. The grove does not take jobs. The grove takes memories. Heavy things. Sharp things. You carry your father’s courtroom cadence in your throat. You carry your mother’s chalk dust in your lungs. You carry Evan’s voice in your sleep. The stone tastes it. The stone wants the weight. It tastes copper. Mint. Cheap cigars. Not weight. It tastes your pulse. It wants the rhythm. Give it to the dark. Sleep. Wake in the other place. I keep what’s mine. Nothing is yours here. The creatures slithered from the edges of the clearing. Three. Four. No faces. Just hollows and vertical splits. They moved like a school of fish, turning in perfect unison. The grass parted around them. The wildflowers bowed. Time stutters here. You step forward, you step back. You reach the stone, you retreat to the entrance. You loop until the sap eats your boots. You loop until the moss fills your mouth. You loop until you forget your name. I remember my scar. I remember the key. I remember the stone’s heat. I count steps. One. Two. Three. I walk straight. I don’t loop. You count in human time. The grove counts in hunger. Count again. She stepped over the threshold of shadow the nearest creature cast. Her boot pressed against damp soil. The grass wrapped around her ankles. Not binding. Holding. Pulling her off balance. She shifted her weight. Leaned forward. Pushed one foot through the tangled stems. Let the other follow. The grass sighed. Released it. Let her take another step. The Heartstone flared again. Brighter this time. The crimson light hit the leading creature’s face and fractured the air. Where the gem’s glow touched the bark-like skin, the texture rippled. Veins darkened. The thing recoiled. Stumbled back. Leaves crunched under its weight. It burns. It burns the bridge. The voice fractured, splitting into two tones, then three. Good. Bridges burn. Doors open. I don’t need your permission to deliver. You need your pulse to breathe. The creatures closed the distance. The air grew thick. Heavy. Hard to push through like walking in deep water. The whispers became chants. A rhythm. Slow. Deliberate. Synced with the throbbing in her chest. Give it. Sleep. Wake in the other place. Wake in the other place. Wake in the other place. The heart of the center monolith pulsed. A seam split open down the vertical grain. Not wood. Something beneath. Dark. Wet. Reflective. The crimson light from her pendant shot toward the opening like a magnet. The seam widened. Inches. A shadow moved inside. Not human. Not animal. Something that had never seen the sun. Something that had been waiting. The pendant yanked hard against her shirt. A tug. A demand. Aurora’s breath caught. She didn’t let go of the stone. She pressed her thumb against the scar. Closed her eyes. Listened to the chant. Listened to the wet sigh from the opening. Listened to the grass wrap tighter around her ankles. The chant stopped. A single voice spoke, clear as glass, right beside her ear. Open your eyes, Rory.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"weight"
count5
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"fractured"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"throbbed"
4"familiar"
5"perfect"
6"footsteps"
7"trembled"
8"pulse"
9"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences239
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"listen"
2"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences239
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1191
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1191
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
October1
Heartstone3
Evan3
Rory2
Aurora3
You22
Stay3
Wake4
Listened3
persons
0"October"
1"Heartstone"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"Aurora"
5"You"
places(empty)
globalScore0.576
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1191
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences239
matches
0"centers that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.03
std23.8
cv0.699
sampleLengths
0110
147
256
310
425
526
629
710
86
910
1037
1111
1217
1348
1417
1542
1632
1725
1843
1952
2027
2148
228
2319
244
2582
2625
2712
2857
2942
3015
3112
3258
3359
3470
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences239
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs235
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1192
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02181208053691275
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0050335570469798654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences239
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences239
mean4.98
std3.47
cv0.696
sampleLengths
014
15
222
34
41
51
62
75
84
96
105
1115
1214
139
143
159
1614
176
185
197
206
216
222
2311
2413
252
264
278
2810
292
308
319
323
3312
341
352
364
3711
389
395
4014
414
423
433
443
454
463
473
483
494
39.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats49
diversityRatio0.3598326359832636
totalSentences239
uniqueOpeners86
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences175
matches
0"All blooming out of season."
1"Just a hollow where eyes"
2"Always sign for receipt."
3"All sounding like her."
4"Just hollows and vertical splits."
ratio0.029
73.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences175
matches
0"She checked her watch."
1"She didn’t bother resetting it."
2"She dropped her paper takeout"
3"It had been warm in"
4"It pulsed in time with"
5"She wiped it on her"
6"Her left wrist throbbed."
7"She pressed her thumb against"
8"I came for the key."
9"You don’t breathe."
10"You’re borrowing air."
11"We borrow everything here."
12"We keep it."
13"She unbuttoned two buttons and"
14"Your blood sings."
15"It stepped into a sliver"
16"You want the pendant."
17"I keep my deliveries."
18"I don’t leave things behind."
19"You run until the stones"
ratio0.366
48.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences175
matches
0"The path through the ancient"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter."
2"The grass beneath her boots"
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground."
4"She checked her watch."
5"The second hand twitched, then"
6"She didn’t bother resetting it."
7"She dropped her paper takeout"
8"The Heartstone hung heavy against"
9"It had been warm in"
10"The air smelled of damp"
11"Aurora dragged her gloved fingers"
12"The wood felt slick, almost"
13"It pulsed in time with"
14"She wiped it on her"
15"A branch cracked to her"
16"Nothing but tall grass swaying"
17"The movement smoothed out too"
18"Her left wrist throbbed."
19"The crescent scar ached with"
ratio0.823
85.71% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences175
matches
0"Now it burned."
1"To the pocket."
2"To the grove."
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.6248%