Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78CCNQVKKC5RAR48H2MPCZ

Run Details

Duration:
37.3s
Cost:
$0.008925
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Iron yielded with a heavy click. The final deadbolt slid back. Rory turned the handle, pushed the frame, and stopped. Rain darkened the collar of his charcoal suit. Plaits of platinum blond hair clung to his forehead beneath an umbrella he hadn’t bothered to close. He leaned on an ivory-handled cane, knuckles white around the grip. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers, one band of amber cutting through the gloom, the other a void of black. You kept the third lock. Safety first. After everything we’ve survived. Exactly. She reached for the doorframe, ready to swing it shut. His boot shifted against the threshold. The brass kickplate groaned. She left it open a fraction. Ptolemy emerged from behind a stack of leather-bound journals near the hallway radiator. The tabby stretched, yawned, and wound himself around polished Oxford shoes. He still likes you. He likes warm radiators and canned salmon. Don’t anthropomorphize my parasite. Your parasite. I let him borrow the couch. Lucien stepped inside. The flat swallowed him. Books piled on every available surface, margins annotated in tight, frantic script. Yellowed scrolls leaned against a warped bookshelf. The air smelled of cardamom and old paper. Rainwater dripped from his sleeves onto scuffed floorboards. You moved. His gaze tracked over the clutter, lingering on a half-empty mug of cold tea balanced on a stack of property law textbooks. I relocated. You’re tracking rain on my floor. I walked past three alleys to find this door. I’ll watch my step. He angled his cane toward the hallway wall. The ivory handle clicked against the plaster. Rory crossed her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the dim hallway light. How did you find me? Information travels faster than post. By paying. Always. She closed the door. The deadbolts engaged in succession. Heavy, deliberate movements. When she turned back, he stood in the center of the room, water pooling around his shoes. The charcoal suit fit him like armor. Sharp shoulders. Tailored lines. He looked exactly like the man who had walked out of her life with half a promise and a door left swinging. Why are you here, Lucien? To see if you still drink your tea black. That’s not what you came for. It’s usually what I start with. He set the cane against the wall. His fingers brushed the wood, then released it. The movement drew attention to the long line of his arms, the quiet tension in his posture. She remembered the weight of him against the headboard. The way he traced the scar on her wrist with a thumb calloused from a swordfight. The way he disappeared before sunrise. You left. I departed. You vanished. I protected. From you. Everything. The word hung in the cramped space. Ptolemy leaped onto the low table, knocking a brass paperweight onto a stack of receipts. Nothing broke. The cat blinked slowly. Rory walked to the kitchen counter. She filled a glass from the tap, set it down. Water rippled. She didn’t drink. She stared at the reflection in the window above the sink. Brick Lane traffic blurred past. A double-decker hissed over wet tarmac. You’re still wearing the suit. Still wearing the habit of arriving prepared. Still hiding behind the polish. He exhaled, short and sharp. The heterochromatic eyes darkened. I didn’t come to trade barbs. Too late. Rory. She turned. His voice dropped half an octave. The nickname landed like a stone in still water. She kept her distance. The floorboards creaked under her weight. Say it. I need a file. From your old firm. Case notes. Dropped charges. Redacted portions. You’re a fixer. You steal what you need. I asked. You declined. You lied to me to get access. I maneuvered. Same translation, different accent. He ran a hand through his damp hair. The gesture stripped away the immaculate facade. A crack in the marble. She noticed the tired line beneath his eyes. The way his fingers trembled slightly when he touched the cane handle. Half-demon blood ran thin when the pressure mounted. She remembered the fever in his chest. The way he masked it with dry wit and tailored fabrics. You’re running out of time. Running out of patience for riddles. You’re running out of options. I’m running out of excuses. The silence stretched. Cardamom seeped from the curry kitchen below. The radiator clicked. Ptolemy stepped down, padded to the hallway, and vanished. Why did you really come? Because you’re still the only person who looks at me and sees the part I didn’t ask for. Because I still know how to read the silence between your words. She took a step forward. The water in the glass shivered. He didn’t retreat. The space between them narrowed to breath and rain. The attraction hit like a physical force, sharp and immediate. She remembered the bruise on her shoulder from his grip. The way he steadied her when the city closed in. The way he walked away when it mattered. You broke my wrists in a dream for a month. I stopped sleeping. I stopped trusting. I broke you to keep you. You broke yourself. The geometry of survival rarely aligns with sentiment. She laughed, cold and brittle. Sentiment. You don’t get to file that word under your umbrella. I stopped carrying it the day you stopped answering. Because you stopped showing up. Because Avaros doesn’t negotiate with ghosts. So I became one? I became what was necessary. He stepped closer. The scent of rain and dark citrus wrapped around her. His hand hovered near her waist, then dropped. The restraint cost her throat. She watched the micro-tremor in his jaw. The way his amber eye tracked her mouth, the way the black eye fixed on her scar. Say you regret it. I calculated the outcome. I asked for a confession. I don’t deal in admissions that change nothing. Everything changes. Nothing changes. She reached out. Her fingers brushed the lapel of his suit. The fabric held moisture cold enough to bite. She traced the line of his collarbone through the wool. His breath hitched. The room contracted. Books, scrolls, the clutter of a year spent surviving, dissolved into the space between their chests. You still taste like expensive gin and bad decisions. You still sound like you’re drafting a contract. I’m tired of drafting. So am I. His hand closed over hers at the waist. The heat seeped through the layers. The scar on her wrist pressed against his thumb. He didn’t pull back. He didn’t push forward. He stood in the wreckage of what they’d left, waiting for the next move. The file. Tomorrow. You’re not staying. I’m here. She released him. The loss registered as a drop in temperature. He straightened. The cane caught on the edge of a rug. He corrected his balance. The charcoal suit absorbed the light. The flat held its breath. Tell me you left something unsaid. I left everything. Then say it now. He looked at the door. Then back at her. The heterochromatic eyes didn’t blink. The air pressed heavy. Rain hammered the window. The curry house below rang an order bell. Nothing moved. I’m here. She turned away. I’m here. The words followed her into the kitchen. The tap ran. Water filled a glass. She set it down. The reflection showed a woman with straight black hair and bright blue eyes. The scar on her wrist caught the light. The flat waited. The door stayed closed. The cane remained against the wall.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:39:54.56Z" 4/27/2026, 10:39:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
88.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1255
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"facade"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"tension"
2"weight"
3"traced"
4"facade"
5"marble"
6"trembled"
7"silence"
8"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences206
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1255
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1255
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Oxford1
Lucien2
Lane1
Avaros1
Rory4
You18
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Avaros"
2"Rory"
3"You"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.783
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1255
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"file that word"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean13.21
std16.75
cv1.268
sampleLengths
020
156
25
32
44
51
626
724
84
911
102
116
1242
1324
148
1513
1631
175
185
192
201
2162
225
239
246
256
2663
272
282
292
302
312
321
3328
3443
355
367
375
3815
392
401
4127
422
4314
448
454
467
472
484
4966
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs253
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1260
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.025396825396825397
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006349206349206349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean6.09
std4.02
cv0.659
sampleLengths
06
15
29
38
417
511
620
75
82
94
101
1110
126
134
146
1513
1611
174
187
194
202
216
223
234
2412
257
268
278
282
2922
302
316
329
334
348
357
364
3712
385
395
402
411
424
435
443
4517
467
472
482
4922
37.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2669902912621359
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners55
78.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences169
matches
0"Still wearing the habit of"
1"Still hiding behind the polish."
2"Then say it now."
3"Then back at her."
ratio0.024
44.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences169
matches
0"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
1"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
2"You kept the third lock."
3"She reached for the doorframe,"
4"His boot shifted against the"
5"She left it open a"
6"He still likes you."
7"He likes warm radiators and"
8"I let him borrow the"
9"His gaze tracked over the"
10"You’re tracking rain on my"
11"I walked past three alleys"
12"I’ll watch my step."
13"He angled his cane toward"
14"She closed the door."
15"He looked exactly like the"
16"It’s usually what I start"
17"He set the cane against"
18"His fingers brushed the wood,"
19"She remembered the weight of"
ratio0.438
39.88% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount142
totalSentences169
matches
0"Iron yielded with a heavy"
1"The final deadbolt slid back."
2"Rory turned the handle, pushed"
3"Rain darkened the collar of"
4"Plaits of platinum blond hair"
5"He leaned on an ivory-handled"
6"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
7"You kept the third lock."
8"She reached for the doorframe,"
9"His boot shifted against the"
10"The brass kickplate groaned."
11"She left it open a"
12"Ptolemy emerged from behind a"
13"The tabby stretched, yawned, and"
14"He still likes you."
15"He likes warm radiators and"
16"I let him borrow the"
17"Lucien stepped inside."
18"The flat swallowed him."
19"Books piled on every available"
ratio0.84
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences169
matches
0"To see if you still"
1"Because you’re still the only"
2"Because I still know how"
3"Because you stopped showing up."
4"Because Avaros doesn’t negotiate with"
ratio0.03
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.7082%