Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78MA0H58HMRN34KWXQDKZ9

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Duration:
3m 16s
Cost:
$0.044923
Provider:
Alibaba

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic thunk. Rory pulled the door open, ready to tell Eva she had forgotten her keys again, and froze. The narrow stairwell smelled of cumin and frying oil from the curry house below, but the man on the welcome mat brought his own atmosphere. Bergamot, cold rain, and the faint, ozone-sharp trace of something sulfurous that always clung to him like a second skin. Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the London drizzle beading on his shoulders. His platinum hair was slicked back, severe and perfect. One amber eye, one black. Both locked on her face as if he had been starving for the sight of it. Rory's fingers tightened on the painted wood. The small crescent scar on her left wrist pulled tight as her pulse jumped. She had not seen him in eight months. Not since the night in Southwark when he had chosen a contract over her, when the space between them had fractured into something sharp and unbridgeable. She had told herself she was done looking over her shoulder for him. She had taken a delivery route for the Golden Empress, rented a room above Silas' bar, and learned to sleep with a knife under her pillow. Apparently, her body had not received the memo. Her breath hitched, traitorous and shallow. Rory, he said. His voice was low, the French consonants polished smooth, carrying that quiet cadence she remembered too well. He did not move to step inside. He never did without invitation. Old rules. Or maybe just caution. You are at the wrong address, she said, keeping her tone flat. Cool-headed. She could do cool-headed. It was what kept her alive when Cardiff fell apart, when Evan's shadow grew too long, when she fled to London with nothing but a duffel bag and a phone number. Eva lives here. I am just watching the cat. I know. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then lifted again, slow and deliberate. May I come in? Ptolemy wound around her ankles, tail high, entirely unbothered by the half-demon on the threshold. Rory stepped back, because keeping him in the damp stairwell felt more intimate than letting him into the clutter. The flat swallowed him instantly. Books colonized every surface. Scrolls bled off the coffee table onto the frayed rug. Research notes papered the walls like frantic wallpaper, held up by masking tape and desperation. Lucien navigated the maze with practiced grace, his ivory-handled cane tapping softly against the floorboards. He did not need it to walk. She knew exactly what lived inside it. She also knew the precise weight of it in his grip, the way he had once pressed it against her hip to steer her through a crowded market, the casual possession of it that had made her stomach flip. He stopped beside the window, rain streaking the glass behind him. The amber eye caught the dull London light. The black one drank it. You changed your number, he said. I changed a lot of things. She crossed her arms, felt the scar press into her skin. What do you want, Lucien? To talk. We tried that. It ended with you walking away while I bled on a warehouse floor. The words came out sharper than she intended. She had not meant to lead with the hurt. But it was there, raw and pulsing, wrapped around the memory of his back retreating into the fog, his voice telling her it was safer this way. Safer for who, he had never clarified. Lucien's jaw tightened. A muscle feathered near his temple. He set the cane against a stack of grimoires and unbuttoned his suit jacket. The movement was deliberate, slow. I did not walk away from you, he said quietly. I walked away from what I was becoming in that moment. Avaros does not forgive hesitation. My father's blood was singing. If I had stayed, I would have torn that room apart. And you would have been in the center of it. Rory swallowed. The explanation landed like a stone in still water. Ripples spread outward, rearranging things she had cemented in place. She had built a narrative out of his absence. It was easier that way. Easier to hate him than to wonder if he had been protecting her from himself. You could have said that, she whispered. I was not fluent in mercy then. He stepped closer. The space between them shrank to something dangerous. I am trying to learn. Ptolemy leapt onto the armchair and began kneading a pile of loose transcripts. The scratch of claws on paper filled the silence. Rory did not move. Lucien did not either. He stood close enough that she could see the fine tailoring of his collar, the pulse beating steady at his throat. He smelled like winter and expensive soap and the faint, electric heat that always followed him when his demon side stirred. Her fingers itched to touch him. To press her palm flat against his chest and feel if his heart hammered the same erratic rhythm as hers. Five foot eleven of controlled tension, leaning into her five foot six of stubborn restraint. The height difference had always made her feel strangely sheltered. She hated that she remembered it. Why now? she asked. Her voice barely cleared her throat. Because I found the man who hired Evan. The name landed like a spark on dry tinder. Rory flinched. Lucien's hand lifted, stopped halfway, then fell back to his side. I did not come to reopen old wounds. I came to tell you it is finished. He will not look for you again. No one will. I made certain of it. In four languages, if necessary. The air left her lungs in a slow, shaky exhale. Evan. The reason she had fled Cardiff. The reason she had learned to check locks three times and sleep with one eye open. The reason she had let Lucien in, desperate for something solid, only to watch him leave when she needed him most. Or so she had thought. You did that for me? I did it because I could not sleep. His voice dropped, roughening at the edges. Because every night I closed my eyes and saw you packing a bag with trembling hands. Because I told myself distance was a kindness, and it was only cowardice. I am a fixer, Rory. I broker information. I trade in secrets and leverage. But I could not fix the one thing that actually mattered. I could not fix myself without losing you first. He closed the final step between them. His hand rose again, slower this time, giving her every chance to pull away. She did not. His knuckles brushed her jaw, feather-light, tracing the line she had turned away from him eight months ago. The touch was warm. Grounding. Her breath caught. The cool-headed strategist in her screamed to step back, to guard the soft places, to remember how it felt to wake up alone in a room that still smelled like him. But the woman who had memorized the cadence of his footsteps in the dark leaned in. I hated you, she said. The words trembled. I hated you for leaving. I hated myself for wanting you to stay. I know. His thumb swept over her cheekbone, catching the damp she had not realized had gathered there. His gaze dipped to her eyes, that bright blue he had once told him looked like fractured glass catching sunlight. I deserved it. I still do. But I am here now. Not as a broker. Not as a man running from his own blood. Just as someone who has spent two hundred and forty nights learning how to say he was wrong. A laugh broke out of her, wet and fractured. You counted. I count everything that matters. His forehead dipped toward hers. Not quite touching. Leaving the choice in her hands. Always leaving the choice. That was the thing she had forgotten about him. The restraint. The terrible, aching respect he had for her boundaries, even when it cost him. She lifted her hand. Pressed her palm to his chest. The wool of his suit was soft. Beneath it, his heart beat fast and hard against her fingers. The rhythm undid her. She rose on her toes and closed the distance. His mouth met hers with a careful hunger, as if he were handling something precious and long broken. She tasted bergamot and rain and the faint, metallic tang of something otherworldly. His hand slid to the back of her neck, fingers tangling in her straight black hair, holding her like he was afraid she would vanish. She gripped his lapels, pulling him closer, anchoring him to her. The hurt did not disappear. It would not. But it shifted, making room for something warmer, something that had been waiting in the dark for months to be let back in. Ptolemy meowed, indignant at being ignored, and knocked a scroll off the table. It unfurled across the floor with a dry whisper. Neither of them looked away. When they finally broke apart, Lucien's breath was uneven. His heterochromatic eyes were dark, the amber nearly swallowed by gold. Stay, he murmured against her mouth. Not a demand. A question. I am not going anywhere, she said. And for the first time in eight months, she believed it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1577
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1577
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"fractured"
count3
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"otherworldly"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"pulse"
2"fractured"
3"navigated"
4"weight"
5"stomach"
6"silence"
7"electric"
8"tension"
9"tracing"
10"footsteps"
11"trembled"
12"otherworldly"
13"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences171
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences171
filterMatches
0"know"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences171
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1577
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"You are at the wrong address, she said, keeping her tone flat."
2"You changed your number, he said."
3"I did not walk away from you, he said quietly."
4"You could have said that, she whispered."
5"I hated you, she said."
6"Stay, he murmured against her mouth."
7"I am not going anywhere, she said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1565
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
London3
Southwark1
Golden1
Empress1
Apparently1
French1
Cardiff2
Evan3
Lucien8
Rory8
You5
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Empress"
3"Evan"
4"Lucien"
5"Rory"
6"You"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Southwark"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
58.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"Apparently, her body had not r"
1"smelled like winter and expensive soap and"
2"smelled like him"
3"looked like fractured glass catching sunl"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1577
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences171
matches
0"torn that room"
1"said that, she"
2"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean56.32
std37.83
cv0.672
sampleLengths
0120
1108
238
357
418
5136
630
722
82
967
1080
1157
1223
13129
1410
1566
1664
1778
1897
1921
2080
2111
2248
2341
2498
2527
2631
2718
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences171
matches
0"was slicked"
1"being ignored"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs291
matches
0"was singing"
1"were handling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences171
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount203
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, ozone-sharp trace"
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.019704433497536946
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences171
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences171
mean9.22
std6.66
cv0.722
sampleLengths
010
117
225
320
418
59
65
716
87
914
108
1126
1213
1326
148
156
163
1717
187
195
202
214
2212
231
244
2531
263
276
282
2912
304
3115
3219
335
344
3510
3615
3715
387
397
4039
4111
428
435
446
456
4611
475
482
493
39.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.30409356725146197
totalSentences171
uniqueOpeners52
42.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences157
matches
0"Apparently, her body had not"
1"Always leaving the choice."
ratio0.013
34.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences157
matches
0"His platinum hair was slicked"
1"She had not seen him"
2"She had told herself she"
3"She had taken a delivery"
4"Her breath hitched, traitorous and"
5"His voice was low, the"
6"He did not move to"
7"He never did without invitation."
8"You are at the wrong"
9"She could do cool-headed."
10"It was what kept her"
11"I am just watching the"
12"His gaze dropped to her"
13"He did not need it"
14"She knew exactly what lived"
15"She also knew the precise"
16"He stopped beside the window,"
17"You changed your number, he"
18"I changed a lot of"
19"She crossed her arms, felt"
ratio0.465
74.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences157
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"The narrow stairwell smelled of"
3"Bergamot, cold rain, and the"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe,"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"Both locked on her face"
7"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
8"The small crescent scar on"
9"She had not seen him"
10"She had told herself she"
11"She had taken a delivery"
12"Her breath hitched, traitorous and"
13"Rory, he said."
14"His voice was low, the"
15"He did not move to"
16"He never did without invitation."
17"You are at the wrong"
18"She could do cool-headed."
19"It was what kept her"
ratio0.771
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences157
matches
0"If I had stayed, I"
1"To press her palm flat"
2"Because I found the man"
3"Because every night I closed"
4"Because I told myself distance"
5"Just as someone who has"
ratio0.038
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She also knew the precise weight of it in his grip, the way he had once pressed it against her hip to steer her through a crowded market, the casual possession …"
1"But it was there, raw and pulsing, wrapped around the memory of his back retreating into the fog, his voice telling her it was safer this way."
2"His mouth met hers with a careful hunger, as if he were handling something precious and long broken."
3"But it shifted, making room for something warmer, something that had been waiting in the dark for months to be let back in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.0374%