Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78MX2KCGACZWQQ9K60MXRW

Run Details

Duration:
2m 55s
Cost:
$0.037623
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park stood shut behind her. Rory slipped through the gap in the hedgerow where the path dissolved into bracken and damp soil. The city hum faded. Moonlight caught the ridge of the ancient oak standing stones. They arched like bent vertebrae over the threshold. Wildflowers carpeted the ground beyond the boundary. Poppies. Foxgloves. Bluebells. All of them open in the dark. All of them breathing out a scent that sat too heavy on the tongue. Sweet. Copper underneath. She pressed two fingers to the silver chain at her throat. The deep crimson gem rested against her collarbone. It held a temperature that did not belong to the night. I followed the pull. I followed it straight to the tree line. Do not waste the trip. She stepped between the oaks. The air thickened. Her boots sank into loam that gave way like wet sponge. The temperature dropped. Her breath plumed white and hung in the air a second too long. The wildflowers turned their heads. Not a breeze. The stems pivoted on their own axis. Petals faced her boots. The pendant warmed. A steady throb against her skin. Hel portal. Or something bleeding into it. The note said the grove would answer. The note lied about the quiet. She moved deeper. The clearing opened into a bowl of shadow and pale bloom. Time dragged at her ankles. Her wristwatch ticked. The second hand stuttered. It jumped backward. It lunged forward. She unclasped the strap and let the watch fall into the flowers. The glass face cracked. The ticking stopped. The silence that followed carried weight. Something clicked to her left. Wet. Precise. Like a tongue peeling off a palate. She turned her head. The dark between two birch trunks held nothing. The click repeated. Closer. Behind her right shoulder this time. You want me to run. You picked the wrong delivery girl. She kept walking. The pendant pulsed faster. Heat seeped through her shirt. The crimson stone threw a faint inner glow against her sternum. The light caught the edges of the wildflowers. Veins in the petals stood out like cracked glass. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled. Old nerve endings waking. A shadow detached from the base of a hawthorn. It slid along the ground. It kept pace with her stride. She stopped. The shadow stopped. She took a step back. The shadow mirrored the motion. It held no shape. It held density. The grass flattened beneath it. I see you. I see the way you track my boots. Show your face or stay in the dirt. The air answered with a low rasp. Dry leaves skittered across stone. No wind moved the branches. The rasp came again. It matched the rhythm of her breathing. It stole the space between her inhales. She touched the pendant. The gem burned now. Not a warning. A beacon. The silver chain bit into her neck. She unhooked the clasp and let the stone rest in her palm. The crimson glow spilled over her fingers. It painted the surrounding blooms in false dawn. The light reached the standing stones at the edge of the clearing. The bark there wept sap. The resin ran black. It pooled in the grooves of the carvings. You brought me here for a reason. The benefactor left coordinates. The pendant leads to the threshold. I stand on it. A branch snapped. High up. The sound cracked through the canopy like a rifle shot. She looked up. The leaves hung still. The snap echoed again. Lower. To her right. Then directly behind her. The sequence formed a circle. The circle tightened. She pivoted. The wildflowers parted. A path opened through the blooms. The stems bent away from an invisible weight. The depression in the soil moved toward her. It stopped three paces out. The earth compressed. Footprints formed. Bare. Long toes. Heels dug deep. The prints faced her. They did not continue. They just appeared. One after another. Closing the distance. I came for answers. I came because the flat above Silas' bar shakes when the underground runs late. I came because Evan taught me to listen for footsteps in the hall. These are not his. The pendant flared. The heat scorched her palm. She clenched her fingers around the stone. The glow bled through the gaps in her knuckles. The footprints halted. The air grew dense. She tasted iron. She tasted pollen. She tasted something old and stagnant, like water trapped in a sealed jar. A whisper brushed her ear. No words. Just friction. Skin on skin. The hair on her arms stood up. She swung her left hand out. Her knuckles met empty space. The whisper circled to her other side. It dragged across her shoulder blade. It left a trail of cold that sank through her jacket. You think silence frightens me. I grew up with raised voices and locked doors. I know the sound of a threat holding its breath. The wildflowers shivered. The tremor ran through the entire clearing. The blooms folded inward. Petals curled tight. The ground vibrated. A low hum rose from the soil. It matched the pulse in her palm. The pendant beat against her fingers. One. Two. Three. The rhythm synced with her heart. Then it overtook it. Her chest tightened. Her ribs ached. The hum climbed in pitch. It scraped against her teeth. She dropped to one knee. She pressed her free hand to the earth. The soil trembled. Roots shifted beneath the surface. They coiled. They uncoiled. They moved like muscle. The standing stones at the boundary groaned. Bark split. Sap ran faster. The black resin dripped onto the flowers. Where it landed, the petals turned grey. They crumbled to ash. You want the stone. You want the threshold open. You do not get to take it. The footprints lunged forward. The invisible weight closed the gap. The air displaced. It hit her face like a opened oven door. Cold. Dry. Empty. The whisper became a chorus. Not voices. Breath. Dozens of lungs drawing air at once. The sound wrapped around her skull. It pressed against her eardrums. It demanded space. She stood. She lifted the pendant. The crimson light flared. It cut through the dark. It painted the clearing in sharp angles and deep hollows. The light caught the edge of something tall. Just beyond the blooms. A silhouette. Thin. Jointed wrong. Shoulders sloped at impossible angles. It stood between two oaks. It did not move. It absorbed the glow. The light bent around it. The air warped. I see the shape. I see the way you fold the dark around your bones. Step into the light or stay a coward. The silhouette tilted its head. The movement cracked like dry timber. The chorus of breath stopped. The grove held still. The wildflowers remained folded. The standing stones wept. The pendant burned her palm. The heat climbed her wrist. It traced the crescent scar. The old tissue tightened. The skin pulled. She stepped forward. The soil gave way. Her boot sank to the ankle. She wrenched it free. Mud clung to the leather. The silhouette did not retreat. It leaned in. The space between them shrank. The air grew thick enough to chew. The crimson glow pulsed. The light caught the edge of a hand. Fingers too long. Knuckles reversed. The hand rested against the bark of an oak. The wood blackened under the touch. You followed the pendant. You followed me. We stand on the same ground now. A sound rose from the tree line. Not a click. Not a whisper. A wet drag. Something heavy pulled across roots. It came from behind the silhouette. Then from the left. Then from the right. The dragging multiplied. It formed a ring. The ring tightened. The wildflowers crushed flat. Stems snapped. Sap mixed with loam. The smell of copper flooded the clearing. She tightened her grip on the chain. The silver links bit into her fingers. The crimson stone pulsed against her lifeline. The heat climbed her forearm. It reached her elbow. It locked her muscles. She refused to drop it. She refused to step back. I came for the threshold. I came because the city eats people who look away. I look straight at you. The silhouette straightened. The reversed knuckles flexed. The long fingers peeled away from the bark. The wood cracked. Splinters fell. The dragging sounds stopped. The chorus of breath returned. It filled the clearing. It pressed against her ribs. It vibrated in her throat. The pendant flared white at the edges. The crimson core burned through her palm. The light threw long shadows across the standing stones. The shadows moved. They detached from the trunks. They slid into the open. They formed a circle around her boots. She stood in the centre. The air locked around her. The wildflowers lay dead. The standing stones wept black resin. The silhouette stepped past the tree line. The long fingers curled. The breath chorus dropped to a single note. The pendant pulsed once. Hard. The heat seared her skin. The certainty settled in her chest. Heavy. Absolute. She was not alone.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:44:33.5Z" 4/27/2026, 10:44:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"pulsed"
count4
4
word"beacon"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count4
8
word"vibrated"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"beacon"
5"echoed"
6"footsteps"
7"whisper"
8"vibrated"
9"pulse"
10"trembled"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences304
filterMatches
0"see"
1"think"
2"know"
3"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences304
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1532
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1524
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Evan1
You9
persons
0"Evan"
1"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1532
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.56
std22.15
cv0.521
sampleLengths
083
130
217
354
49
520
657
714
822
911
1052
1147
1219
1335
1476
1521
1642
1760
1835
1950
2054
2124
2269
2359
2416
2554
2668
2723
2850
2974
3014
3162
3244
3320
3486
3561
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs290
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.017673048600883652
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014727540500736377
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences304
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences304
mean5.04
std2.72
cv0.539
sampleLengths
010
117
24
310
48
57
61
71
81
97
1014
111
122
1311
148
1511
164
178
185
195
203
2111
223
2313
245
253
267
274
283
296
302
315
327
336
343
3511
365
373
384
393
403
4112
424
433
446
455
461
471
487
494
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats86
diversityRatio0.23355263157894737
totalSentences304
uniqueOpeners71
63.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences264
matches
0"Then directly behind her."
1"Then it overtook it."
2"Just beyond the blooms."
3"Then from the left."
4"Then from the right."
ratio0.019
71.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount98
totalSentences264
matches
0"They arched like bent vertebrae"
1"She pressed two fingers to"
2"It held a temperature that"
3"I followed the pull."
4"I followed it straight to"
5"She stepped between the oaks."
6"Her boots sank into loam"
7"Her breath plumed white and"
8"She moved deeper."
9"Her wristwatch ticked."
10"It jumped backward."
11"It lunged forward."
12"She unclasped the strap and"
13"She turned her head."
14"You want me to run."
15"You picked the wrong delivery"
16"She kept walking."
17"It slid along the ground."
18"It kept pace with her"
19"She took a step back."
ratio0.371
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount240
totalSentences264
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory slipped through the gap"
2"The city hum faded."
3"Moonlight caught the ridge of"
4"They arched like bent vertebrae"
5"Wildflowers carpeted the ground beyond"
6"She pressed two fingers to"
7"The deep crimson gem rested"
8"It held a temperature that"
9"I followed the pull."
10"I followed it straight to"
11"She stepped between the oaks."
12"The air thickened."
13"Her boots sank into loam"
14"The temperature dropped."
15"Her breath plumed white and"
16"The wildflowers turned their heads."
17"The stems pivoted on their"
18"Petals faced her boots."
19"The pendant warmed."
ratio0.909
18.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences264
matches
0"To her right."
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"All of them breathing out a scent that sat too heavy on the tongue."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0746%