Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ78Q2KGFACWQ15WH0TA98EB

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.032959
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain bit into Aurora’s collarbone. She adjusted the Heartstone pendant beneath her jumper and pressed her palm against the ancient oak trunk. Bark flaked under her fingers. The standing stones rose from the Richmond earth like broken teeth, their surfaces furred with moss and lichen. Beyond them, the clearing waited. She checked her watch. The second hand stuttered, jumped backwards, then froze. Right on schedule. You led me out here for a reason. Show me the door. She stepped past the boundary line. The temperature dropped. Not a gradual chill, but a sudden vacuum that sucked the warmth from her lungs. Wildflowers carpeted the grass, their petals stark white and violet in the moonlight. They should have been dormant. They should have been dead. Instead, they swayed without wind. Rory unbuttoned her coat and let it hang loose. She kept her hands free. The pendant pulsed against her sternum. A slow, rhythmic heat. It matched a heartbeat that was not hers. I followed the warmth from Peckham to Richmond. You do not get to go cold now. She walked toward the centre of the grove. Grass whispered against her boots. The sound carried too far, echoing off trees that stood too close together. She counted her steps. Twelve. Thirteen. Fourteen. The geometry of the clearing refused to settle. The tree line curved inward, then stretched away, then snapped back to its original position. A branch cracked to her left. She turned. Nothing moved. The oaks stood rigid. The air hung thick and still. Then came the wet click. It sounded like a tongue peeling off a palate. It came from behind her right shoulder. She pivoted. The wildflowers bent in a perfect circle, as though something heavy had just risen from the soil. You want attention. You have it. She dropped to one knee and pressed her fingers into the earth. The soil felt warm. Damp. It yielded like flesh. She wiped her hand on her trousers and stood. The pendant glowed brighter. Crimson light bled through the fabric of her jumper. Another click. Closer. This one carried a vowel sound. A drawn-out exhale that shaped itself into something almost recognisable. Rory unclipped the torch from her belt but did not switch it on. Light would blind her. Darkness kept her pupils wide. She tracked the tree line. Shadows pooled between the trunks. One shadow detached itself. It slid sideways, parallel to her path, keeping pace. She stopped. The shadow stopped. She took a step back. The shadow mirrored her. You are terrible at hiding. The shadow rippled. The wildflowers around it flattened. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The sound crawled up her shins and settled in her teeth. She rolled her jaw. The hum shifted pitch. It answered her. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a steel lighter. She flicked the wheel. The flame caught. She held it out at arm’s length. The fire burned blue at the base, then yellow, then stretched into a thin, wavering line that pointed toward the centre of the grove. The air current did not match the wind. There was no wind. A draft pulls toward the threshold. I found it. She snapped the lighter shut and moved toward the flame’s direction. The grass grew taller. The stems brushed her thighs. Each step sank deeper. The ground felt spongy, breathing beneath her weight. She kept her shoulders square. She kept her breathing even. The pendant burned hotter. She welcomed the pain. It anchored her. Something brushed the back of her neck. She spun. Her hand chopped through empty air. The wildflowers behind her stood perfectly still. The crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed. She flexed her fingers. The sensation faded. She turned back around. Three figures stood at the edge of the clearing. They were not figures. They were absences. Patches of night that refused to reflect moonlight. They stood shoulder to shoulder. They did not breathe. They did not shift. They simply occupied space where space should not exist. You block the path. Move. The centre absence tilted. A sound emerged from it. Not a voice. A collection of friction and damp rot and grinding stone. It formed words anyway. Carter. Rory’s jaw tightened. She did not step back. She planted her boots wider. You know my name. Use it properly or swallow it. The absence on the right shuddered. Petals tore free from the wildflowers and drifted upward. They hung in the air, suspended. Time dragged. Her watch remained dead. The moon did not move. The grove held its breath. The pendant flared. Crimson light spilled over her chest and painted the grass in blood tones. The heat scorched her skin. She grabbed the chain and yanked it free from her jumper. The gemstone pulsed in her palm. It beat faster. It matched the rhythm of the grinding sound. You opened a Hel door in Richmond Park. Sloppy work. The centre absence stepped forward. The grass did not bend beneath it. The earth did not compress. It glided. The humming returned, louder, vibrating through her ribs. The wildflowers turned their faces toward the stone in her hand. They tracked it like sunflowers track dawn. Rory closed her fingers around the pendant. The heat bit into her palm. She raised her fist. You want it back. Come and take it. The absences fractured. They split into thinner strips of dark. The strips wove through the tree trunks. They circled her. The wet clicks multiplied. They came from above. From below. From inside her own ears. She kept her chin level. She tracked the movement by the disturbance in the flowers. The petals trembled. The stems bowed. The circle tightened. A branch snapped directly overhead. She sidestepped. Something heavy struck the earth where she had stood. Soil erupted. Clumps of dirt and torn roots scattered across her boots. She did not look down. She kept her eyes on the tree line. The absences reformed. They stood closer now. Five paces away. The air between them warped. Light bent around their edges. The grove smelled of ozone and wet copper. You circle like dogs. I am not running. The left absence lunged. It did not move through space. It simply arrived. Cold air slammed into her chest. She dropped her weight and rolled sideways. Her shoulder hit the earth. She came up on one knee. The pendant slipped from her grip. It landed in the grass. The crimson glow illuminated a patch of soil. The dirt parted. A fissure opened. Black water seeped from the crack. It reflected nothing. Rory scrambled forward and snatched the stone. The chain wrapped around her knuckles. She stood. The fissure widened. The black water spread. It touched the roots of the nearest oak. The bark blackened. The leaves curled and fell. They hit the ground with the sound of breaking glass. You bleed the soil. You poison the boundary. Stop it. The grinding noise sharpened. It became a scrape. A drag. A rhythm. The absences stepped in unison. Left. Right. Left. Right. The wildflowers died in their wake. Petals turned grey. Stems collapsed. The circle closed to three paces. The hum rattled her teeth. Her vision blurred at the edges. She blinked. The blur remained. It was not in her eyes. It was in the air. The grove itself warped. She jammed the pendant back against her chest and buttoned her coat over it. The heat spread through her ribs. It grounded her. She pulled a steel carabiner from her belt and clipped it to her waist loop. She threaded a length of paracord through it. She tied a slip knot. She kept her movements sharp. Deliberate. You want a fight. You get a boundary. She threw the loop toward the nearest oak. It caught on a low branch. She yanked. The cord went taut. She stepped back and dragged the line across the grass. The paracord sliced through the wildflowers. It left a clean trench. She walked the perimeter. She kept the line tight. She marked a circle around herself. The absences stopped at the trench. They did not cross. They pressed against the invisible line. The air buckled. The hum climbed into a whine. Rory dropped the cord and wiped her palms on her trousers. She stood straight. She met the centre absence. You stay outside. I hold the ground. The absence shuddered. The wet clicks stopped. The grove fell silent. The silence weighed more than the noise. It pressed against her eardrums. It filled her throat. She swallowed. The pendant beat against her sternum. Slow. Heavy. Deliberate. A hand emerged from the centre absence. It was not a hand. It was a collection of twigs and shadow and pale skin stretched too thin. Fingers uncurled. They pointed at her chest. At the stone beneath her coat. The wildflowers around the trench turned to ash. The soil cracked. The black water rose. It lapped at the paracord line. It did not cross. It waited. Rory planted her feet. She raised her chin. She kept her voice level. You came to the wrong grove.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"weight"
count2
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"fractured"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"stark"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"echoing"
6"perfect"
7"vibrated"
8"flicked"
9"wavering"
10"weight"
11"throbbed"
12"fractured"
13"trembled"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences282
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences282
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences282
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1527
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1527
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Heartstone1
Richmond3
Peckham1
Hel1
Park1
Right3
You16
Rory7
persons
0"Right"
1"You"
2"Rory"
places
0"Aurora"
1"Richmond"
2"Peckham"
3"Park"
globalScore0.976
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a tongue peeling off a palate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.655
wordCount1527
matches
0"Not a gradual chill, but a sudden vacuum"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences282
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean28.28
std22.52
cv0.796
sampleLengths
052
112
23
312
46
546
632
716
856
96
1014
1140
126
1343
1419
1559
165
1740
1861
199
2053
217
2234
239
2437
255
2626
271
2813
2910
3037
3149
3210
3345
3417
358
3659
375
3864
398
4071
4148
4210
4369
4457
458
4681
4719
487
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences282
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs301
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences282
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1528
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.01963350785340314
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0032722513089005235
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences282
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences282
mean5.41
std3.26
cv0.602
sampleLengths
07
117
25
318
45
54
68
73
88
94
106
113
1215
1313
145
155
165
179
185
196
204
218
228
238
248
255
2613
274
281
291
301
318
3215
336
342
352
364
376
385
399
407
412
4217
433
443
4512
464
471
484
499
30.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats54
diversityRatio0.20212765957446807
totalSentences282
uniqueOpeners57
40.82% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences245
matches
0"Instead, they swayed without wind."
1"Then came the wet click."
2"Light bent around their edges."
ratio0.012
35.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount113
totalSentences245
matches
0"She adjusted the Heartstone pendant"
1"She checked her watch."
2"You led me out here"
3"She stepped past the boundary"
4"They should have been dormant."
5"They should have been dead."
6"She kept her hands free."
7"It matched a heartbeat that"
8"I followed the warmth from"
9"You do not get to"
10"She walked toward the centre"
11"She counted her steps."
12"It sounded like a tongue"
13"It came from behind her"
14"You want attention."
15"You have it."
16"She dropped to one knee"
17"It yielded like flesh."
18"She wiped her hand on"
19"She tracked the tree line."
ratio0.461
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences245
matches
0"The silver chain bit into"
1"She adjusted the Heartstone pendant"
2"Bark flaked under her fingers."
3"The standing stones rose from"
4"She checked her watch."
5"The second hand stuttered, jumped"
6"You led me out here"
7"She stepped past the boundary"
8"The temperature dropped."
9"Wildflowers carpeted the grass, their"
10"They should have been dormant."
11"They should have been dead."
12"Rory unbuttoned her coat and"
13"She kept her hands free."
14"The pendant pulsed against her"
15"A slow, rhythmic heat."
16"It matched a heartbeat that"
17"I followed the warmth from"
18"You do not get to"
19"She walked toward the centre"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences245
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The wildflowers bent in a perfect circle, as though something heavy had just risen from the soil."
1"A drawn-out exhale that shaped itself into something almost recognisable."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4174%