| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 97.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1852 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1852 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "crystalline" | | 14 | "crystal" | | 15 | "churned" | | 16 | "churning" | | 17 | "shattered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 212 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 212 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1852 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1852 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae | 3 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like wind chimes caught in a storm" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1852 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 44.1 | | std | 28.05 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 90 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 82 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 71 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 81 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 66 | | 22 | 79 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 65 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 86 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 88 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 47 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 48 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 53 | | 40 | 52 | | 41 | 68 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 335 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 212 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1859 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "over smooth black pebbles." | | 1 | "heavier, pressing against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.017213555675094135 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0026896180742334587 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 212 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 212 | | mean | 8.74 | | std | 4.55 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 36.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 29 | | diversityRatio | 0.18396226415094338 | | totalSentences | 212 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.08% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "She unhooked the silver chain" | | 1 | "It throbbed in time with" | | 2 | "We cross now." | | 3 | "Their silhouette bled into the" | | 4 | "She blinked against a sky" | | 5 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 6 | "She wore a dress of" | | 7 | "She took a step forward." | | 8 | "She shifted her weight." | | 9 | "It snaps back if you" | | 10 | "Their voice carried on the" | | 11 | "She drew the Fae-forged blade" | | 12 | "She angled the dagger toward" | | 13 | "It hungers for the old" | | 14 | "Her hands remained clasped at" | | 15 | "She did not look back." | | 16 | "She adjusted the Heartstone against" | | 17 | "They dissolved before she could" | | 18 | "It shows what was, not" | | 19 | "It defied gravity without hurry," |
| | ratio | 0.317 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 195 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks stood in" | | 1 | "Bark peeled back in silver" | | 2 | "Rory pressed her palm against" | | 3 | "The rock hummed against her" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant resting against" | | 5 | "She unhooked the silver chain" | | 6 | "It throbbed in time with" | | 7 | "We cross now." | | 8 | "The boundary thins." | | 9 | "Nyx drifted past her shoulder." | | 10 | "Their silhouette bled into the" | | 11 | "Violet points of light ignited" | | 12 | "The shade stepped over the" | | 13 | "The air rippled around their" | | 14 | "The moment her boot cleared" | | 15 | "Warmth wrapped around her ribs," | | 16 | "The scent of crushed lavender" | | 17 | "She blinked against a sky" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "Bluebells braided with crimson orchids" |
| | ratio | 0.938 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "The rock hummed against her skin, a low frequency that travelled up her arm and settled in her teeth." | | 1 | "Bluebells braided with crimson orchids and star-shaped blossoms that glowed from within." | | 2 | "She wore a dress of undyed linen that moved without wind." | | 3 | "The stones felt warm through her soles, radiating a steady pulse that matched the gem at her throat." | | 4 | "The liquid clung to her skin, thick as syrup, then evaporated instantly, leaving a dusting of salt that smelled of ozone and burnt sugar." | | 5 | "The space between them shimmered, a heat haze that fractured the light into prismatic shards." | | 6 | "The water whispered louder, the sound forming words in a tongue that scraped against her molars." | | 7 | "The trees ahead bowed their branches, creating an archway of hanging green." | | 8 | "The branches brushed her shoulders, leaving trails of sticky sap that hardened instantly into glassy beads." | | 9 | "The purple light pooled in depressions, forming shallow mirrors that reflected nothing above." | | 10 | "The Fae blade hummed against her hip, a vibration that travelled through her thigh." | | 11 | "Nyx flowed past her, a ripple of dark that swallowed the purple light." | | 12 | "The metal turned opaque, then clear, revealing a depth that dropped into absolute black." | | 13 | "The wood shifted, benches rearranging themselves into a staircase that led straight to the dais." | | 14 | "The Fae blade vibrated against her hip, a steady tremor that travelled up her ribs." | | 15 | "The surface churned, throwing up droplets that hung in the air, each sphere containing a frozen image of a door marked with a single rune." | | 16 | "The metal sang, a high clear note that shattered the nearest sphere." | | 17 | "Water and light rained down, soaking her sleeve, burning cold against her skin." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |