Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79EFAGRYP96GAXJV64XCR5

Run Details

Duration:
45.0s
Cost:
$0.012207
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked back. Three heavy layers of metal yielded to the damp London chill and the sharp cumin smoke drifting up from the curry house below. Rory gripped the brass handle. Knuckles blanched. The security chain slid free with a metallic scrape. The door opened inward. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell. Charcoal wool brushed his shoulders. Platinum hair caught the flickering hallway bulb. One amber eye caught the light. The other absorbed it. He wore the same tailored precision she remembered. The same quiet menace. He held a leather folio against his ribs. Rain darkened his lapels. You look terrible. The words hung between them. He stepped inside without invitation. Polished shoes crossed the threshold onto warped floorboards. The door swung shut behind him. The deadbolts refused to bite. Your timing never improved. Rory held her posture straight. Her left wrist throbbed where the crescent scar caught the draft. She crossed her arms. The flat shrank. Books spilled from every surface. Research notes stacked against the window frame. A tabby cat with one ear torn at the tip leapt onto a reading desk. Ptolemy watched Lucien with unblinking green eyes. London rains. They follow. Lucien dropped the folio onto a cleared corner of the table. Papers scattered. Ink smudged against a map of the East End. He avoided her face. Fingers traced the edge of a ceramic mug. Cold tea sat untouched inside. You promised never to cross my street again. The memory landed solid. Three years of silence. Cardiff. The argument that split them in half. His hand against hers. The slammed car door. Her running. She kept her voice steady. The flat echoed with shared breathing. Promises fade. Circumstances do not. He finally turned. Gaze locked onto hers. Heterochromia pulled attention. One eye gold. One eye void. He moved past the table. Shoulders brushed a stack of leather-bound journals. Dust rose in the slanted light. Then tell me why you are standing in my kitchen. Rory stepped back. Boot caught the edge of a rug. She steadied herself against a bookshelf. Scrolls clinked together. Ptolemy yowled once. Sound bounced off the water-stained ceiling. Because they found my safehouse. Lucien set his palm flat against the table. Ivory handle of his cane gleamed in his grip. He leaned forward. Charcoal suit creased at the knees. Breath fogged in the chill air. Who. Single word cut through the static. Pulse jumped. She forced shoulders down. Breath matched his rhythm. The Avaros syndicate. They track bloodlines. They track debts. They track men who owe them too much. He reached out. Fingers hovered near her wrist. Scar caught the dim light. Skin brushed her pulse point. Heat flared. She flinched. He withdrew. Cane tapped once against floorboards. You should have called. Accusation slipped out before filter engaged. Voice cracked on final syllable. She bit tongue. Copper taste of regret spread across mouth. You stopped answering your phone in 2021. Lucien stepped closer. Space between them narrowed to a breath. Cologne masked damp wool. Something dark. Something expensive. Something that used to drown her senses. Lungs tightened. She fixed gaze on jawline. Shadow there looked fresh. I stopped believing you would use it. Admission hung heavy. She turned toward window. Rain streaked glass. Curry house sign buzzed overhead. Neon red painted puddles below. City breathed around them. Muffled traffic. Distant sirens. Train rattled tracks three streets over. Beliefs are luxury items. I traded mine years ago. Hand closed around her elbow. Firm. Unyielding. She turned back. Face occupied field of vision. Scar on wrist pulsed in time with heartbeat. Thumb pressed against sleeve. Fabric stretched tight. You left a letter. Words escaped soft. Fragile. She kept feet planted. Floorboards groaned under shifting weight. You left a door. I walked through it. Voice dropped. Timber scraped against ribs. He pulled back. Just an inch. Just enough to let cold air rush into gap. Fingers uncurled. Elbow tingled where grip had been. Mark lingered. I should go. He stepped sideways. Folio waited on table. Map sat forgotten. Eyes tracked exit. Boots turned toward door. Every instinct screamed to let him walk. Every muscle pulled the other way. Sit down. Command slipped out. Hers. She hated tremor in voice. Hated the way shoulders squared in response. He turned back. Room felt charged. Static prickled along forearms. Ptolemy jumped from desk. Landed on floor with soft thud. Tails swished. Eyes watched. You look like you need tea. Joke died before crossing threshold. Air thickened. He moved to table. Cane clicked against wood. Lifted cold mug. Poured dregs down sink. Ran hot water. Watched steam rise. I brought documents. Set mug on trivet. Placed stack of ledger pages beside it. Ink charts. Handwriting dense. Avaros crest sealed top page. Red wax cracked under touch. You are running a protection racket for half-demons now. Rory leaned against counter. Fingers found cold edge of granite slab. Traced grain. Mind raced. Connections clicking. Patterns forming. Old rhythm returned. The one that used to drive them both mad. I run information. Protection follows. Syndicate needs leverage. I trade names. They leave me alone. Until they stopped. Tapped ledger. Knuckles white. Breathing evened out. Watched reactions. Always watched. Always catalogued. Felt weight of attention. Grounded her. Terrified her. Why Brick Lane. Question felt trivial. Answer did not. Lucien closed folio. Latched brass clasp. Sound echoed sharp in cramped space. Pushed chair back. Sat. Wood scraped against floor. Crossed legs. Suit parted at thigh. Blade handle pressed against cane shaft. Because your cat likes tuna. Words landed flat. Absurd. Ptolemy rubbed against ankle. Cat purred. Sound vibrated through trousers. Rory stared. Corner of mouth twitched. Choked back laugh. Tension fractured. Hairline crack. Spread. You bribed a feral tabby. I fed him. He tolerated me. He knows the layout. He knows the locks. He knows when someone is lying. Cat yawned. Showed sharp teeth. Scratched table leg. Wood chips flew. Lucien did not blink. Fingers steepled. Amber and black eyes held hers. Room spun. Gravity shifted. Felt pull sideways. Toward him. Toward space he occupied. Toward years spent rebuilding. You are bleeding. Observation slipped out. Eyes locked onto temple. Fresh cut split skin. Blood seeped into platinum hair. Dark against white. Reached out before mind caught up. Fingertips brushed wound. Warmth. Saline. Iron. He did not pull away. Breath hitched. Sound registered loud in quiet flat. A minor scrape. Voice dropped. Rough. Frayed. Kept hand there. Thumb traced edge of cut. Skin flushed beneath touch. Heat radiated through skull. Into hers. Stopped. Placed palm flat against chest instead. Suit felt cold. Heartbeat underneath thundered. You always lied about the damage. Confession tasted like ash. Lowered hand. Stepped back. Distance felt like physical wound. Watched retreat. Jaw tightened. Muscles bunched. Vein pulsed at temple. You told me not to come here. Words came out quiet. Defeated. Turned toward window again. Rain hammered glass. City blurred. Neon bled into puddles. Reflection stared back. Black hair. Blue eyes. Scars. Lines. Person she used to be. Person she became. Saw reflection appear behind her. Close. Uninvited. Invited. You told me to stop running. Breath warmed neck. Whisper against ear. Hand found small of back. Gentle. Certain. Pressure anchored her. Grounded her. Flat filled with sound of shared air. Cat yowled. Jumped to windowsill. Watched storm. Deadbolts held. Door stayed shut. Ledger sat open. Tea cooled. Tension coiled. Years unspooled. Space collapsed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"traced"
count3
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"charged"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"tension"
count2
12
word"fractured"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"thundered"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"traced"
3"silence"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"pulsed"
7"weight"
8"charged"
9"raced"
10"vibrated"
11"tension"
12"fractured"
13"warmth"
14"thundered"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences314
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences314
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences314
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1234
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Moreau1
Lucien7
East1
End1
Avaros2
Brick1
Lane1
Rory5
One3
Rain3
You13
Ptolemy4
Fingers5
Sound4
Breath4
Voice3
Words3
Eyes3
Watched4
Cat3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Avaros"
3"Rory"
4"Rain"
5"You"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Fingers"
8"Breath"
9"Voice"
10"Words"
11"Eyes"
12"Cat"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.973
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1234
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences314
matches(empty)
32.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean39.81
std10.56
cv0.265
sampleLengths
047
152
232
361
443
545
639
738
837
917
1046
1125
1243
1341
1439
1517
1639
1733
1842
1934
2028
2140
2239
2341
2433
2565
2647
2738
2829
2950
3054
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences314
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs296
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences314
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1237
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023443815683104285
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008084074373484236
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences314
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences314
mean3.93
std2.34
cv0.596
sampleLengths
04
123
25
32
49
54
66
75
87
96
104
118
124
138
144
153
165
175
188
196
205
214
225
2311
244
253
265
277
2815
297
302
312
3211
332
349
354
368
375
388
394
404
411
427
434
444
452
465
476
482
493
91.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.5796178343949044
totalSentences314
uniqueOpeners182
59.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences226
matches
0"Then tell me why you"
1"Just an inch."
2"Just enough to let cold"
3"Dark against white."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences226
matches
0"He wore the same tailored"
1"He held a leather folio"
2"You look terrible."
3"He stepped inside without invitation."
4"Your timing never improved."
5"Her left wrist throbbed where"
6"She crossed her arms."
7"He avoided her face."
8"You promised never to cross"
9"His hand against hers."
10"She kept her voice steady."
11"He finally turned."
12"He moved past the table."
13"She steadied herself against a"
14"He leaned forward."
15"She forced shoulders down."
16"They track bloodlines."
17"They track debts."
18"They track men who owe"
19"He reached out."
ratio0.243
77.26% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount173
totalSentences226
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked back."
1"Rory gripped the brass handle."
2"The security chain slid free"
3"The door opened inward."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"Charcoal wool brushed his shoulders."
6"Platinum hair caught the flickering"
7"The other absorbed it."
8"He wore the same tailored"
9"The same quiet menace."
10"He held a leather folio"
11"Rain darkened his lapels."
12"You look terrible."
13"The words hung between them."
14"He stepped inside without invitation."
15"The door swung shut behind"
16"The deadbolts refused to bite."
17"Your timing never improved."
18"Rory held her posture straight."
19"Her left wrist throbbed where"
ratio0.765
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences226
matches
0"Because they found my safehouse."
1"Because your cat likes tuna."
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences6
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.1668%