Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79M5N92HSPY7Z1KYYRDG2C

Run Details

Duration:
39.3s
Cost:
$0.010504
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass deadbolt clicked. Aurora turned the second lock, then the third, before pulling the door inward. The hallway smell of turmeric and fried garlic from the curry house below drifted up, clashing with the familiar scent of rain and old paper. Lucien stood on the threshold. Charcoal wool damp with London drizzle, platinum hair slicked back against his temples, that ivory-handled cane resting against his thigh. He did not smile. He rarely did when his gaze fixed on her like he was measuring the space between heartbeats. Aurora fingers tightened on the doorframe. The crescent scar on her left wrist ached. Five years of silence passed in a single breath, and she still recognized the exact weight of his stillness. He shifted his stance, boots leaving dark wet impressions on her worn doormat. The flat behind her hummed with half-finished research, textbooks stacked like leaning towers, scroll cases crammed into every vacant corner. Ptolemy’s tail flicked once from the armchair before retreating under the coffee table. You are alive, she said. Her voice stayed flat. Trained. Professional. She used it in mooting competitions long before she dropped out of Cardiff. It kept things at arm’s length. I prefer very much, he replied. His heterochromatic gaze swept past her shoulder, cataloging the clutter, the three deadbolts, the single mug chilling on a stack of legal annotations. Amber and black eyes locked back onto hers. I have survived, in case that matters. She did not step aside. Eva is out. I have a delivery shift in forty minutes. This is not a social call. Knowing you, it never was. He adjusted his cuffs, the fabric whispering against his wrists. I am not here for charity. I am here because you left your half of the ledger in Marseille. The air in the narrow hallway thickened. She remembered Marseille. Rain on cobblestones. A balcony overlooking the Vieux-Port. His hands tracing the rim of a glass while he explained why certain doors stayed locked for reasons other than law. She remembered the argument that shattered the glass. She remembered walking out without looking back. I burned it. She let the words hang. Watched his jaw tighten beneath the sharp line of his cheekbones. I burned every page. Including yours. A prudent move. Regrettable timing. His cane tapped once against the floorboards. You vanished. Left a forwarding address scribbled on a napkin. I spent eighteen months tracking you to this zip code. And now you are here. She finally stepped back, breaking the stalemate. The door swung wider, revealing the cramped living space. Come in. Take off your coat. Do not touch the books. Eva grades rubrics by hand. Lucien crossed the threshold. His presence filled the narrow entryway, displacing the smell of curry and old paper. He peeled off his coat, revealing the tailored charcoal suit beneath, and leaned the cane against the wall beside a precarious stack of international law summaries. His movements were economical, precise. Every gesture carried the weight of someone accustomed to control. Ptolemy emerged, stretching, then rubbed against Lucien ankle. The demon half in him never learned to hide his fondness for felines. Aurora watched him kneel, one hand resting lightly on the tabby’s ribs. The gesture was so casual it cracked something open in her chest. She closed it fast. You look tired, he said, straightening. His amber eye caught the dim hallway bulb. The law suits you. You look exhausted. The delivery shifts suit me better. Less paperwork. More actual work. She moved to the small kitchenette, grabbing a chipped mug from the drying rack. Water is off the tap. Boil it yourself if you need tea. Coffee is stale. He did not move toward the kitchen. He stayed by the sofa, running a finger along the spine of a leather-bound casebook. You stopped taking my calls. Stopped answering my messages. Stopped leaving your number on my answering machine. I started answering to lawyers who actually sign retainer agreements. She poured hot water over a tea bag, the steam rising between them. You are a fixer. You trade secrets. I trade in principles. We do not mix. Principles. He repeated the word like it tasted foreign. How noble. How convenient. You left Cardiff because your ex threatened to ruin you. You came to London because Eva begged you to breathe. You took a job delivering dumplings to people who tip in loose change and good intentions. You built a fortress out of routine. I survived. She set the mug down. Water splashed over the rim. What is your angle, Lucien. You do not cross continents for burnt paper scraps. You do not knock on doors above curry houses out of nostalgia. He stepped closer. The space between them shrunk to a breath. She could see the fine lines around his eyes, the faint silver trace of an old scar along his jawline. The scent of sandalwood and rain clung to his sleeves. There is a ledger. Not the one you burned. The original. Kept in a vault that does not appear on city maps. Stolen last Tuesday. Stolen by someone who knows your handwriting. Her pulse jumped. I do not recognize that accusation. You do not need to. He rested his palm flat against the arm of the sofa. I need you to help me retrieve it. Not as a lawyer. Not as a delivery driver. As the person who encoded the cipher in the first place. The kitchen clock ticked. Three deadbolts held the door shut. Ptolemy yowled softly from the windowsill. Aurora stared at the rain streaked window, at her reflection superimposed over the city skyline. She remembered the cipher. Remembered the night he pressed his forehead to hers and whispered the final coordinate. Remembered the way she turned away when he asked for her name in English instead of the old dialect she used when she was afraid. I am not your accomplice, she said. Her voice barely rose above the hiss of the kettle. I am not your pawn. I am not anything you get to claim because you finally tracked my doorbell. Claim. He tested the word. Is that what you think this is. His hand moved, slow, deliberate, until his knuckles brushed the scar on her wrist. The contact burned. She did not pull away. I do not claim. I remember. I wait. I track. I show up. You show up late. She finally looked at him. Really looked. You show up when the vault already burned. When the pages are ash. When I do not know how to trust the man who promised me safety and handed me a contract instead. He withdrew his hand. The space where his skin had touched hers felt hollow. I did not hand you a contract. I handed you a choice. You walked through the wrong one. I walked out. She turned toward the kitchenette, grabbing a clean towel. I walked out because your silence screamed louder than my doubts. He did not follow her. He stayed by the sofa, watching the steam curl from the mug. Eva says you work nights. Says you sleep during the day. Says you have not taken a vacation in eleven months. Says you laugh less than you used to. Eva talks too much. She dried her hands, then leaned against the counter. And you listen too well. It is unnerving. It is necessary. He stepped forward again, closing the distance until he stood in her personal space. The charcoal wool of his jacket brushed her sleeve. The vault key changes every solstice. Today is the eve. I have until midnight to get inside. I need your mind. I need your cipher. I need you to stand beside me in a room full of men who think half-demons do not bleed. Half-demons bleed fine. She tilted her head. They just bleed slower. Aurora. The use of her full name stripped the air from the room. Please. She closed her eyes. The past rushed in. Marseille balconies. Cardiff lecture halls. Evan’s voice. Eva’s hands. The smell of turmeric. The weight of a cane. The heat of a palm. I do not do accomplices. You do survivors. He reached out, fingers hovering near her jaw. I will wait. I will stand in that room. I will face them. But you hold your ground. You speak up. You let me carry the weight alongside you. The kettle clicked off. Steam hissed into the empty mug. Aurora opened her eyes. Her bright blue irises caught the dim light, sharp and unyielding. Midnight is three hours away. You want in. You buy the dinner. You clean the counter. You do not touch the case files. And you explain why you never asked for my English name until the night everything fell apart. He smiled. Faint. Real. Deal. She turned on the tap. Cold water rushed over her hands. I like my tea bitter. And I do not do half-measures. Noted. He moved to the kitchenette, leaning against the doorway. His cane rested against his shoulder. I will start the clock. The rain drummed against the window. Ptolemy jumped onto the counter, knocking a stack of receipts to the floor. Aurora did not look up. She kept her hands under the stream, washing away the dust of Marseille, the memory of Cardiff, the echo of every word they never finished saying. Lucien picked up a pen. He pulled a notebook from his inner pocket. He began to write. The scratch of the nib against paper filled the silence. Three deadbolts held the door. The city breathed outside. The curry house downstairs sent up a fresh wave of garlic and cumin. Aurora turned off the tap. She dried her hands. She turned to face him. Tell me about the cipher. He capped the pen. He placed it beside his notebook. He met her gaze. It begins with a question.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1655
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"lightly"
2"softly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1655
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"chilling"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"carried the weight"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"pawn"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"flicked"
4"chilling"
5"tracing"
6"shattered"
7"carried the weight"
8"pulse"
9"pawn"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences240
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences240
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
2"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences240
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1655
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions4
matches
0"You are alive, she said."
1"I prefer very much, he replied."
2"You look tired, he said, straightening."
3"I am not your accomplice, she said."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1655
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Cardiff4
Marseille4
Vieux-Port1
Lucien5
Eva6
Tuesday1
English2
Aurora8
Ptolemy4
You24
Says3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Ptolemy"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Marseille"
3"English"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1655
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences240
matches
0"recognize that accusation"
88.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean37.61
std17.34
cv0.461
sampleLengths
042
146
233
346
430
544
622
734
854
925
1032
1137
1259
1349
1421
1540
1639
1738
1856
1938
2073
219
2244
2374
2436
2547
2644
2732
2823
2946
3021
3170
3211
3314
3436
3540
3665
375
3822
3921
4050
4163
425
4319
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences240
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs323
matches
0"was measuring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1662
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.02527075812274368
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005415162454873646
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences240
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences240
mean6.9
std4.94
cv0.716
sampleLengths
04
113
225
35
420
54
617
76
88
919
1013
1120
1213
135
144
151
161
1713
186
196
2023
218
227
235
243
258
266
275
2810
296
3013
317
323
333
345
3521
368
377
383
395
4011
414
422
433
442
457
462
478
4810
495
32.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats42
diversityRatio0.2833333333333333
totalSentences240
uniqueOpeners68
15.65% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences213
matches
0"More actual work."
ratio0.005
0.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount117
totalSentences213
matches
0"He did not smile."
1"He rarely did when his"
2"He shifted his stance, boots"
3"You are alive, she said."
4"Her voice stayed flat."
5"She used it in mooting"
6"It kept things at arm’s"
7"I prefer very much, he"
8"His heterochromatic gaze swept past"
9"I have survived, in case"
10"She did not step aside."
11"I have a delivery shift"
12"He adjusted his cuffs, the"
13"I am not here for"
14"I am here because you"
15"She remembered Marseille."
16"His hands tracing the rim"
17"She remembered the argument that"
18"She remembered walking out without"
19"I burned it."
ratio0.549
51.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount174
totalSentences213
matches
0"The brass deadbolt clicked."
1"Aurora turned the second lock,"
2"The hallway smell of turmeric"
3"Lucien stood on the threshold."
4"Charcoal wool damp with London"
5"He did not smile."
6"He rarely did when his"
7"Aurora fingers tightened on the"
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"He shifted his stance, boots"
10"The flat behind her hummed"
11"Ptolemy’s tail flicked once from"
12"You are alive, she said."
13"Her voice stayed flat."
14"She used it in mooting"
15"It kept things at arm’s"
16"I prefer very much, he"
17"His heterochromatic gaze swept past"
18"Amber and black eyes locked"
19"I have survived, in case"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His heterochromatic gaze swept past her shoulder, cataloging the clutter, the three deadbolts, the single mug chilling on a stack of legal annotations."
1"You took a job delivering dumplings to people who tip in loose change and good intentions."
2"I need you to stand beside me in a room full of men who think half-demons do not bleed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.2699%