Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79T3ER107E9X4M4YYD787G

Run Details

Duration:
33.0s
Cost:
$0.008028
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the rusted grating above the platform. Harlow Quinn stepped down the concrete stairs, her boots scraping against broken tile. The air tasted of wet limestone and stagnant iron. She flipped her flashlight on. The beam cut through the thick fog hanging over the tracks. Yellow police tape snapped in the draft. A body lay near the third rail. Two officers stood over him. DS Lin looked up as she approached. He wiped a smear of mud from his cheekbone. Found him like this. Trench coat heavy with water. No defensive wounds. Forensics estimates blunt force trauma. Probably a kick while he lay down. Toxicology reports show heavy opioids in his system. Quinn knelt. The victim wore a tailored wool overcoat, soaked through to the lining. His hands rested open on the track ballast. She ran a latex gloved finger along his jaw. Clean skin. No abrasions. No dirt. The station was a muck pit. The dead man faced like a polished stone. She shifted the flashlight. His shoes sat perfectly parallel to the water line. No scuff marks. No torn laces. Drifters who fell in here kicked up gravel and mud. This man placed his feet with deliberate care. She traced a faint trail of dried clay leading from the body toward a collapsed maintenance door. The door had been sealed with a heavy iron bolt. Quinn crouched and ran her fingers along the frame. The bolt showed directional wear. Scratches pointed toward the platform. Someone forced it open from the outside. Then they pushed it shut. Quinn stood and walked to the south wall. The bricks were ancient, stained with decades of tunnel damp. She pressed her palm against the mortar near the door frame. Dust flaked away under her touch. She tapped the stone. The sound rang hollow. She stepped back. Check the brickwork around the frame, Quinn said. Mortar depth. Lin followed. He frowned at the wall. What am I looking at? Recent lime wash. Quinn tapped a single brick. The texture differs from the surrounding sandstone. The edges show tool marks. A flat trowel. Someone scraped the old mortar, packed fresh mix, and smoothed it flat. Not older than three days. Vandals patching holes, Lin muttered. Kids trying to hide a stash. Vandals use shovels and desperation. This required precision. Quinn turned toward the body. Who logged the primary entry point? Standard breach protocol. We tagged the track edge. Quinn walked back to the dead man. She crouched again. A small brass object lay near his left hand. She lifted it with forceps. A compass. Verdigris crept across the casing in swirling patterns. Protective sigils etched deeply into the brass face. The needle trembled, spun against gravity, then locked into place. It pointed straight at the false brick wall. Evidence bag it, Lin ordered a tech crossing the tracks. Tool for the suicide. Suicide victims do not carry instruments that track magnetic anomalies, Quinn said. She held the compass up. The beam caught the aged patina. The casing showed microscopic wear along the hinge. Someone opened this repeatedly. Who is this? ID came through an hour ago. Julian Vane. Freelance archivist. Lives in Haverstock Hill. Last seen Tuesday evening. Logged into the British Museum restricted archives at ten. Never checked out. Quinn set the compass down. She scanned the platform. Floodwaters covered half the track bed. Ripples distorted the reflection of the tunnel lights. She followed the waterline. It stopped abruptly at a raised stone curb. Beyond the curb, the tracks remained bone dry. The dead man lay on the dry side. His shoes touched the water's edge. No spray reached his trousers. No damp climbed his cuffs. He had not waded through the station. He had stepped out of a dry space. Lin sighed, brushing water from his sleeve. The river backs up when the storm hits. Tides push hard down here. He was waiting for the water to recede. Quinn shook her head. River water moves. Even a tide pushes against a concrete wall and leaves a residue line. This dry zone cuts across the entire platform width. Someone built a barrier. Or the water never touched this sector. She knelt again. Her gloved hand brushed the ballast. Fine glass beads glittered in the dark. Not crushed gravel. Crushed quartz. She collected a pinch. The crystals caught the light, sharp and refractive. She rubbed them between her fingers. A sharp scent of ozone and burnt sugar rose from her glove. Alchemical residue, Lin muttered. Hippy junk. Some crew set up a rite down here. Sticks and crystals and whatever. Makes sense for an archivist who dabbles in occult nonsense. Rituals leave ash and soot. Quinn stood. This residue vaporized on contact with moisture. It is a tracking compound. Highly unstable. It burns off completely. Someone used it to map a route. Pull Vane's phone. Check for unauthorized transit logs. Cross-reference access requests from the restricted archives. Look for anything mentioning Camden tunnels or bone tokens. Lin pulled his radio and began speaking into the handset. You think he was murdered? I think the scene lied. Quinn walked to the maintenance door. She ran her fingers along the iron bolt. Clean metal. Unscratched surface marks. Vandals force doors with crowbars or feet. This required a key or a token. Then they swapped the bricks to cover the seam. Men who plan to end their lives do not tidy their shoes. They do not carry brass instruments that point away from north. Quinn turned away from the door. The compass needle shifted as the overhead lights flickered. It pointed at a specific brick in the false wall. A red ochre mark stained the mortar. A vendor's tag. Fine sand clustered at the base of the frame. Quinn knelt again and dug her fingers into the grit. Her nails caught on something hard. She pulled it free. A bone fragment. Smooth. Polished. Carved with a single eye. She held the token up. The weight felt dense. Too heavy for ivory. Too light for stone. The surface showed tool marks. Laser etching. Precise. Deliberate. Entry fee, she said quietly. Lin stared at the mark. Market stall? Some underground dealer selling trinkets? Something cheaper, Quinn said. She slipped the token into her evidence pouch. The compass needle settled again. North meant nothing here. The needle pointed straight at the wall. Straight at the seam. She brushed the dust from her knees. The water line, the dry track, the vaporized tracking compound, the false bricks, the bone token. All pieces of a single mechanism. A door that only opened for those who carried the right key. A place that moved with the moon. Bring me the archive files, Quinn said. Her voice remained level. Steady. Get a structural team on standby. And seal off the north stairs. If someone built a dry room beneath a flooded station, they left an exit. I want to see where it leads before the tide washes the evidence away. Lin nodded. He turned toward the platform steps. Quinn knelt one last time. She touched the brass compass. The needle held its position. True to the rift beneath the concrete. She stood. The station held its breath. The water lapped against the curb. The false wall waited. Quinn pulled her notebook from her coat and began to write.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1226
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"magnetic"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"etching"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"standard"
2"etched"
3"trembled"
4"magnetic"
5"scanned"
6"flickered"
7"weight"
8"etching"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences203
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1226
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"Check the brickwork around the frame, Quinn said."
1"Vandals patching holes, Lin muttered."
2"Evidence bag it, Lin ordered a tech crossing the tracks."
3"Suicide victims do not carry instruments that track magnetic anomalies, Quinn said."
4"Alchemical residue, Lin muttered."
5"Entry fee, she said quietly."
6"Something cheaper, Quinn said."
7"Bring me the archive files, Quinn said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1226
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn19
Lin9
Vane2
Haverstock1
Hill1
Tuesday1
British1
Museum1
Camden1
Vandals3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Lin"
2"Vane"
3"Museum"
4"Camden"
5"Vandals"
places
0"Haverstock"
1"Hill"
2"British"
globalScore0.725
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1226
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean42.28
std26.43
cv0.625
sampleLengths
066
148
288
358
446
510
612
740
811
919
108
1160
1214
1338
1430
1582
1628
1791
1829
1956
2015
2170
2274
2326
245
2512
2680
2752
2858
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences203
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was murdered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs226
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1227
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022819885900570498
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007334963325183374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean6.04
std3.01
cv0.498
sampleLengths
09
113
29
35
411
57
67
75
87
99
104
115
123
135
147
158
162
1712
188
199
202
212
222
236
248
254
269
273
283
2910
308
3117
3210
339
345
355
367
375
388
3910
4011
416
424
434
443
458
462
472
485
495
69.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.45320197044334976
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners92
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences180
matches
0"Probably a kick while he"
1"Then they pushed it shut."
2"Even a tide pushes against"
3"Then they swapped the bricks"
4"Too heavy for ivory."
5"Too light for stone."
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences180
matches
0"She flipped her flashlight on."
1"He wiped a smear of"
2"His hands rested open on"
3"She ran a latex gloved"
4"She shifted the flashlight."
5"His shoes sat perfectly parallel"
6"She traced a faint trail"
7"She pressed her palm against"
8"She tapped the stone."
9"She stepped back."
10"He frowned at the wall."
11"We tagged the track edge."
12"She crouched again."
13"She lifted it with forceps."
14"It pointed straight at the"
15"She held the compass up."
16"She scanned the platform."
17"She followed the waterline."
18"It stopped abruptly at a"
19"His shoes touched the water's"
ratio0.239
87.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences180
matches
0"Rain drummed against the rusted"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped down the"
2"The air tasted of wet"
3"She flipped her flashlight on."
4"The beam cut through the"
5"A body lay near the"
6"DS Lin looked up as"
7"He wiped a smear of"
8"Trench coat heavy with water."
9"Forensics estimates blunt force trauma."
10"Toxicology reports show heavy opioids"
11"The victim wore a tailored"
12"His hands rested open on"
13"She ran a latex gloved"
14"The station was a muck"
15"The dead man faced like"
16"She shifted the flashlight."
17"His shoes sat perfectly parallel"
18"Drifters who fell in here"
19"This man placed his feet"
ratio0.744
27.78% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences180
matches
0"If someone built a dry"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.2328%