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Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79W04WQYFZX6RED3WCE8P8
Run Details
Model:
Qwen3.6 Max Preview
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
3m 13s
Cost:
$0.048627
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
95.99%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
31.78%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
57.80%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
60.43%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
39.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.1895%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The third deadbolt clunked back.
Aurora tightened her grip on
the heavy brass pestle stolen from Yu-Fei's kitchen. Chain off. Hinges groaned. She yanked the door open, ready to swing.
Platinum hair caught the grim
hallway light.
A tailored charcoal suit sharp
enough to draw blood filled the frame.
An ivory-handled cane rested against
a polished oxford shoe.
Lucien Moreau leaned against the
doorjamb, heterochromatic eyes dragging over her. Amber glinted with amusement.
The black one swallowed the
shadows behind her. "Put the kitchenware away, Rory. You'll hurt yourself." "Give me one reason not to crack your skull." "I brought wine. And your life expectancy depends on it." He stepped forward. She held her ground. The pestle rose an inch. "Stop." "Or what? You'll bludgeon the only man keeping Evan's hunters off your scent?" "You vanished for three months, Lucien. Silence. No calls. No warnings. Just me, watching every shadow in this city while you played gentleman in whatever hellhole you crawled back to." "Avaros does not run on London time. Nor does it forgive debts."
He tapped the cane tip
against the threshold. "May I? The curry fumes are ruining my suit, and your neighbours are listening." A floorboard creaked upstairs. Mrs Gupta. Always listening. Rory stepped back,
jaw clenched
.
Lucien glided past her, bringing
a wave of bergamot and cold ozone that cut through the stale turmeric air of the flat.
He moved with that predator's
grace, silent despite the cane.
Ptolemy launched himself from a
stack of grimoires, claws extended, landing between Lucien's feet with a spit that
sounded like tearing silk
. Lucien didn't flinch. He
flicked
a glance down. The amber eye narrowed. Ptolemy froze, ears flattening, then slunk backward beneath a sagging armchair, tail twitching. "Your beast has taste." "He knows a demon when he smells one." "Half. And he smells fear. Yours, mostly." Rory kicked the door shut. The locks engaged with a rhythm she'd memorised. Click, clack, thud. Safety. Or the illusion of it. "Get to the point. Why are you here?" Lucien surveyed the cramped room. Books towered in precarious ziggurats. Scrolls spilled across the coffee table like viscera. Eva's research had metastasised since she left for Cardiff. Paper covered every surface, leaving only a narrow goat path to the kitchenette. "Eva's hoarding habits border on pathological. Does she sleep in the bath?" "Eva's gone. It's just me. Answer the question." Lucien turned. The cane swept a pile of pamphlets off a chair. He sat, crossing his legs, the fabric of his trousers whispering.
He looked utterly out of
place
amidst
the chaos, a diamond dropped in a gutter. "Evan found a new trail. He stopped looking for a runaway girlfriend. He started hunting a thief." Rory's knuckles whitened on the pestle. "I didn't steal anything." "You took the ledger from Silas's safe. The little black book with the red
silk
ribbon. Don't insult my intelligence." "Silas gave it to me for safekeeping." "Silas thinks it's lost. He's tearing his bar apart looking for it. If he finds out you have it, he won't be as forgiving as I am." "You? Forgiving?" A laugh scraped out of her throat, harsh and dry. "You left me bleeding in that alley off Berwick Street. You took the information you wanted and walked away while Evan's boys were two minutes behind me." Lucien's fingers tightened on the ivory handle. The knuckles bleached white. "I drew them away. I led three of them into the Thames and drowned the lot. You made it home because I bought you ten minutes with blood. You just never looked back to see the cost." The air in the room grew heavy. The ozone scent sharpened, tasting of static on Rory's tongue. She remembered the alley. The rain. The sound of shouts fading in the wrong direction. She'd assumed he'd fled. "You never said." "Pride is a luxury I cannot afford. Nor can you."
He extended a hand, palm
up. "The ledger, Rory. Evan knows Silas holds the names of every supernatural contact in East London. He wants the list. He wants to weaponise it. If he gets that book, he won't just break your legs. He'll burn this city block to ash and
dance
in the embers." "I don't have it on me." "Liar." He stood. The movement was too fast, a blur of charcoal and platinum. Rory stumbled back, hips hitting the edge of the kitchen counter. Lucien closed the distance, caging her in. One hand planted on the worktop beside her hip. The other reached up, fingers hovering near her throat.
Her pulse hammered against her
skin. Traitorous heat coiled low in her belly, warring with the urge to drive her knee into his groin. "Your heart races," he murmured. "Your pupils dilate. You're terrified. And aroused. A confusing mix." "Get away from me." "Make me."
His thumb brushed the crescent
scar on her left wrist. The skin there burned. She jerked her hand back, but his grip snapped around her forearm, gentle yet unyielding. "Still sensitive?" "Still a bastard?" "Always." He leaned in. His breath warmed her ear, carrying the faint, metallic tang of something ancient and wrong. "You hid the book in the flour jar at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei will sack you if she finds contraband in her ingredients. Or worse, Evan's men will toss the kitchen tonight. They're already mobilising." Rory froze. "How do you know that?" "I am the best information broker in London because I know everything. Including where a desperate pre-law student hides her secrets." His lips grazed her jawline, a
whisper
of contact that sent shivers
racing
down her spine
. "Give me the ledger. I'll neutralise Evan. You go back to delivering noodles and pretending you're normal." "And what do you get?" "Satisfaction." "Bullshit. You want the names for yourself." Lucien pulled back. The amber eye blazed. The black one swirled with
depths
that made her dizzy. "I want to keep you alive. Whether you believe that is irrelevant. The ledger is the key. Evan moves at midnight. We have two hours." "We? There is no we. There hasn't been since you walked out." "History is a luxury. Survival is a necessity."
His gaze dropped to her
mouth. "And you taste of mint and defiance. It's intoxicating." He dipped his head. Rory's breath hitched. She should push him away. She should swing the pestle. Instead, her fingers loosened. The brass clattered onto the tiles. Lucien's mouth hovered a millimetre from hers. The
tension
stretched, taut as a wire about to snap. The cane handle clicked. Lucien's head snapped up. His
eyes widened
a fraction. The blade hissed as it slid from the ivory sheath, silver flashing in the dim light. He shoved Rory hard. She crashed into the spice rack. Jars exploded. Cumin and chilli powder filled the air. A black shaft buried itself in the cupboard door where her neck had been a heartbeat ago. Fletching
vibrated
. "Down!" Lucien spun, coat flaring. The cane blade met a second projectile with a shower of sparks. Metal shrieked. The window
shattered
. Glass rained across the books. Shadows detached themselves from the fire escape outside, silhouettes wreathed in smoke and the
glint
of steel. Lucien stood between Rory and the breach, blade raised, shoulders set. "Evan's pets. Or mine. Either way, the negotiation just ended." He reached back without looking, hand finding Rory's wrist, fingers digging into the scar tissue. "Run or die, *
mon cœur
*. Choose fast."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
6
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
48
tagDensity
0.125
leniency
0.25
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
95.99%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1246
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
highlights
0
"utterly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
31.78%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1246
totalAiIsms
17
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
2
word
"predator"
count
1
3
word
"silk"
count
2
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"amidst"
count
1
6
word
"dance"
count
1
7
word
"pulse"
count
1
8
word
"whisper"
count
1
9
word
"racing"
count
1
10
word
"down her spine"
count
1
11
word
"depths"
count
1
12
word
"tension"
count
1
13
word
"vibrated"
count
1
14
word
"shattered"
count
1
15
word
"glint"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"jaw clenched"
2
"predator"
3
"silk"
4
"flicked"
5
"amidst"
6
"dance"
7
"pulse"
8
"whisper"
9
"racing"
10
"down her spine"
11
"depths"
12
"tension"
13
"vibrated"
14
"shattered"
15
"glint"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"jaw clenched"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
97
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
97
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
139
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
48
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
2
totalWords
1246
ratio
0.002
matches
0
"mon cœur"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
57.80%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
27
wordCount
705
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
1.84
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei
1
Moreau
1
Gupta
1
Lucien
13
Cardiff
1
Rory
10
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Gupta"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Rory"
places
0
"Yu-Fei"
1
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.578
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
50
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"sounded like tearing silk"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1246
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
139
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
69
mean
18.06
std
14.55
cv
0.806
sampleLengths
0
30
1
28
2
23
3
8
4
9
5
10
6
12
7
1
8
13
9
30
10
34
11
8
12
37
13
22
14
25
15
4
16
8
17
7
18
22
19
8
20
40
21
12
22
8
23
38
24
17
25
10
26
20
27
7
28
27
29
39
30
11
31
37
32
36
33
3
34
64
35
6
36
1
37
49
38
24
39
15
40
4
41
2
42
29
43
2
44
3
45
1
46
53
47
7
48
54
49
5
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
97
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
135
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
139
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
707
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
15
adverbRatio
0.021216407355021217
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.004243281471004243
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
139
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
139
mean
8.96
std
7.86
cv
0.877
sampleLengths
0
5
1
13
2
2
3
2
4
8
5
7
6
12
7
9
8
11
9
4
10
8
11
8
12
9
13
10
14
3
15
4
16
5
17
1
18
13
19
30
20
20
21
14
22
4
23
2
24
2
25
5
26
22
27
10
28
22
29
3
30
5
31
4
32
13
33
4
34
8
35
7
36
5
37
8
38
3
39
1
40
5
41
8
42
5
43
5
44
8
45
9
46
13
47
12
48
8
49
2
60.43%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
11
diversityRatio
0.41007194244604317
totalSentences
139
uniqueOpeners
57
39.68%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"Instead, her fingers loosened."
ratio
0.012
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
25
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"She yanked the door open,"
1
"He stepped forward."
2
"She held her ground."
3
"He tapped the cane tip"
4
"He moved with that predator's"
5
"He flicked a glance down."
6
"He sat, crossing his legs,"
7
"He looked utterly out of"
8
"She remembered the alley."
9
"She'd assumed he'd fled."
10
"He extended a hand, palm"
11
"Her pulse hammered against her"
12
"His thumb brushed the crescent"
13
"She jerked her hand back,"
14
"He leaned in."
15
"His breath warmed her ear,"
16
"His lips grazed her jawline,"
17
"His gaze dropped to her"
18
"He dipped his head."
19
"She should push him away."
ratio
0.298
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
79
totalSentences
84
matches
0
"The third deadbolt clunked back."
1
"Aurora tightened her grip on"
2
"She yanked the door open,"
3
"Platinum hair caught the grim"
4
"A tailored charcoal suit sharp"
5
"An ivory-handled cane rested against"
6
"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
7
"Amber glinted with amusement."
8
"The black one swallowed the"
9
"He stepped forward."
10
"She held her ground."
11
"The pestle rose an inch."
12
"He tapped the cane tip"
13
"A floorboard creaked upstairs."
14
"Rory stepped back, jaw clenched."
15
"Lucien glided past her, bringing"
16
"He moved with that predator's"
17
"Ptolemy launched himself from a"
18
"Lucien didn't flinch."
19
"He flicked a glance down."
ratio
0.94
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
84
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
27
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
6
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences
48
tagDensity
0.021
leniency
0.042
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.042
86.1895%