Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79XETVRA5XFBGSDH01WTKP

Run Details

Duration:
3m 35s
Cost:
$0.054292
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park stood chained and rusted. Rory slipped through a gap in the fence. Boots sank into damp soil. The Heartstone pendant rested against her collarbone. It burned. Not a gentle warmth. A steady, insistent heat that seeped through her jumper and pricked her skin. She touched the silver chain. The crimson stone pulsed. Once. Twice. A heartbeat out of sync with her own. She came for the signal. Three nights of restless sleep. Three nights of the gem flaring hot enough to leave red marks on her chest. The unknown benefactor’s note had mentioned a threshold. Richmond Park. Midnight. She checked her phone. Dead screen. The battery icon flashed empty before the glass went black. She shoved it into her coat pocket. The tree line swallowed the streetlamps. Branches knitted overhead. Choked out the moon. She followed a deer trail that narrowed with every step. Ferns brushed her shins. The air smelled of crushed mint and wet rot. Too sweet. Too thick. Ancient oaks rose ahead. Trunks twisted into pillars. Bark split into deep fissures. Standing stones. They formed a rough circle, half-buried in loam and ivy. The boundary. Rory stopped at the edge. The pendant flared. Heat bloomed across her sternum. She unbuttoned her coat. Pulled the chain free. The gem threw a bruised crimson light over the leaf litter. It illuminated a carpet of wildflowers. Bluebells. Foxgloves. Buttercups. All open. All vivid. In November. In the dark. "Right then." She stepped between two oaks. The temperature dropped. A sudden vacuum that stole the breath from her lungs. Frost crystallised on the flower petals. The scent of mint vanished. Replaced by ozone and old copper. She rolled her shoulders. Pushed forward. The ground felt spongy. Wrong. Like walking over a ribcage. A twig snapped to her left. Rory turned. Nothing but trunks and shadow. She faced forward again. Another snap. Closer. Behind her this time. Dry wood breaking under weight. She kept her pace steady. Cool head. Quick mind. She mapped the grove in her head. Thirty paces to the centre. Keep the stones at her back. Track the sound. "Show yourself." Her voice fell flat. The grove absorbed it. No echo. No rustle of leaves. Just the wet suck of her boots pulling free from the soil. The pendant burned hotter. She gripped the silver chain. The metal bit into her palm. The crimson glow stretched long shadows across the flowers. The shadows moved. Not with her. Against her. They slid sideways. Detached from the roots. Stretched thin like oil on water. She stopped. The shadows stopped. She took a step. They mirrored her. Half a second behind. She unclenched her jaw. Breathed through her nose. Counted the beats between her heart and the stone. They refused to align. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. Not wind. Not insects. A frequency that rattled her teeth. She pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist. The familiar ridge grounded her. She focused on the centre of the circle. A flat stone lay there. Carved with spirals. Covered in frost. The pendant dragged her toward it. The chain pulled taut against her neck. "Not a compass. A leash." She yanked the chain loose. Wrapped it twice around her fist. The gem flared. Light spilled over the frost. The frost retreated. Not melted. Crawled backward. Into the cracks of the standing stones. Something breathed behind her right ear. Rory spun. Coat flared. Boots tore through the flowers. Empty air. Just the dark between the trunks. She held her ground. Shoulders squared. Eyes scanning the periphery. The breath came again. Warm. Damp. Carrying the taste of iron. It brushed her neck. She swung her fist. The pendant arced through the dark. Crimson light painted a silhouette. Tall. Thin. Shoulders too narrow. Arms too long. It dissolved before the light caught its face. She stepped back. Heel caught a root. She caught her balance. The humming grew louder. It split into layers. Whispers under the tone. Syllables that twisted backward. She recognised none of them. She understood all of them. They spoke of thresholds. Of debt. Of things that waited in the seams. "I didn't come to bargain." She kept her voice level. Moved toward the flat stone. The whispers snapped silent. The grove held its breath. The wildflowers turned their heads. Not toward the moon. Toward her. Petals flexed. Stems bent. Tracking her steps. She reached the centre stone. Frost ringed the edges. The spirals pulsed in time with the gem. She knelt. Dirt soaked through her trousers. She pressed the pendant against the carved grooves. The stone hissed. Steam rose. The crimson light bled into the spirals. The carvings drank it. The ground shuddered. A shadow detached from the tree line. Then another. Then a dozen. They slid over the flowers without bending the stems. They circled the standing stones. They kept to the edge of her vision. Every time she turned her head, they shifted. Always behind her shoulder. Always just out of focus. She stood. Wiped dirt from her knees. The pendant cooled against her knuckles. The heat transferred into the flat stone. The spirals glowed from within. A low crack split the air. Not wood. Not rock. The sound of fabric tearing. The space above the centre stone rippled. Air folded over itself. A seam opened. Blacker than the night. Cold poured out. It carried the smell of wet ash and stagnant water. "Hel portal." The word left her lips before she weighed it. The seam widened. The whispers returned. Louder. Hungry. They clawed at the edges of her thoughts. She planted her boots. Kept her chin up. The shadows closed the circle. They stopped three paces from the stones. They held their shape. Tall. Thin. Limbs jointed in wrong places. Heads tilted at impossible angles. One stepped forward. It crossed the boundary. The wildflowers blackened where its feet touched the soil. It raised a hand. Fingers too long. Knuckles backward. It pointed at the pendant. Then at her throat. Rory tightened her grip on the chain. The silver links cut into her skin. Blood welled. Dripped onto the frost. The droplets sizzled. The shadow lowered its hand. It took another step. The others followed. A slow convergence. No rush. No hesitation. Just the steady crush of presence. She backed toward the standing stones. The seam behind her yawned wider. Cold air whipped her hair across her face. She brushed the black strands aside. Kept her eyes on the lead shadow. It stopped an arm's length away. The hum vibrated in her ribs. The whispers coiled around her skull. She felt the weight of them. The expectation. "You want it back." She held up the pendant. The crimson light washed over the shadow's form. It revealed nothing. Just a deeper dark inside the shape. The entity tilted its head. The motion cracked like dry timber. It reached out. Fingers hovered an inch from the gem. The heat returned. Violent. Searing. It shot up her arm. Numbness followed. Her fingers spasmed. She refused to drop it. The shadow's breath hit her face. Cold this time. Rancid. It opened a mouth that held no teeth. Just a hollow drop into nothing. The whispers poured out. They formed a single word. Repeated. Overlapping. Grinding against her ears. She planted her heels. Dug her nails into her palm. The crescent scar throbbed. She met the hollow dark. Held her ground. The seam behind her pulsed. The standing stones groaned. The wildflowers lay flat against the earth. The circle tightened. "Come and take it." She stepped forward. Straight into the reach of the long fingers. The cold clamped around her wrist. Bone met ice. The pendant flared white-hot. The light tore through the grove. The shadows recoiled. The seam shuddered. The whispers screamed. She held the gem steady. Let the burn travel up her arm. Let the dark press against her chest. She kept her eyes open. Watched the hollow mouth widen. Watched the fingers tighten. Watched the frost crawl up her boots. The ground dropped an inch. The standing stones leaned inward. The air thinned. She breathed shallow. Counted the seconds. The shadow's grip tightened. The pendant cracked. A hairline fracture split the crimson surface. Light bled through the break. It spilled over the entity's hand. The dark hissed. Smoke rose. The smell of burning hair filled the circle. She twisted her wrist. Pulled against the grip. The shadow held fast. The others closed the gap. Shoulders brushed hers. Cold seeped through her coat. The whispers drowned out the wind. The seam behind her yawned wide enough to swallow a car. The cold dragged at her back. The fingers dug deeper. Blood ran over the silver chain. Dripped onto the flat stone. The spirals drank it. The carvings flared gold. The shadow jerked. Its head snapped back. The hollow mouth closed. The grip loosened. A fraction. Enough. She drove her knee forward. Connected with nothing but freezing air. The entity staggered. The others rippled. The grove shuddered. The standing stones ground together. Bark split. Soil heaved. She wrenched her arm free. Stepped back. The pendant hung heavy. The fracture widened. Light spilled in jagged lines. The shadows regrouped. They formed a wall between her and the tree line. The seam pulsed behind her. The cold pulled harder. The whispers dropped to a murmur. Waiting. She wiped blood on her trousers. Adjusted her grip on the chain. Kept her shoulders square. The lead shadow straightened. It raised both hands. Palms open. Fingers splayed. It took a step. The others matched it. The circle shrank. The stones groaned. The flowers turned to ash. "Not tonight." She backed toward the seam. The cold wrapped around her waist. The whispers rose again. The shadows lunged. She turned. Faced the dark tear in the air. The pendant burned against her chest. The fracture split wider. Light poured into the void. The grove held its breath. The shadows stopped. The cold dragged her backward. Her boots slid over the frost. The standing stones blurred. The wildflowers vanished. The hum faded. The whispers cut off. She stood at the edge of the tear. The dark yawned. The cold bit through her coat. The pendant pulsed once. Twice. The fracture held. The light bled into the void. She kept her feet planted. Kept her eyes on the dark. The grove waited. The shadows watched. The seam breathed.
created_at"2026-04-27T11:06:42.401Z" 4/27/2026, 11:06:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1749
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count5
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"echo"
4"vibrated"
5"familiar"
6"scanning"
7"searing"
8"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences387
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences387
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences395
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1749
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1723
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Watched"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
November1
Rory5
Light4
Shoulders3
Cold4
Kept4
Fingers3
Watched3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Light"
2"Shoulders"
3"Cold"
4"Kept"
5"Fingers"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"November"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences395
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean40.67
std25.1
cv0.617
sampleLengths
068
159
240
377
42
55
646
76
853
92
1026
1161
1221
1369
145
1533
166
1773
1850
195
2037
2151
2251
2371
242
2561
2634
2748
2859
294
3064
3139
3241
334
3479
3557
3671
3746
3848
3947
402
4175
4251
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences387
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs326
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences395
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1725
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.02608695652173913
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences395
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences395
mean4.43
std2.24
cv0.507
sampleLengths
010
18
25
37
42
54
613
75
84
91
101
118
125
135
1415
158
162
171
184
192
2010
217
226
233
244
2510
264
279
282
292
304
314
325
332
3410
352
365
373
385
394
404
4111
426
431
441
451
462
472
482
493
35.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats72
diversityRatio0.3240506329113924
totalSentences395
uniqueOpeners128
95.85% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences313
matches
0"Just the wet suck of"
1"Just the dark between the"
2"Then a dozen."
3"Always behind her shoulder."
4"Always just out of focus."
5"Then at her throat."
6"Just the steady crush of"
7"Just a deeper dark inside"
8"Just a hollow drop into"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount79
totalSentences313
matches
0"She touched the silver chain."
1"She came for the signal."
2"She checked her phone."
3"She shoved it into her"
4"She followed a deer trail"
5"They formed a rough circle,"
6"She unbuttoned her coat."
7"It illuminated a carpet of"
8"She stepped between two oaks."
9"She rolled her shoulders."
10"She faced forward again."
11"She kept her pace steady."
12"She mapped the grove in"
13"Her voice fell flat."
14"She gripped the silver chain."
15"They slid sideways."
16"She took a step."
17"They mirrored her."
18"She unclenched her jaw."
19"They refused to align."
ratio0.252
67.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount246
totalSentences313
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory slipped through a gap"
2"Boots sank into damp soil."
3"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
4"A steady, insistent heat that"
5"She touched the silver chain."
6"The crimson stone pulsed."
7"A heartbeat out of sync"
8"She came for the signal."
9"The unknown benefactor’s note had"
10"She checked her phone."
11"The battery icon flashed empty"
12"She shoved it into her"
13"The tree line swallowed the"
14"Branches knitted overhead."
15"She followed a deer trail"
16"Ferns brushed her shins."
17"The air smelled of crushed"
18"Trunks twisted into pillars."
19"Bark split into deep fissures."
ratio0.786
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences313
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.8591%