Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ79YJAR1V4FW3PECEKW8NZY

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Duration:
54.8s
Cost:
$0.012096
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s boot slipped on wet moss. She caught herself against a weathered oak stone, fingernails digging into the lichen-crusted bark. The iron latch on her satchel bit into her shoulder. She pushed off the monument and scanned the clearing. Nothing moved. The air tasted of crushed petals and copper. Her satchel swung against her hip. She checked the silver chain against her collarbone. The crimson Heartstone pendant pulsed against her sternum. A steady rhythm matched her rising pulse. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist. The outline matched the grove’s boundary markers. Evan’s voice echoed in her head. Never go back. She ignored it. Her employer needed the ledger, and the ledger pointed straight here. She stepped forward. Wildflowers burst from the turf. White bells, purple thistles, red poppies. They bloomed in perfect symmetry. A rabbit hopped across her path. It stopped mid-leap. Its nose twitched. Then it froze. The creature stood rigid, legs locked in mid-air, suspended like a taxidermy mount. Rory backed away. Her heel caught a root. She stumbled. The rabbit dropped. It hit the ground with a wet thud. It did not breathe. Three rules for surviving the grove. Do not watch the flowers. Do not answer the echoes. Keep your back to the stones. I followed the first rule. I focused on the ground. Dark soil. Twisted roots. The satchel swung against my hip. I needed to find the edge. The map said the threshold sat three hundred metres east. My phone displayed zero bars. The compass spun wildly. A twig snapped. The sound echoed from behind me. I froze. The wind did not stir the leaves. The grass lay flat. Nothing breathed but my own lungs. I adjusted the satchel strap. My fingers brushed the brass clasp. I pulled a knife from my boot. The blade caught the dim light. I did not sheath it. "You brought a knife." The voice came from the oak stones. The tone matched mine exactly. I turned slowly. The bark shimmered. Shadows stretched across the roots. A figure materialised in the gap between two boulders. Tall. Pale. Hair black as soot. It wore a jacket identical to mine. Black. Worn leather. The satchel hung on its hip. The face was mine. The eyes were mine. The crescent scar sat on the left wrist. "You should have left the ledger where your mother found it." The copy tilted its head. The jaw worked. Muscles flexed beneath pale skin. It stepped forward. The grass crushed under its boots. I kept my weight on the balls of my feet. I waited for it to speak again. It smiled. A slow stretch of teeth. Sharp. White. "Evan told me you were clever." The copy reached into its satchel. Leather creaked. Paper rustled. It pulled out a photograph. The edges frayed. The subject stared back. My mother. Jennifer Ellis. Her eyes held a hollow terror. I lowered the knife. "You work for him." The figure tapped the photo. "He works for the stones. I work for the space between. You crossed the boundary. You took the token. You should have known the price." The Heartstone burned against my chest. I pressed my fingers to the crimson gem. Warmth seeped into my skin. The chain tightened. I took a step back. The copy mirrored the movement. It did not blink. The air grew thick. My boots sank into the turf. I pulled harder. The leather strap bit into my shoulder. I wrenched free. The satchel flew from my hand. It landed in the white bells. Paper scattered. "Leave it." The copy said the words. Its voice dropped an octave. "The papers do not belong to humans." I dropped to one knee. I grabbed the nearest page. Wet ink smeared across my thumb. Numbers. Coordinates. A sigil drawn in jagged lines. I slid the page into my pocket. The copy lunged. Its fingers brushed my collarbone. I twisted. My elbow struck its jaw. Bone cracked. The figure staggered. It recovered instantly. The eyes shifted. The blue faded to grey. Then black. "Tick-tock," I whispered. Time slipped in the grove. I needed distance. I sprinted past the boulders. The path narrowed. Roots coiled across my way. I vaulted the first tangle. The second caught my ankle. I fell forward. My palm hit mud. Ice water soaked through my sleeve. I pushed up. The copy stood over me. It raised a hand. The fingers elongated. Joints bent backward. Claws formed. I rolled. The claws raked the earth where my chest had sat. Dirt sprayed. I scrambled to my feet. I ran. The wildflowers leaned away from my path. Stems bent. Petals curled inward. The grove itself recognised the threat. I did not look back. I focused on the stones ahead. I needed the boundary. I needed out. "You cannot outrun yourself." The copy called the words. The voice fractured. Multiple tones layered over one. My laugh. My scream. My whisper. The sounds bounced off the trees. They circled me. I covered my ears. I kept running. The path twisted. I passed the same oak stone twice. Time looped. I checked the Heartstone. The glow flared. Crimson light pulsed in rapid bursts. The pendant meant to guard against Hel thresholds. It reacted too late. The boundary shifted. I skidded to a halt. The clearing opened ahead. Sunlight filtered through the canopy. Warm air rushed over my face. Freedom sat ten paces away. I stepped forward. The ground gave way. Grass turned to black water. It rose around my boots. Cold. Heavy. I struggled. The surface tension held firm. I kicked upward. Nothing broke the skin. The copy emerged from the trees. It walked on the black water. Its boots left no marks. It stopped at the edge. "The grove keeps what it claims." It said the words. The voice lost the mimicry. Pure resonance vibrated in my teeth. I pulled the Heartstone from my neck. Silver chain snapped against the silver clasp. I held the gem out. "Evan sent you. You took the ledger. You took my mother." The copy tilted its head. "We took the bloodline. The rest follows." I squeezed the gem. Heat shot up my arm. Veins bulged. Skin prickled. I pressed the crimson stone against my palm. I pushed. Metal bit into flesh. I dragged it across the skin. Blood welled. Dark. Thick. I smeared it over the crystal. The stone drank the blood. The crimson deepened to black. The chain grew cold. The air around me fractured. Lines of light tore through the mist. The grove shuddered. Leaves fell in reverse. Upward into the sky. The copy staggered. Its form flickered. Skin split. White light bled through the cracks. "You broke the pact." It hissed the words. The voice shattered into static. Images flooded my mind. My father’s study. A locked cabinet. An older woman with bright blue eyes. She held a sword. The copy lunged. It crossed the black water in a single bound. Claws reached for my throat. I dropped to the mud. The figure sailed over me. I kicked the stone. It spun through the air. It struck the copy’s chest. The gem pierced the pale skin. The body halted mid-leap. It hung in space. Eyes wide. Mouth open in a silent scream. The white light beneath the skin spread. It crackled. Blue sparks jumped across the clearing. The ground dropped. I fell. The black water swallowed me. I kicked downward. The current pulled me through narrow tunnels. Roots tangled my legs. I broke free. I surged upward. I burst through the turf. Wet leaves fell over my face. Cold air filled my lungs. I coughed. I pulled myself onto solid ground. I dragged my satchel after me. I scrambled up the slope. Branches whipped my face. Thorns tore my sleeves. I did not slow. I reached the tree line. The oak stones stood behind me. The grove lay still. Wildflowers bloomed. The black water receded. The copy was gone. The Heartstone lay in the mud. Crimson light pulsed slowly. Steady. Waiting. Boots crunched on gravel. Heavy steps. I crouched behind a fallen log. The sound grew louder. Two figures emerged from the treeline. They wore dark coats. Faceless masks covered their heads. One carried a metal box. The other held a long blade. They stopped at the grove’s edge. The box opened. A horn emitted a low hum. The air rippled. The ground trembled. The leader stepped forward. He pointed the blade at the stones. The stone beneath his boot split. A fissure ran outward. Black water seeped into the cracks. The liquid spread across the path. It moved toward them. The leader did not flinch. He raised his hand. The blade glowed. Purple light crackled along the edge. He swung. The water parted. The fissure widened. The ground gave way beneath him. He fell. The others did not stop. They marched into the opening. The blade sliced downward. The cliff face groaned. Dust rained from above.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1500
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"echoes"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"resonance"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"traced"
4"echoed"
5"perfect"
6"echoes"
7"shimmered"
8"weight"
9"warmth"
10"fractured"
11"whisper"
12"tension"
13"resonance"
14"vibrated"
15"crystal"
16"flickered"
17"shattered"
18"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences312
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences312
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences323
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1500
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1408
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Ellis1
Time2
Hel1
White3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Ellis"
2"Time"
places
0"White"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1500
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences323
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean45.45
std29.28
cv0.644
sampleLengths
0117
172
222
345
457
54
670
711
848
96
1032
118
1230
1373
142
1517
1664
1767
1857
1979
2080
216
2245
2312
2443
2551
264
2730
2878
2960
3054
3174
3282
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences312
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs285
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences323
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1412
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.015580736543909348
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0035410764872521247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences323
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences323
mean4.64
std2.38
cv0.512
sampleLengths
06
114
210
39
42
58
66
78
88
97
109
117
126
133
143
1511
163
175
186
195
206
213
223
233
2413
253
265
272
283
298
304
316
325
335
346
355
365
372
382
396
406
4110
425
434
443
456
462
477
484
496
37.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.26006191950464397
totalSentences323
uniqueOpeners84
25.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences260
matches
0"Then it froze."
1"Upward into the sky."
ratio0.008
63.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount102
totalSentences260
matches
0"She caught herself against a"
1"She pushed off the monument"
2"Her satchel swung against her"
3"She checked the silver chain"
4"She traced the crescent scar"
5"She ignored it."
6"Her employer needed the ledger,"
7"She stepped forward."
8"They bloomed in perfect symmetry."
9"It stopped mid-leap."
10"Its nose twitched."
11"Her heel caught a root."
12"It hit the ground with"
13"It did not breathe."
14"I followed the first rule."
15"I focused on the ground."
16"I needed to find the"
17"My phone displayed zero bars."
18"I adjusted the satchel strap."
19"My fingers brushed the brass"
ratio0.392
4.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount237
totalSentences260
matches
0"Rory’s boot slipped on wet"
1"She caught herself against a"
2"The iron latch on her"
3"She pushed off the monument"
4"The air tasted of crushed"
5"Her satchel swung against her"
6"She checked the silver chain"
7"The crimson Heartstone pendant pulsed"
8"A steady rhythm matched her"
9"She traced the crescent scar"
10"The outline matched the grove’s"
11"Evan’s voice echoed in her"
12"She ignored it."
13"Her employer needed the ledger,"
14"She stepped forward."
15"Wildflowers burst from the turf."
16"They bloomed in perfect symmetry."
17"A rabbit hopped across her"
18"It stopped mid-leap."
19"Its nose twitched."
ratio0.912
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences260
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
84.0000%