Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ7A2ZYTTCJTT6PMXRFMAQ5X

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.006551
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones leaned inward like tired witnesses. Rory stepped past the outer ring, boots sinking into damp moss that swallowed each footfall. Her phone screen glowed white against the tree line, displaying twenty-three minutes past midnight. The compass needle spun lazily, ignoring north. She kept the Heartstone pendant pressed between her thumb and forefinger. Warmth radiated through the silver chain, spreading up her wrist until it reached the crescent scar from a childhood accident with a broken garden hoe. The pendant pulsed. Once. Twice. A steady rhythm against her skin. You are tracking a Hel portal signature, she whispered to the empty grove. Stop pretending otherwise. Her voice bounced back thin and distorted, absorbed by the canopy before it could reach her ears. She adjusted her coat collar. Wind did not move. The air stayed thick, heavy with the scent of crushed leaves and something sweeter, like overripe plums left in the sun. Richmond Park sat miles from Cardiff, yet she followed a trail of misplaced coordinates and a letter from a faceless benefactor that arrived in her mailbox three weeks ago. She left Evan behind. She left Pre-Law books stacked against a wall in a flat above Silas bar. She came here because the city grew too loud, because the walls felt too close, because the pendant burned with a frequency that matched nowhere in London or Wales. Wildflowers breached the soil at her feet. Bluebells and foxgloves stood shoulder to shoulder, petals saturated with dew, completely at odds with November frost. She knelt. The stems bent without breaking. Her fingers brushed a cluster of snowdrops that should have been buried under six inches of ice. The flowers closed. Just her touch. Just her presence. Time sits wrong here, she murmured. Check the watch. Stop checking the watch. She glanced at the wrist chronometer again. Three minutes had passed since she crossed the stones. The pendant had pulsed forty times. Her breath fogged the air, but the fog lingered too long, hanging in suspended sheets before dissolving. She stood. The tree line closed inward. Branches wove overhead, blocking out the sky. Only a narrow band of pale light filtered through the leaves, casting long shadows that stretched in directions the trees itself did not face. Something scratched behind her. She turned. The underbrush remained still. A rabbit skeleton sat near a fallen log, ribs picked clean, jaw hung open. No movement. No sound but the low hum vibrating through the pendant. She stepped away from the skeleton. Her left boot caught on a root. She steadied herself. The scar on her wrist ached. Move forward, she told herself. Track the warmth. Follow the pull. The forest floor sloped downward. Moss yielded to soft earth that squelched under her weight. She counted her steps. Twelve. Twenty-eight. Forty-one. The path did not curve. It widened. The standing stones retreated behind her, swallowed by darkness. She reached into her pocket. Her fingers closed around the smooth glass surface of her phone. No signal. The time read 12:47 AM. Sixteen minutes had vanished. She dropped the phone into the undergrowth and kept walking. A branch snapped. Left side. High. She froze. The sound echoed again, closer. Wood grinding against wood. Not wind. Not an animal. Footsteps wrapped in cloth moved through the trees. She held her breath. The warmth against her palm intensified. The pendant glowed, a faint crimson light bleeding through the silver links. She pulled a handkerchief from her coat pocket and wrapped the stone. The glow dimmed. You are not dreaming, she said aloud. Eva warned you about pocket realms. Evan warned you about your own head. Listen to the facts. The footsteps stopped. Silence pressed against her eardrums. Leaves rustled overhead. A dry skittering moved across the forest floor, directly in front of her. She raised her chin. The path ahead split into three narrow trails. Each one disappeared into a wall of ferns. The ground between them showed no tracks. No disturbed soil. Only the faint impression of bare feet, heels to toes, repeating in a perfect line that started ten yards ahead and did not end. She followed the footprints. The earth felt spongy. Each step sank half an inch. The wildflowers thickened. Petals brushed her jeans. They turned toward her as she passed. She did not look down. She kept her eyes on the line of prints. The warmth beneath the handkerchief burned again. She tore the fabric away. The gemstone flashed red, bright enough to cast shadows on the surrounding trunks. The crimson light reflected off wet bark. Something moved in the reflection. A silhouette detached from a trunk. Tall. Thin. Arms hanging too low. She turned. The space behind her remained empty. Trees stood in a perfect circle. The canopy wove tight. No sky. No stars. Only the dim red pulse from the pendant. Stop lying to yourself, she said. It tracks you. The path leads nowhere. You know this. She wiped sweat from her brow. The air tasted metallic. Her throat tightened. She pressed forward. The prints ended at a patch of bare ground. The soil here glowed faint green. Fungal rings spiraled outward from a central depression. She crouched. Her fingers hovered over the earth. The ground vibrated. A low thrum traveled up her arms. The pendant flared. Heat seared her palm. She dropped it into the depression. The gemstone sank into the soil. The crimson light swallowed the patch. Roots erupted from the earth. They thickened, twisting, braiding together until they formed a wall. The sound of splintering wood filled the grove. Branches cracked. Boughs bent downward. The circle of trees contracted. She stood. She backed away. Her boots slipped on the damp moss. She fell to one knee. The pendant stopped pulsing. It sat in a crater of blackened earth, glowing steady now, unmoving. Something breathed behind her. She did not turn. Her eyes stayed fixed on the wall of roots. The breath came again, wet and steady, right against the shell of her ear. The scent of rotten honey thickened. She gripped the grass between her fingers. The blades snapped. Her joints locked. The forest air grew cold. Frost formed on the wildflower stems. The petals curled inward. The roots shifted. They pressed closer. The ground trembled. She kept her breathing shallow. She counted heartbeats. She focused on the scar on her wrist. The crescent ridge. The smooth skin below it. The steady thrum of her own pulse. You are not alone, she said. The words left her mouth flat. No tremor. No plea. Just a statement of fact. The ground beneath her knees cooled. The frost spread outward in a perfect ring. The pendant dimmed to a dull ember. The roots stopped shifting. The breath continued. Slow. Measured. Right beside her shoulder. Leaves fell from the canopy. They landed on her coat sleeves. They did not land on the ground. They hovered an inch above her shoulders. The air grew heavy. Pressure built against her chest. She exhaled. The breath fogged. The fog formed shapes. Angled lines. Jagged edges. The shapes drifted upward. They vanished into the dark branches above. She lifted her head. The canopy moved. Boughs parted. Light spilled through. Pale. Green. Artificial. It hit the forest floor. It illuminated the space beside her. The shadows lengthened. They stretched across the moss. They wrapped around her ankles. They pulled.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1235
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"footfall"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count3
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"footfall"
1"warmth"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"echoed"
5"footsteps"
6"silence"
7"perfect"
8"pulse"
9"vibrated"
10"trembled"
11"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences210
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1235
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions6
matches
0"You are tracking a Hel portal signature, she whispered to the empty grove."
1"Time sits wrong here, she murmured."
2"Move forward, she told herself."
3"You are not dreaming, she said aloud."
4"Stop lying to yourself, she said."
5"You are not alone, she said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1235
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Stop"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Hel1
Park1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Pre-Law1
Silas1
London1
Wales1
November1
You4
Stop3
persons
0"Evan"
1"You"
2"Stop"
places
0"Park"
1"Cardiff"
2"Silas"
3"London"
4"Wales"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.81
wordCount1235
matches
0"No sound but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean53.7
std37.26
cv0.694
sampleLengths
092
116
2123
357
413
577
64
754
811
975
1067
1124
1278
1391
1430
1516
1670
1778
184
19101
2021
21118
2215
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences210
matches
0"been buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs228
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.026634382566585957
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004842615012106538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean5.88
std4.74
cv0.807
sampleLengths
09
115
214
37
411
525
63
71
81
96
1013
113
1217
135
144
1521
1629
174
1814
1929
207
2117
222
235
2417
253
263
273
286
293
304
317
329
336
3417
352
365
377
3824
394
402
414
4214
432
4410
456
467
473
486
495
36.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners63
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences175
matches
0"Just her touch."
1"Just her presence."
2"Only a narrow band of"
3"Only the faint impression of"
4"Only the dim red pulse"
5"Just a statement of fact."
ratio0.034
89.71% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences175
matches
0"Her phone screen glowed white"
1"She kept the Heartstone pendant"
2"You are tracking a Hel"
3"Her voice bounced back thin"
4"She adjusted her coat collar."
5"She left Evan behind."
6"She left Pre-Law books stacked"
7"She came here because the"
8"Her fingers brushed a cluster"
9"She glanced at the wrist"
10"Her breath fogged the air,"
11"She stepped away from the"
12"Her left boot caught on"
13"She steadied herself."
14"She counted her steps."
15"She reached into her pocket."
16"Her fingers closed around the"
17"She dropped the phone into"
18"She held her breath."
19"She pulled a handkerchief from"
ratio0.326
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount155
totalSentences175
matches
0"The oak standing stones leaned"
1"Rory stepped past the outer"
2"Her phone screen glowed white"
3"The compass needle spun lazily,"
4"She kept the Heartstone pendant"
5"Warmth radiated through the silver"
6"The pendant pulsed."
7"A steady rhythm against her"
8"You are tracking a Hel"
9"Her voice bounced back thin"
10"She adjusted her coat collar."
11"Wind did not move."
12"The air stayed thick, heavy"
13"Richmond Park sat miles from"
14"She left Evan behind."
15"She left Pre-Law books stacked"
16"She came here because the"
17"Wildflowers breached the soil at"
18"Bluebells and foxgloves stood shoulder"
19"The stems bent without breaking."
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences175
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory stepped past the outer ring, boots sinking into damp moss that swallowed each footfall."
1"Richmond Park sat miles from Cardiff, yet she followed a trail of misplaced coordinates and a letter from a faceless benefactor that arrived in her mailbox thre…"
2"Her fingers brushed a cluster of snowdrops that should have been buried under six inches of ice."
3"Only a narrow band of pale light filtered through the leaves, casting long shadows that stretched in directions the trees itself did not face."
4"Only the faint impression of bare feet, heels to toes, repeating in a perfect line that started ten yards ahead and did not end."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.1520%