Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ7A3ADRWCPKBYXQBVST02MR

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.008039
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones rose from the Richmond Park earth like fractured pillars. Aurora stopped at the boundary line. Her boots sank into damp soil that carried the heavy scent of crushed mint and stagnant water. The Heartstone pendant hung against her sternum, the silver chain biting into her collarbone. Inside the crimson gem, light pooled and refused to reflect. She checked her wristwatch. The needle jittered between eleven and twelve, trembling without advancing. She stepped past the first stone. The clearing opened without warning. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in violent shades of violet and gold, petals stretched wide despite the November freeze. Dew clung to every stem. Aurora pressed her thumb against the crescent scar on her left wrist. The raised flesh anchored her. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, though the Golden Empress shift ended hours ago. Tonight she carried only the pendant and the napkin crumpled in her coat pocket. The paper had arrived that morning, blank except for a single arrow drawn in black ink. It pointed through service alleys, past Silas’ bar, and straight into this pocket of earth. She unfolded the napkin. The ink smeared in the damp air. Two paces left. Stop where the moss turns black. She tucked the paper back and walked forward. The air thickened. It resisted her movement, pulling at her jacket, slowing her breath. The pendant warmed. A low vibration traveled up the silver chain and settled in her ribs. She paused. Moonlight filtered through the canopy, casting long silver bars across the forest floor, but the shadows pooled at her ankles instead of stretching away from the light. She exhaled. The vapor hung in the air like suspended smoke. It drifted backward, sliding toward the stone line she had just crossed. Her breath did not fade. It accumulated. She exhaled again. The fog retreated further, pushing against an invisible barrier behind her. Time folded inward. An hour stretched into minutes. Minutes compressed into hours. She watched the watch face. The second hand swept counterclockwise. She tapped the glass. The needle shuddered and reversed completely. A twig snapped behind her. Not wind. The sound carried the wet crack of breaking bone. She turned. The dark between the trunks held its shape. A smear of shadow detached itself from a pine and slid sideways. She narrowed her eyes. The wood swallowed it whole. She walked forward. The ground softened. Roots knotted beneath her soles. The pendant grew hotter. It pressed against her skin, the heat steady and insistent. Copper filled her nose. Old blood. She swallowed. The wildflowers pressed into her path, their stems bowing under an unseen weight. Their scent shifted from mint to iron. She pushed a petal aside. The flesh remained unbroken. It pulsed. A movement caught her peripheral. Left. Right. Left. She whirled. Nothing stood between the trees. Only bark and shadow. She followed the split birch from the napkin. Found it. Moss at its base turned the color of wet slate. She stopped. The pendant burned. It pulsed in a rhythm that matched no biological beat. Thump. Thump. Thump. She reached into her bag. Fingers closed around the heavy brass flashlight base. She clicked it on. The beam cut through the gloom. The light revealed forest floor littered with leaves that refused to brown. They glowed green, veins bright as capillaries. The beam caught a stone marker half-buried in the earth. Carved into its face, symbols etched deep, sharp and deliberate. Her stomach tightened. She leaned closer. The symbols began to leak. Dark fluid seeped from the grooves, tracking upward against gravity, climbing toward the carving. She stepped back. Boots crunched on the path. She froze. The sound matched her own footprint. But she stood still. The crunch came again. Closer. To her left. She swung the beam. A figure stood between two pines. Tall. Too tall. The outline blurred at the edges, soft and shifting. The face remained blank. A smooth oval of pale skin. It tilted its head. The pendant flared. Heat seared through her jacket. She dropped the flashlight. Glass shattered. Light died. The grove plunged into absolute dark, save for the pendant’s glow, which cast long, jerking shadows against the trees. The figure did not blink. It took a step. The sound echoed too loud, too close. She backed against a tree trunk. Bark scraped her shoulder. The crescent scar on her wrist tingled. She closed her eyes. Counted to three. Opened them. The figure stood at the tree line. Ten yards. Maybe less. Time stretched thin. The wildflowers around her boots swayed without wind. Petals lifted from the ground, suspended in the air, rotating slowly. She reached for the pendant. Her fingers trembled. The chain grew warm. The heat spread up her neck. A whisper brushed her ear. Not words. Just air moving in a pattern that mimicked speech. She flinched. The presence stepped into the clearing. No feet touched the moss. The ground did not depress. The figure hovered inches above the earth. Its head rotated a full three hundred degrees. A voice fractured the silence. Not from the figure. From everywhere. You bring the stone. The words layered over each other, overlapping, harmonizing into a single tone. Aurora tightened her grip on the pendant. She forced her shoulders down. Her voice emerged steady. I need to know where it came from. The figure inclined its head. The air thickened. Pressure built in her ears. The wildflowers turned their faces toward her, stems cracking as they twisted. The pendant pulsed so hard it nearly ripped from her neck. She gripped it tighter. The darkness beyond the grove remained sealed. No city sounds. No distant traffic. Just the rhythm of that wrong heartbeat in the dark. The figure stepped forward. The moss rippled in its wake. She drew a breath that tasted of ozone and crushed petals. The whisper circled her again, closer this time, brushing the shell of her ear. A hand, cold and dry, traced the line of her jaw. She did not flinch. She reached blindly behind her, fingers closing around the heavy flashlight base now resting against the root. The pendant burned. The figure leaned in. The air stilled. The grove waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1039
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"fractured"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"gloom"
4"etched"
5"stomach"
6"shattered"
7"echoed"
8"trembled"
9"whisper"
10"silence"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences171
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences171
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1039
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount1030
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Thump"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
November1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora3
Thump3
persons
0"November"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1039
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences171
matches
0"arrived that morning"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean103.9
std73.56
cv0.708
sampleLengths
080
1134
2135
3111
4259
5137
64
728
88
9143
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences171
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount177
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.005649717514124294
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.005649717514124294
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences171
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences171
mean6.08
std4.27
cv0.702
sampleLengths
013
16
217
314
410
54
610
76
85
918
105
1112
125
1316
1414
1516
1615
174
187
193
206
218
223
2311
243
2513
262
2727
282
299
3012
315
322
333
3411
353
365
374
385
395
404
416
425
432
449
452
468
4712
484
495
43.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences171
uniqueOpeners54
70.42% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences142
matches
0"Only bark and shadow."
1"Just air moving in a"
2"Just the rhythm of that"
ratio0.021
98.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences142
matches
0"Her boots sank into damp"
1"She checked her wristwatch."
2"She stepped past the first"
3"She adjusted the strap of"
4"It pointed through service alleys,"
5"She unfolded the napkin."
6"She tucked the paper back"
7"It resisted her movement, pulling"
8"It drifted backward, sliding toward"
9"Her breath did not fade."
10"She exhaled again."
11"She watched the watch face."
12"She tapped the glass."
13"She narrowed her eyes."
14"She walked forward."
15"It pressed against her skin,"
16"Their scent shifted from mint"
17"She pushed a petal aside."
18"She followed the split birch"
19"It pulsed in a rhythm"
ratio0.303
9.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences142
matches
0"The oak standing stones rose"
1"Aurora stopped at the boundary"
2"Her boots sank into damp"
3"The Heartstone pendant hung against"
4"She checked her wristwatch."
5"The needle jittered between eleven"
6"She stepped past the first"
7"The clearing opened without warning."
8"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
9"Dew clung to every stem."
10"Aurora pressed her thumb against"
11"The raised flesh anchored her."
12"She adjusted the strap of"
13"Tonight she carried only the"
14"The paper had arrived that"
15"It pointed through service alleys,"
16"She unfolded the napkin."
17"The ink smeared in the"
18"Stop where the moss turns"
19"She tucked the paper back"
ratio0.901
35.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences142
matches
0"To her left."
ratio0.007
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her boots sank into damp soil that carried the heavy scent of crushed mint and stagnant water."
1"It resisted her movement, pulling at her jacket, slowing her breath."
2"The grove plunged into absolute dark, save for the pendant’s glow, which cast long, jerking shadows against the trees."
3"She reached blindly behind her, fingers closing around the heavy flashlight base now resting against the root."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.6621%