| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 83.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 4.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1514 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "fractured" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "silence" | | 15 | "familiar" | | 16 | "etched" | | 17 | "silk" | | 18 | "aligned" | | 19 | "tension" | | 20 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1514 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "We are not the first to walk this floor, Nyx murmured." | | 1 | "Watch where you place your hands, Isolde said." | | 2 | "I walk nowhere that I do not intend to, Nyx replied, though the whisper held a thin edge." | | 3 | "A rift, they breathed." |
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| 87.25% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1514 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 19 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 4 | | Nyx | 8 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Isolde | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 6 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.873 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "darkness that seemed to breathe separately from the woman who wore it" | | 1 | "felt like cutting through wet silk stre" |
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| 67.90% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.321 | | wordCount | 1514 | | matches | | 0 | "not a relic, but a natural formation: a cluster of interlocking geodes the si" | | 1 | "not a sin but a law of physics" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.41% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 58.23 | | std | 26.55 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 138 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 65 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 68 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 90 | | 22 | 35 | | 23 | 76 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 51.30% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 269 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t creating" | | 1 | "was pushing" | | 2 | "was already cataloging" | | 3 | "was actively drawing" | | 4 | "were standing" | | 5 | "was pushing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Light did not fall here; it pooled." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1526 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "resilient, moss-damp surface" |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.020314547837483616 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009174311926605505 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 10.81 | | std | 6.85 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 35 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 42.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3357142857142857 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 25.06% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she let her eyes" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "It softened into a resilient," | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She did not speak at" | | 3 | "She never did, not until" | | 4 | "We are not the first" | | 5 | "She kept her fingers hidden" | | 6 | "It grew warmer with each" | | 7 | "It was a steady, rhythmic" | | 8 | "She had learned to read" | | 9 | "Their bark was pale and" | | 10 | "Her voice was clear, untouched" | | 11 | "I walk nowhere that I" | | 12 | "They care for resonance." | | 13 | "They reached a widening." | | 14 | "She stepped forward, the Fae-forged" | | 15 | "She did not draw it" | | 16 | "They spoke of thresholds." | | 17 | "She brushed away a layer" | | 18 | "They were topographical." | | 19 | "Her breath caught." |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 53.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone beneath Aurora’s boots" | | 1 | "It softened into a resilient," | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The air had changed the" | | 4 | "Light did not fall here;" | | 5 | "Isolde moved ahead without leaving" | | 6 | "Aurora watched the older woman’s" | | 7 | "The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair" | | 8 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 9 | "She did not speak at" | | 10 | "She never did, not until" | | 11 | "Nyx trailed half a paces" | | 12 | "The Shade’s form shifted between" | | 13 | "We are not the first" | | 14 | "The voice arrived in Aurora’s" | | 15 | "Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant" | | 16 | "She kept her fingers hidden" | | 17 | "It grew warmer with each" | | 18 | "It was a steady, rhythmic" | | 19 | "A Hel portal was close." |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 37.59% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "If the solstice weakened the" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 76.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It softened into a resilient, moss-damp surface that yielded slightly with every step, humming against her soles like a plucked string." | | 1 | "In its place came a dry, sweet warmth that carried the scent of overripe plums, crushed cardamom, and something faintly metallic, like ozone before a storm." | | 2 | "The Half-Fae’s waist-length silver hair caught the ambient glow, drifting as if caught in an updraft that didn’t exist." | | 3 | "Between the ribs of the wood, crystalline vines dripped slow droplets of liquid light that vanished before they struck the ground." | | 4 | "Shadows pooled there, thick and deliberate, forming a rough archway that hadn’t been visible moments before." | | 5 | "She adjusted her coat, feeling the rough canvas against her palms, grounding herself in the weight of her own body." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |