Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ7A5QN1HCW7NAR65MS9KR35

Run Details

Duration:
4m 9s
Cost:
$0.060440
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled through the front window of The Raven’s Nest, painting the scuffed floorboards in sickly emerald. Rain lashed against the glass, turning Soho into a watercolour of smeared tail-lights and hurried silhouettes. Rory traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb. The leather seat of the booth groaned under her shift. A stack of delivery receipts sat untouched beside her half-empty glass of stout. Silas moved behind the bar, his left leg dragging a fraction with each step. He polished a tumbler with a linen cloth, his silver signet ring catching the low light. Old maps and grainy photographs pinned the walls to a heavy quiet. The room held the smell of damp wool, stale beer, and fried ginger from the delivery bag resting against Rory’s boot. The bell above the door chimed. A draft cut through the stale warmth, carrying the scent of wet pavement and exhaust. Rory glanced up. A woman stood on the threshold, shaking water from a tailored wool coat. Her hair, once a wild cascade of copper, now fell in a severe, chin-length bob. Her posture held a rigid line, shoulders squared against the room. She scanned the booths. Her eyes caught Rory’s. The air between them tightened. Rory straightened. The receipts slipped to the floor. She left them where they landed. The woman stepped forward. Her heels clicked against the wood, steady and measured. She stopped at the edge of the table. Her fingers tightened around the strap of a leather satchel. You kept the same corner. Rory nodded. The stout tasted flat on her tongue. She pushed the glass aside. You cut your hair. The woman unbuttoned her coat. She slid into the opposite seat. The leather creaked. She placed the satchel on the table, aligning the edges with the wood grain. Three years changes a lot of things. The tube still runs late. The rain still soaks through cheap shoes. You still hide in the shadows. Silas limped over. He set a coaster down, his hazel eyes flicking between them. He waited. Whisky. Neat. Whatever single malt you have left. Silas turned. His ring tapped against a bottle neck. He poured, the amber liquid catching the neon glow. He set the glass down and retreated to the shadows near the bookshelf that hid the back room. Rory watched the condensation bead on her own glass. She rubbed her thumb over the scar again. I thought you stayed in Cardiff. I did. Until the firm transferred the London branch. Until the lease ran out. Until the silence in the flat grew too loud to ignore. Eva unclasped her hands. She rested them flat on the table. Her knuckles stood white. I walk past this street every Tuesday. I never looked at the sign. Tonight the rain forced me under the awning. I saw the green light. I saw you. Rory picked at a loose thread on her jumper. The delivery bag sat by her feet, damp and heavy with the smell of soy and star anise. You look different. Eva lifted the whisky. She took a slow sip. Her throat worked. She set the glass down with a sharp click. I wear suits now. I draft contracts for property developers who tear down council estates. I drink coffee that costs more than our weekly shop at uni. I sleep four hours a night and wake up checking my phone for emails that never stop. The fire you remember burnt out. Someone poured water on it. Someone handed me a spreadsheet instead. Rory leaned back. The booth’s vinyl pressed cold against her spine. She remembered a girl who chained herself to a library railing to protest tuition hikes. She remembered laughter echoing across Bute Park, cheap cider spilling over grass stains. She remembered a phone call at two in the morning, a voice cracking through static, telling her to pack a bag, to leave Evan, to run before the bruises turned permanent. You told me to leave. I told you to survive. Eva’s jaw tightened. A muscle jumped near her temple. I bought your train ticket. I stood on the platform and watched the carriage pull away. I went back to a city that felt smaller every day. I answered calls from your mother. I lied about where you went. I watched your father pace the hallway, his briefcase heavy with case files he could not use to fix his own daughter. Rory’s fingers stilled. The scar burned under her touch. She dropped her hand to her lap. I sent letters. You sent postcards. No return address. Just pictures of bridges and markets and a scribbled line about the weather. I kept them in a shoebox. I stopped opening them after the first year. The ink smudged. The paper warped. The words stopped meaning anything. Silas wiped down the counter. The cloth moved in deliberate circles. He did not look up. The maps on the wall leaned closer, their faded borders holding decades of crossed lines and dead ends. Rory shifted. The delivery receipts lay scattered near her boot. She kicked one. It slid under the table. I worked doubles. I slept on a mattress with a broken spring. I learned the back alleys of Shoreditch and the shortcuts through Covent Garden. I kept my head down. I did not look back because looking back meant stopping. Stopping meant he would find me. Eva traced the rim of her glass. Her nail clicked against the crystal. A shallow breath escaped her. He married a girl from Penarth. They own a detached house with a gravel driveway. He plays golf on Sundays. The world moved on. You ran from a ghost. I stayed and let the ghost wear my face. Rory’s throat tightened. She swallowed. The stout left a bitter coat on her tongue. She reached for her glass, found it empty, and set it back down. You pushed me onto that train. You saved me. I saved you and lost myself. Eva’s voice dropped. The words came out flat, stripped of inflection. I took the job your father wanted. I wore the clothes your mother approved of. I smiled at dinners where men talked over me and patted my shoulder like an obedient dog. I became exactly what we swore we would burn down. I look in the mirror and see a stranger wearing my skin. I come to London to escape the quiet. I find you sitting in a dim bar, wearing a delivery jacket, looking exactly like the girl who left. You froze time. I let it grind me down. Rory picked up a beer mat. She tore the corner. The cardboard frayed under her nail. She lined the shredded pieces along the edge of the table. I deliver noodles for a living. I live above a pub owned by a man who limps and watches the door like he expects trouble. I wake up at dawn and ride a bicycle through traffic until my legs burn. I am not frozen. I am just breathing. Eva closed her eyes. She pressed two fingers to her brow. She held the pose for a long moment. When she opened them, the hardness had fractured. A wet sheen caught the neon light. I miss the noise. I miss the terrible music you played on that cracked speaker. I miss stealing chips from your plate while you argued about tort law. I miss believing that we could actually change something. Now I just bill hours. I just sign my name on documents that evict families. I just exist. Rory stopped tearing the mat. She pushed the fragments into a small pile. She looked up. The green light washed over Eva’s face, carving shadows under her eyes, highlighting the fine lines that had not been there three years ago. You can stop. Eva laughed. The sound came out short, brittle. She shook her head. Mortgages do not stop. Pensions do not stop. Expectations do not stop. You think you can just walk away because you did it once. You think the world waits for you to catch your breath. It does not. It eats you while you stand still. Silas set a fresh glass of water on the table. Condensation pooled on the wood. He tapped his signet ring twice against the edge and moved back to the taps. The pipes groaned. Beer flowed into a pint glass, foam rising steady and thick. Rory wrapped her hands around the water. The cold seeped into her palms. She lifted it, took a sip, and set it down. You bought my ticket. You stood on the platform. You carried the weight so I could run. I owe you that. I owe you more than postcards and silence. Eva stared at the water glass. Her reflection warped in the condensation. She reached out, her fingers hovering an inch from Rory’s hand. She pulled back. She smoothed the front of her coat. Debt does not fix rot. Apologies do not rebuild bridges. I came in here because the rain forced me. I stayed because I wanted to see if you remembered me. You do. That is enough. That has to be enough. Rory’s chest tightened. She forced air into her lungs. She watched Eva’s hand rest on the satchel strap, knuckles pale, tendons rigid. The years sat between them like a third person, heavy and immovable. Stay for another drink. Eva buttoned her coat. The wool pulled tight across her shoulders. She stood. The chair legs scraped against the floorboards. She picked up the satchel, the leather creaking under her grip. I have a meeting at eight. I have a train to catch. I have a life that runs on a schedule I did not write. Drink your water, Rory. Keep your head down. Keep riding. She turned. Her heels struck the wood. She walked toward the door, her posture rigid, her shadow stretching long against the maps and photographs. The bell chimed. The green neon flared. The door shut. The rain continued its steady hammer against the glass.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1685
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"carried the weight"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"warmth"
2"scanned"
3"measured"
4"silence"
5"echoing"
6"crystal"
7"fractured"
8"carried the weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences229
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences229
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences229
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1685
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1685
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory18
Cardiff1
London2
Tuesday1
Bute1
Park1
Evan1
Shoreditch1
Covent1
Garden1
Penarth1
Sundays1
Eva11
Silas5
You17
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Bute"
4"Park"
5"Covent"
6"Garden"
7"Penarth"
globalScore0.966
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences132
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1685
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences229
matches
0"believing that we"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean33.04
std26.21
cv0.793
sampleLengths
0134
176
214
331
45
514
64
728
825
916
108
1136
1217
136
1469
1527
163
1721
1861
1970
205
2175
2216
233
2444
2534
2618
2746
2818
2938
3027
319
32107
3327
3448
3534
3655
3740
383
3912
4045
4144
4223
4329
4433
4540
4634
474
4831
4935
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences229
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs340
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences229
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1688
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.017772511848341232
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.002962085308056872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences229
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences229
mean7.36
std4.67
cv0.634
sampleLengths
020
116
212
310
413
514
616
712
821
96
1015
113
1213
1315
1411
154
164
175
182
196
206
214
229
238
2410
255
262
277
285
294
305
316
323
3314
347
355
367
376
383
3911
402
411
421
436
442
457
469
4718
489
498
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats61
diversityRatio0.16593886462882096
totalSentences229
uniqueOpeners38
15.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences215
matches
0"Just pictures of bridges and"
ratio0.005
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount122
totalSentences215
matches
0"He polished a tumbler with"
1"Her hair, once a wild"
2"Her posture held a rigid"
3"She scanned the booths."
4"Her eyes caught Rory’s."
5"She left them where they"
6"Her heels clicked against the"
7"She stopped at the edge"
8"Her fingers tightened around the"
9"You kept the same corner."
10"She pushed the glass aside."
11"You cut your hair."
12"She slid into the opposite"
13"She placed the satchel on"
14"You still hide in the"
15"He set a coaster down,"
16"His ring tapped against a"
17"He poured, the amber liquid"
18"He set the glass down"
19"She rubbed her thumb over"
ratio0.567
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount202
totalSentences215
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Rain lashed against the glass,"
2"Rory traced the crescent scar"
3"The leather seat of the"
4"A stack of delivery receipts"
5"Silas moved behind the bar,"
6"He polished a tumbler with"
7"The room held the smell"
8"The bell above the door"
9"A draft cut through the"
10"Rory glanced up."
11"A woman stood on the"
12"Her hair, once a wild"
13"Her posture held a rigid"
14"She scanned the booths."
15"Her eyes caught Rory’s."
16"The air between them tightened."
17"The receipts slipped to the"
18"She left them where they"
19"The woman stepped forward."
ratio0.94
23.26% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences215
matches
0"Now I just bill hours."
ratio0.005
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"I draft contracts for property developers who tear down council estates."
1"I find you sitting in a dim bar, wearing a delivery jacket, looking exactly like the girl who left."
2"I just sign my name on documents that evict families."
3"The green light washed over Eva’s face, carving shadows under her eyes, highlighting the fine lines that had not been there three years ago."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0172%