Run: 2026-05-01-01KQHQH5ME2G6365YE4BHSD1SV

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wrenched the door open, the last deadbolt still rattling in its housing. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow landing, slate-grey suit tailored to his frame, platinum hair swept back like he had stepped from a boardroom instead of the curry-scented stairwell. His cane rested lightly against one shoulder, ivory handle catching the weak bulb light. One amber eye, one black. Both fixed on her. “You have some nerve.” She blocked the doorway with her body, fingers digging into the chipped paint of the frame. “Three weeks, Rory. Not a single word.” His voice carried the smooth lilt of Marseille tempered by years in London, each syllable precise. “Eva said you were bleeding the last time she saw you. I came to verify the damage myself.” “The damage was your fault.” She laughed once, sharp and low. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched under his gaze. She tucked the hand behind her back. “You disappeared after Evan’s body turned up in the Thames. No note. No explanation. Just blood on my coat and your scent all over my skin.” He stepped forward. She refused to retreat. The heat of him pressed against the chill clinging to her thin jumper, and her pulse answered with a treacherous kick. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring like a traitor at the scent of brimstone and expensive cologne. “May I come in?” Lucien asked, though the tilt of his chin made it clear he would enter regardless. Rory exhaled through her nose. She moved aside. He crossed the threshold, filling the cramped flat the way he filled every space he occupied, effortless and absolute. Scrolls spilled across the coffee table. Books stacked like crooked towers on every surface. The tang of old paper mixed with the cumin and chilli rising from the curry house below. He closed the door behind him with a soft click. The three deadbolts he engaged one by one without asking. She watched the elegant motion of his gloved hand and hated how the gesture felt intimate. “You shouldn’t be here.” She crossed to the kitchenette and snatched up a half-drunk mug of tea gone cold. Anything to put distance between them. “Eva’s out chasing a lead on that grimoire. She won’t be back for hours.” “Good.” He set the cane against the wall. The concealed blade inside whispered against the wood. “Then we can speak plainly.” Rory drank the cold tea anyway. It tasted of tannin and regret. When she lowered the mug, he stood closer than before. The flat’s low ceiling forced them into the same breathing space. She could see the faint scar that cut through his left eyebrow, a souvenir from the night they had burned Evan’s warehouse together. Flames and moonlight and Lucien’s mouth on hers while her ex screamed somewhere in the smoke. “You told me you had control,” she said quietly. “Then I watched black fire pour out of your hands like it enjoyed the taste of him. You smiled, Luc. Actually smiled.” His jaw flexed. The amber eye warmed; the black one stayed depthless. “And you stayed until the end. Do not rewrite history to suit your fear, chérie.” “I’m not afraid of you.” The lie burned her tongue. She set the mug down too hard. Ceramic met wood with a crack. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist. To the pale crescent there. Before she could stop him, he caught her hand. His thumb traced the scar with a touch so gentle it stole the air from her lungs. The flat narrowed to the point of contact, to the rough pad of his thumb and the rasp of his breath. “You should be,” he murmured. “I am half of a world that devours girls like you. But you keep opening doors for me anyway.” She should have pulled away. Instead she watched his mouth form the words, remembering exactly how those lips had felt against the hollow of her throat, against the inside of her thigh, against every secret she had sworn no one would ever touch again. Heat pooled low in her belly, traitorous and familiar. “You left me to clean up the pieces alone.” Her voice cracked on the last word. She hated that crack. “I had to lie to the police. I had to watch Eva look at me like I’d become something unrecognisable. All because you couldn’t finish what you started.” His grip tightened, not painful, but enough to remind her how easily he could crush bone if the demon half slipped its leash. “I left because the Avaros delegation smelled me on you. They send hunters for lesser sins than bedding a human who carries my mark. I stayed away to keep them from your door.” A muscle jumped in his cheek. “Clearly they came anyway.” Rory’s stomach flipped. “What?” “Three low-level imps have been circling Brick Lane for two nights.” He released her wrist but did not step back. The absence of his touch felt worse than the contact. “They carry Evan’s scent. Someone bound his dying rage into a construct. Crude work. Effective. It wants the woman who watched him burn.” The information landed between them like a blade. Rory’s mind spun through contingencies, mapping exits, weighing the sigils Eva had scribbled on the windows. Years of law studies and late-night research collided with raw instinct. She moved past him to the window, twitched the curtain aside. The alley below swam with steam from the curry house vents. Nothing moved that should not move. Yet. “You came to warn me.” She kept her back to him, needing the distance. “Fine. Warning delivered. Now go.” “No.” The single word slid along her spine like a fingertip. She turned. Lucien had removed his gloves. His bare hands looked indecently elegant against the chaos of Eva’s research. He lifted a scroll, scanned it, set it down again. The motion pulled his suit jacket tight across his shoulders. “I came to finish what I began the night we met.” His heterochromatic eyes lifted to hers. “You ran from Cardiff to escape one monster. You found another. Difference is, this monster would burn kingdoms before he let you bleed for him again.” The air thickened. Ptolemy leapt onto the bookshelf and watched them with unblinking green eyes, tail flicking. Rory’s heart hammered so hard she felt it in her teeth. She hated how his words landed inside her chest and rearranged furniture she had nailed down months ago. “You don’t get to decide that for me.” She advanced on him despite every alarm bell screaming in her skull. “You don’t get to vanish, then reappear and expect me to fall back into your bed like nothing happened.” “I expect nothing.” Lucien’s voice dropped, velvet over gravel. “I ask. Once. After that I take what you offer and guard it with teeth and claw and anything else this cursed blood gives me.” He stood mere inches away now. The scent of him—smoke, myrrh, something electric—curled around her senses. She remembered the weight of him above her, the way his mismatched eyes had glowed in the dark when he lost control, the way he had whispered her name like a prayer and a curse at once. Her body remembered too. It leaned toward him without permission. Rory lifted her hand and pressed two fingers against the centre of his chest, feeling the steady thunder beneath charcoal wool. “I hate you for what you are.” “Liar.” He caught her fingers, brought them to his mouth. The brush of his lips against her knuckles undid years of careful distance. “Your pulse tells a different story.” She should have shoved him. Should have screamed for Eva’s wards to activate and hurl him back into the street. Instead she curled her fingers into his lapel and dragged him down until their foreheads touched. Their breath mingled, hot and ragged. “Tell me the truth,” she whispered. “All of it. No more half-truths wrapped in that pretty French accent.” Lucien’s free hand slid to her hip, possessive. “The truth is I have thought of nothing but your mouth for three weeks. The truth is the demon half of me wants to mark you so thoroughly no construct of Evan’s rage could ever find you again. The truth is if you tell me to leave right now, I will walk out that door and keep walking until the world forgets my name.” His voice roughened. “But you will not tell me to leave, Rory. Because you opened the door.” The flat felt too small, the air too thick. Ptolemy chose that moment to knock a stack of books to the floor with a deliberate paw. The crash jolted through them both. Lucien’s head snapped toward the window, nostrils flaring. His expression shifted from hunger to something colder, sharper. The fixer surfaced. The half-demon. Both dangerous. “Too late for conversation.” He released her and reached for his cane in one fluid motion. “They are already here.” Rory followed his gaze. Shadows moved wrong along the alley wall, too many joints, too much hunger in the way they stretched toward the glass. The temperature in the flat plummeted. Her breath fogged. The scent of sulphur bled through the curry steam. Lucien unsheathed the thin blade hidden inside the cane. Silver etched with Avaros runes caught the light. “Get behind me.” She did not move. Instead she snatched the nearest scroll, one of Eva’s containment sigils half-drawn in red ink, and stepped up beside him. Their shoulders brushed. Heat against ice. Past against present. The first imp hit the window with a sound like wet meat on concrete. Glass cracked in a spiderweb. Black eyes and needle teeth pressed against the fracturing pane, grinning with Evan’s dead smile. Rory’s grip tightened on the scroll. Lucien’s blade rose. “Stay close,” he said, voice low and lethal. “This time I am not leaving you alone with the monsters.” The window exploded inward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She laughed once [once]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.477
leniency0.955
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.091
96.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1662
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"treacherous"
count1
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"chill"
2"pulse"
3"treacherous"
4"effortless"
5"eyebrow"
6"traced"
7"familiar"
8"stomach"
9"scanned"
10"velvet"
11"electric"
12"weight"
13"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1660
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1158
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Marseille1
London1
Rory9
Evan2
Lucien10
Eva4
Avaros1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Avaros"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.602
wordCount1660
matches
0"not painful, but enough to remind her how easily he could crush bone if the d"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences143
matches
0"hated that crack"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean36.09
std20.82
cv0.577
sampleLengths
064
120
241
356
445
519
678
716
839
921
1072
1131
1227
1323
1458
1524
1653
1748
1866
194
2053
2164
2219
231
2449
2543
2646
2739
2834
2963
3028
3129
3242
3318
3489
3540
3616
3720
3843
3917
403
4133
4234
439
4419
454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences143
ratio0.014
matches
0"The amber eye warmed; the black one stayed depthless."
1"The scent of him—smoke, myrrh, something electric—curled around her senses."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03173241852487135
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005145797598627788
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean11.61
std8.96
cv0.772
sampleLengths
013
128
214
35
44
520
623
718
811
912
107
1126
123
134
1421
1517
1619
175
183
1919
206
218
2217
2310
2410
2516
2619
276
2814
298
308
315
326
336
3410
3511
3623
3716
389
3922
403
419
4215
4310
447
456
466
475
489
4917
58.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3706293706293706
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners53
87.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences114
matches
0"Instead she watched his mouth"
1"Instead she curled her fingers"
2"Instead she snatched the nearest"
ratio0.026
62.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences114
matches
0"His cane rested lightly against"
1"She blocked the doorway with"
2"His voice carried the smooth"
3"She laughed once, sharp and"
4"She tucked the hand behind"
5"He stepped forward."
6"She refused to retreat."
7"She moved aside."
8"He crossed the threshold, filling"
9"He closed the door behind"
10"She watched the elegant motion"
11"She crossed to the kitchenette"
12"He set the cane against"
13"It tasted of tannin and"
14"She could see the faint"
15"she said quietly"
16"His jaw flexed."
17"She set the mug down"
18"His thumb traced the scar"
19"She should have pulled away."
ratio0.395
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences114
matches
0"Rory wrenched the door open,"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
2"His cane rested lightly against"
3"Both fixed on her."
4"She blocked the doorway with"
5"His voice carried the smooth"
6"She laughed once, sharp and"
7"The small crescent scar on"
8"She tucked the hand behind"
9"He stepped forward."
10"She refused to retreat."
11"The heat of him pressed"
12"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
13"Lucien asked, though the tilt"
14"Rory exhaled through her nose."
15"She moved aside."
16"He crossed the threshold, filling"
17"Scrolls spilled across the coffee"
18"Books stacked like crooked towers"
19"The tang of old paper"
ratio0.895
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"To the pale crescent there."
1"Before she could stop him,"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She blocked, fingers digging into the chipped paint of the frame"
1"he said, voice low and lethal"
81.82% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed once (laugh)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.136
90.6738%