Run: 2026-05-01-01KQHQNGTMYQ38DN2F0TZQPYD0

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1m 21s
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$0.015143
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xAI

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door flew open under Rory's grip, the final deadbolt scraping like it resented the intrusion. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold, his charcoal suit cutting sharp lines against the stained brick of the stairwell, platinum hair catching the sickly glare from the single bulb overhead. One amber eye met hers while the black one seemed to swallow the light. "Step aside, Aurora." His accent thickened the direct order, vowels sliding like warm honey left too long on the stove. She barred the narrow gap with her body, shoulder-length black hair falling forward as she leaned into the frame. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched under her sleeve. "Use my name like that again and I'll shut this door on whatever brought you here." She paused, took in the ivory-handled cane resting against his leg. "Or did you forget the last time you walked away without explanation?" Lucien tilted his head, the heterochromatic gaze dropping briefly to the tabby weaving between her ankles. Ptolemy bumped his head against her calf then padded toward the newcomer, tail flicking. Curry spices from the shop below curled up the stairwell, heavy and familiar, mixing with the old-paper scent that clung to every surface inside Eva's flat. Books stacked on the battered sofa, more on the floor, crowded the single bedroom door. "I find explanations tedious when action serves better." He advanced a step, close enough that the tailored wool of his sleeve brushed her forearm. Heat rose from him, nothing to do with the London summer outside. "Your ex found your old address. Evan knocked on the bar last night. Silas sent word through the usual channels." Rory's fingers tightened on the door edge. Evan. The name alone pulled the old ache behind her ribs, the one that had driven her out of Cardiff and straight into Eva's spare room above Brick Lane. Quick thinking had kept her alive then; it needed to work now. "So this visit is what? Protection detail? Or did you decide to collect on the favour I never promised?" His mouth curved, not quite a smile. "You left the Golden Empress shift early yesterday. Delivery route altered, package rerouted through the supplier in Whitechapel. Useful coincidence for someone who knows the routes." She released the door and turned into the flat, aware of him following without invitation. The space closed around them, one-bedroom chaos forcing proximity. She nudged a stack of scrolls aside with her foot, clearing a path to the tiny kitchenette. "You track my deliveries now? That crosses from information brokerage into obsession." Lucien set the cane against the counter, the concealed blade hidden in plain sight. He shed his jacket, folding it with precise movements across the back of a wooden chair. The shirt beneath hugged broad shoulders. "Obsession implies lack of control. I prefer preparation. Your friend Eva keeps useful contacts. I merely utilised them when your name surfaced in conversation with the wrong people." Ptolemy jumped onto the counter and rubbed against Lucien's forearm. Rory watched the half-demon's long fingers stroke the cat's fur, gentle where she expected calculation. Their last encounter had ended in a shadowed alcove behind Silas' bar, his mouth on hers, her hands fisted in his shirt, breath shared until something inside him flared hot enough to burn. He'd pulled back then, eyes shuttered, murmuring something in French she hadn't caught. Two weeks of silence followed. She filled the kettle from the tap, back turned as water hissed into the metal. "Complicated doesn't cover it, Luc." The shortened name slipped out, traitorous. "You kissed me like you needed it to survive, then vanished the moment Evan’s name hit the air. Left me to handle the fallout myself." "Distance was mercy." The kettle clicked on behind her. His voice stayed low, threaded with something darker. "My kind does not mix cleanly with human entanglements. You have a scar from one man already. I would not add another." Rory spun, arms crossed. Bright blue eyes narrowed. "Mercy would have been honesty. Instead I waited at the bar like a fool while Silas poured doubles and asked no questions." She reached for two mugs, movements sharp. "Now you walk in here like the past owes you nothing. Tell me exactly what Evan bought this time." Lucien closed the remaining distance in two strides. The amber eye flicked to the window overlooking the street, black one fixed on her. "He paid for a name. Your current location, current employment. The supplier in Whitechapel keeps ledgers. He flipped the right page." Her pulse kicked harder, but she poured the boiling water with steady hands. The steam rose between them, jasmine tea leaves unfurling in both mugs. "And you decided to play messenger instead of eliminating the threat? Your usual style, from what I hear in the underground." He took one mug, fingers brushing hers deliberately. The contact sparked the same pull from that night behind the bar. "Elimination draws attention. I am not the one who wanted you back in Cardiff, under his roof, under his fists." He sipped, then set the mug down. "I came to offer an alternative. You stay visible. I make certain people lose interest in paperwork." Rory studied him over the rim of her own cup. The foreign scent of his cologne clung to the close air, something smoky and expensive that cut through the curry below. The flat felt smaller with him in it, walls pressing in around stacks of Eva's research notes. "Alternative means strings. Strings from half-demon hands tend to strangle." A low sound left him, almost amused. "You fled one controlling man. Do not paint me in his colours." He leaned a hip against the counter, cane within reach. "Your quick thinking saved a delivery run once. You noticed the forged seal before the package reached the buyer. That skill still serves. Help me locate the ledger page. In return I ensure Evan receives incorrect coordinates tonight." She set her mug down harder than intended. The cat startled and dropped to the floor, padding toward the bedroom. "Help you? After you left me standing in that alcove like I was some temporary fix?" The words tasted bitter, but she forced them out. "Attraction does not erase the disappearance. It does not erase the silence." His hand lifted, hovering near her wrist without touching the scar. "Silence protected you from my realm. Avaros claws at control. My father’s blood makes promises dangerous." The black eye darkened further. "Yet here I stand, breaking my own rule because your safety now outweighs good sense." Rory stepped back, until the counter edge dug into her spine. The movement brought her shoulder against a shelf of scrolls; one toppled, spilling handwritten notes across the floor. She ignored them. "Good sense would have kept you away. You show up unannounced because you cannot stay away, Lucien. Admit it." The corners of his mouth tightened. "You read too much into professional courtesy." She laughed once, short and sharp. "Professional courtesy involves a phone call. This is obsession dressed in tailored wool." Her gaze dropped to his mouth, then lifted again. Heat climbed her throat despite the argument. "One word from you last month and I would have walked into whatever danger followed. Instead I handled deliveries and kept my head down like the coward I refused to become." Lucien moved then, sudden and controlled. His body blocked the narrow kitchen space, one hand bracing on the counter beside her hip. The other caught her chin, thumb brushing the corner of her jaw. "Cowardice never described you, Rory. Reckless, perhaps. Intelligent enough to recognise the pull between us and still open that door tonight." The contact burned. She stayed still, refusing to lean into it even as her pulse betrayed her. The flat's single overhead light haloed his platinum hair. Curry drifted up again, thick and grounding. "You want me to run with you? To what end? Another kiss in another alley before you vanish again?" "To safety first." His voice dropped lower. "Then we address the rest. Your flat above the bar is compromised. Eva's research notes are thorough on suppression runes. We retrieve what you need, then disappear long enough for the wrong people to forget your name." She searched his mismatched eyes. The amber one held something raw, the black one calculating. Her hand rose of its own accord, fingers knotting in the front of his shirt the way they had that night. "And if I refuse?" "You won't." He released her chin, but the other hand stayed at her hip. "Because Evan already knows your shift ends at ten. Ten minutes until he arrives on Brick Lane." The words landed like a second deadbolt. Rory released his shirt and pushed past him, reaching for the coat draped over the sofa. Ptolemy meowed from the bedroom doorway. She scooped the tabby up, depositing him on the windowsill. "Five minutes to grab the notes Eva marked. You watch the street." Lucien retrieved his cane and jacket in one fluid motion. He moved to the window, parting the curtain just enough to scan the lane below. "Time is short. Your quick thinking, Aurora." She paused by the bedroom door, one hand on the frame. The past sat between them like another body in the cramped room—hurt tangled with the memory of his mouth, the heat that had flared and been denied. "This changes nothing about the silence. But if Evan crosses my path tonight, your blade better earn its keep." His gaze flicked from the window to her. "It will." She ducked into the bedroom, fingers already sorting through the scrolls Eva had labelled in hurried script. The smell of ink rose sharper here. From the main room came the soft click of Lucien's cane against floorboards as he shifted stance. The curtain whispered closed again. Downstairs, the curry house server shouted an order. Brick Lane traffic hummed two floors below. Rory's hands slowed on a particular bundle of notes. The top sheet bore a rune Eva had sketched beside a phone number she recognised as Lucien's. She folded the page, slipping it into her jacket instead of the main stack. Return to the threshold now would mean walking past him again, close enough to feel that heat one more time before the night turned dangerous. The flat's security had kept her hidden. His arrival had already cracked it open. The front door downstairs slammed. Voices rose on the stairwell, one familiar in its hard edge. Evan.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He sipped then [then]"
1"The black eye darkened further [further]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.098
97.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1758
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"encounter"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"ensure"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"encounter"
2"silence"
3"flicked"
4"pulse"
5"ensure"
6"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1757
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1083
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Moreau1
Lucien9
Eva5
Heat2
London1
Cardiff1
Brick2
Lane2
French1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Heat"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1757
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"had that night"
1"feel that heat"
52.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean48.81
std16.36
cv0.335
sampleLengths
059
120
270
371
456
567
633
753
864
976
1051
1139
1256
1344
1446
1564
1658
1767
1857
1947
2051
2113
2266
2355
2452
2544
2640
2731
2851
2932
3057
3110
3261
3340
3439
3517
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"been denied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
73.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences124
ratio0.024
matches
0"Quick thinking had kept her alive then; it needed to work now."
1"The movement brought her shoulder against a shelf of scrolls; one toppled, spilling handwritten notes across the floor."
2"The past sat between them like another body in the cramped room—hurt tangled with the memory of his mouth, the heat that had flared and been denied."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount833
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03601440576230492
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004801920768307323
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean14.17
std7.76
cv0.548
sampleLengths
016
129
214
320
419
512
627
712
816
914
1026
1115
1224
1312
1420
157
161
1728
1812
1919
207
2126
2215
239
2417
2512
2614
2716
286
2928
3010
3115
3233
3313
345
3515
3611
3725
389
398
4022
414
424
4329
4419
458
4615
4721
4813
4912
70.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4274193548387097
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners53
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Bright blue eyes narrowed."
ratio0.011
71.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences94
matches
0"His accent thickened the direct"
1"She barred the narrow gap"
2"She paused, took in the"
3"He advanced a step, close"
4"His mouth curved, not quite"
5"She released the door and"
6"She nudged a stack of"
7"He shed his jacket, folding"
8"Their last encounter had ended"
9"He'd pulled back then, eyes"
10"She filled the kettle from"
11"His voice stayed low, threaded"
12"She reached for two mugs,"
13"Her pulse kicked harder, but"
14"He took one mug, fingers"
15"He sipped, then set the"
16"He leaned a hip against"
17"She set her mug down"
18"His hand lifted, hovering near"
19"She ignored them."
ratio0.372
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences94
matches
0"The door flew open under"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold,"
2"His accent thickened the direct"
3"She barred the narrow gap"
4"The small crescent scar on"
5"She paused, took in the"
6"Lucien tilted his head, the"
7"Ptolemy bumped his head against"
8"Curry spices from the shop"
9"Books stacked on the battered"
10"He advanced a step, close"
11"Heat rose from him, nothing"
12"Rory's fingers tightened on the"
13"The name alone pulled the"
14"His mouth curved, not quite"
15"She released the door and"
16"The space closed around them,"
17"She nudged a stack of"
18"Lucien set the cane against"
19"He shed his jacket, folding"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Curry spices from the shop below curled up the stairwell, heavy and familiar, mixing with the old-paper scent that clung to every surface inside Eva's flat."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"name slipped out, traitorous"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.1031%