| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "The alias felt like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.078 | |
| 74.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2349 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "perfectly" | | 6 | "gently" | | 7 | "suddenly" | | 8 | "quickly" | | 9 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2349 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "effortless" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "lilt" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "eyebrow" | | 10 | "unravel" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "intensity" | | 13 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 157 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 190 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2332 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When his mouth left hers to trail fire down the column of her throat, she gasped his name like an invocation." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1866 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Eva | 7 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Lucien | 16 | | Old | 2 | | King | 1 | | Cross | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Lane | 1 | | Papers | 1 | | French | 1 | | Bengali | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "King" | | 6 | "Cross" | | 7 | "Aurora" | | 8 | "Papers" |
| | places | | 0 | "Lane" | | 1 | "Bengali" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 25.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed broader now, the ivory-handled cane held loosely in his left hand like a gentleman’s affectation instead of the weapon it truly was" | | 1 | "felt like a countdown" | | 2 | "felt like ash on her tongue" | | 3 | "sounded like a prayer and a curse at once" | | 4 | "felt like sunlight breaking through sto" | | 5 | "felt like coming home and falling apart" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2332 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 66 | | mean | 35.33 | | std | 24.54 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 86 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 90 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 98 | | 31 | 45 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 53 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 43 | | 40 | 58 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 90 | | 44 | 63 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 63 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 157 | | matches | | 0 | "being asked" | | 1 | "been left" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 306 | | matches | | 0 | "were shaking" | | 1 | "was relearning" | | 2 | "was singing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 190 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts slid back one after another—click, clack, thunk—like the vertebrae of some ancient beast waking up." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—widened a fraction when they landed on her." | | 2 | "The flat smelled of old paper, sandalwood incense, and the faint metallic edge that always clung to Lucien’s skin—like ozone after lightning." | | 3 | "Something flickered across his face—memory, perhaps, or regret—before the cool mask slid back into place." | | 4 | "He set the cane against the counter—within easy reach, she noted—and filled the kettle." | | 5 | "His eyes—those impossible, beautiful, terrifying eyes—darkened." | | 6 | "He made a sound low in his throat—half growl, half sigh—and then his mouth was on hers." | | 7 | "His body pressed her back against the table; she felt the edge bite into her thighs and didn’t care." | | 8 | "Their eyes met—hers bright blue and fierce, his burning with two different kinds of hell." | | 9 | "They both startled, then laughed—shaky, disbelieving laughter that felt like sunlight breaking through storm clouds." | | 10 | "Eva’s research had colonized most of it—books balanced on the headboard, a map of ley lines pinned to the ceiling—but the bed was clear." | | 11 | "Outside, the city kept moving—supernatural and mundane alike—but inside Eva’s chaotic flat, two people who had once torn each other apart began, slowly and carefully, to put each other back together." |
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| 85.94% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1890 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "impossible, beautiful, terrifying eyes—" |
| | adverbCount | 93 | | adverbRatio | 0.049206349206349205 | | lyAdverbCount | 28 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014814814814814815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 190 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 190 | | mean | 12.27 | | std | 8.12 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 47.37% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3157894736842105 | | totalSentences | 190 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead the door swung inward" | | 1 | "Then his mouth curved, slow" | | 2 | "Instead she crossed the threshold," | | 3 | "Instead he crossed the small" | | 4 | "More dangerous, because it looked" | | 5 | "Somewhere downstairs a drunk was" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 67.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "She had not planned on" | | 1 | "She had planned on dropping" | | 2 | "He looked exactly as she" | | 3 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 4 | "He stepped aside without being" | | 5 | "She lifted the manila envelope" | | 6 | "His gaze dropped to the" | | 7 | "She should have refused." | | 8 | "He set the cane against" | | 9 | "He glanced over his shoulder," | | 10 | "Her hands were shaking." | | 11 | "She shoved them into the" | | 12 | "She couldn’t stop the corner" | | 13 | "He turned fully to face" | | 14 | "he said quietly" | | 15 | "He repeated the word as" | | 16 | "His eyes—those impossible, beautiful, terrifying" | | 17 | "He didn’t pour the water." | | 18 | "His voice had dropped to" | | 19 | "Her throat closed" |
| | ratio | 0.381 | |
| 28.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 127 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts slid back one" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stood on the" | | 2 | "She had not planned on" | | 3 | "She had planned on dropping" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau filled the doorway." | | 5 | "He looked exactly as she" | | 6 | "The tailored charcoal suit clung" | | 7 | "Platinum hair, slicked back with" | | 8 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 9 | "The nickname hit her like" | | 10 | "The silence stretched, thick enough" | | 11 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 12 | "He stepped aside without being" | | 13 | "Aurora’s voice came out steadier" | | 14 | "She lifted the manila envelope" | | 15 | "His gaze dropped to the" | | 16 | "Something flickered across his face—memory," | | 17 | "She should have refused." | | 18 | "The door closed behind her" | | 19 | "The sound felt like a" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 62.50% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The tailored charcoal suit clung to shoulders that seemed broader now, the ivory-handled cane held loosely in his left hand like a gentleman’s affectation inste…" | | 1 | "Behind him, Ptolemy the tabby cat threaded between Lucien’s ankles, purring as if traitorous cats had no loyalty to broken hearts." | | 2 | "Lucien moved to the small kitchenette with the effortless grace of someone who had spent years learning how not to limp." | | 3 | "Close enough to see the faint scar that bisected his left eyebrow, earned the night they had fought a barghest together in the abandoned tube station beneath Ki…" | | 4 | "Lucien’s world was full of knives and bargains and creatures that would eat her alive if they smelled weakness." | | 5 | "None of that mattered with his hands sliding beneath her jacket, mapping the curve of her waist like he was relearning territory he once knew by heart." | | 6 | "She traced the faint demonic markings that appeared along his spine when his control slipped, beautiful and terrible whorls of shadow that vanished when she pre…" | | 7 | "The weight of two years of running, of looking over her shoulder, of pretending her heart hadn’t been left behind in a rain-soaked London street with a half-dem…" | | 8 | "Outside, the city kept moving—supernatural and mundane alike—but inside Eva’s chaotic flat, two people who had once torn each other apart began, slowly and care…" |
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| 97.22% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, but his body leaned closer, crowding her against the table" |
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| 51.96% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she confessed (confess)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.196 | |