Run: 2026-05-01-01KQHR2362DR9R0TB65QGNGWB0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 24s
Cost:
$0.015804
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pulled the door open after the last deadbolt slid free. The hallway bulb cast a sharp rectangle of light across the threshold and into the cramped room beyond where books and scrolls covered the table, the couch, and the floor. Ptolemy the tabby lifted his head from a stack of notes on ley lines and blinked. Lucien stood in the opening. His charcoal suit covered the lean frame without creasing. Platinum hair stayed slicked into place. The ivory cane tip rested on the worn boards. One eye held the warm tone of polished amber and the other absorbed the surrounding dark. Why show up here without a call. Her arms folded across her chest. The movement drew the sleeve back along her left wrist and exposed the small crescent scar from the old fall. Curry scents drifted upward from the restaurant below and mixed with the flat's layers of paper and dust. The matter pulled me back to the city. A packet arrived through your route at the restaurant. It carries markings from my father's realm. Lucien crossed into the space when she did not block the way. The cane tapped once on the floorboards. His free hand reached inside the jacket and produced a folded sheet marked with symbols that caught the low lamp glow. Aurora turned to the table and swept several scrolls aside to make room. Piles shifted and settled. Ptolemy jumped down and circled the new arrival before pressing against one dark trouser leg. Ev an signed for it without a clue what he carried. The item opens gateways when mishandled. She took the paper and spread it flat. One finger traced the outer circle where ink still smelled fresh. Her shoulder-length black hair fell forward and screened part of her face from view. He was meant to stay in Cardiff. The reason I left that city sits in his past actions. Why track him now. The gate requires closure before wider damage spreads. Your old ties place you in the middle of the pattern. Lucien draped his jacket over the back of a cleared chair. The tailored fabric settled against faded upholstery. His weight shifted to one foot while the cane leaned against the table edge. The two-tone eyes stayed fixed on her profile. Aurora straightened the corners of the map without lifting her gaze from the symbols. The small flat compressed the distance between them. The air carried both his faint trace of old books and something sharper from the other realm. You disappeared after the night near the water. No message. No reason offered. I focused on deliveries and the flat above the bar instead of pursuing answers. Isolation follows when the blood from Avaros surfaces. Return would have risked more exposure than either of us needed at that stage. His hand rested on the table near hers but did not touch. The proximity sent a subtle current along the space between skin. Ptolemy meowed once and wove between their legs before settling back on the couch arm. Aurora moved to the single window and parted the thin curtain. Street lights from Brick Lane vendors bounced off passing cars and entered the room in short bursts. She kept her back to the center while her fingers gripped the fabric. Attraction drew us close the first time you brought information on the threats circling London. The same pull lingered through talks at the bar. Then the departure left the rest hanging without resolution. I lacked words for the shift inside me. The fixer's role demands distance from attachments that weaken focus. Lucien stepped closer to the window without crowding. His cane remained behind. The motion brought the edge of his sleeve against her arm for a brief second before he withdrew. She faced the room again and collected a fallen scroll near the door. The paper crackled under her hands as she rolled it tight and placed it on a higher shelf. The action slowed the rapid beat in her chest. Evan's involvement changes nothing between us. I handle my past. You return for the object alone. The item connects to both. Your quick handling of deliveries places the route in the path. We travel to the bar tonight to secure it. Aurora retrieved her coat from the hook beside the entrance. She slid one arm through then the other without hurrying. The fabric settled over her shoulders and hid the scar from immediate view. The wind outside the flat carried the evening chill typical of East London streets. We walk the distance or we do not. Lucien reclaimed the cane and gave it a slight turn in his grip. The concealed blade stayed hidden inside the ivory. His posture remained straight despite the three deadbolts still lined along the door frame. Aurora opened the top lock first then the middle. The final one released with a heavier click. Ptolemy watched from the couch as the pair stepped into the stairwell. The hallway light followed them downward past the curry house entrance where steam and voices rose from the kitchen below. Along the pavement the bricks underfoot held the day's warmth. Vendors called out to late customers. Lucien matched her stride without drawing ahead. His shoulder bumped hers once when a passerby forced them closer to the curb. The concerns stack with the object and the one who handled it. The realm connection through my father adds layers that require explanation once the immediate risk passes. Aurora kept her hands in her coat pockets. The fabric buffered the cool air yet not the memory of shared moments before the parting. Street signs for Silas' establishment grew nearer with each block crossed. The bar's lower level would offer the space to examine the packet without the flat's clutter. Your current living situation above the establishment places access within reach. They passed an alley where shadows lengthened under a single bulb. Aurora glanced sideways. The amber eye and black eye met the look without evasion. The complicated terms from before remain. Attraction persists despite the interval. Hurt from the silence sits underneath. The questions stay open until addressed without interruption. Lucien nodded once. His free hand brushed the cane handle in a habitual motion. The two continued side by side as the bar sign swung in a light breeze from the river direction. Eva's research notes on similar gateways remained behind in the flat. The tabby would guard them until return. The packet symbols glowed faintly when held at an angle under passing street illumination. Aurora paused at the intersection before the final turn. A delivery van from Golden Empress rolled past with familiar logo on the side. The route home lies ahead. The choice to enter together hinges on clearing the gate before further contact from the other side surfaces. Lucien waited at her side. His suit absorbed the darker tones of the evening. The cane tip aligned with a groove in the sidewalk.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1160
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"weight"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1152
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Cardiff1
Avaros1
Brick1
Lane1
London2
East1
Golden1
Empress1
Aurora9
Ptolemy4
Lucien8
persons
0"Empress"
1"Aurora"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"East"
5"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1160
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"left that city"
51.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean30.53
std10.04
cv0.329
sampleLengths
057
145
27
344
424
540
632
717
833
922
1019
1140
1239
1327
1422
1538
1641
1733
1818
1930
2040
2116
2225
2333
2422
2535
2649
2737
2828
2935
3027
3125
3225
3333
3432
3523
3623
3724
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences110
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.016985138004246284
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean10.55
std4.62
cv0.438
sampleLengths
011
130
216
35
49
56
69
716
87
96
1020
1118
128
139
147
1512
167
1721
1813
194
2015
2111
226
238
2411
2514
267
2711
284
298
3011
3111
327
3314
348
3514
368
3717
388
392
403
4114
428
4314
4412
4511
4615
4711
4817
4913
42.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2909090909090909
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners32
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Then the departure left the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences109
matches
0"His charcoal suit covered the"
1"Her arms folded across her"
2"It carries markings from my"
3"His free hand reached inside"
4"She took the paper and"
5"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
6"He was meant to stay"
7"Your old ties place you"
8"His weight shifted to one"
9"You disappeared after the night"
10"I focused on deliveries and"
11"His hand rested on the"
12"She kept her back to"
13"I lacked words for the"
14"His cane remained behind."
15"She faced the room again"
16"I handle my past."
17"You return for the object"
18"Your quick handling of deliveries"
19"We travel to the bar"
ratio0.257
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences109
matches
0"Aurora pulled the door open"
1"The hallway bulb cast a"
2"Ptolemy the tabby lifted his"
3"Lucien stood in the opening."
4"His charcoal suit covered the"
5"Platinum hair stayed slicked into"
6"The ivory cane tip rested"
7"Her arms folded across her"
8"The movement drew the sleeve"
9"Curry scents drifted upward from"
10"The matter pulled me back"
11"A packet arrived through your"
12"It carries markings from my"
13"Lucien crossed into the space"
14"The cane tapped once on"
15"His free hand reached inside"
16"Aurora turned to the table"
17"Piles shifted and settled."
18"Ptolemy jumped down and circled"
19"Ev an signed for it"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The fixer's role demands distance from attachments that weaken focus."
1"The realm connection through my father adds layers that require explanation once the immediate risk passes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.4738%