| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 84.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1906 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1906 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "cascading" | | 13 | "scanning" | | 14 | "perfect" | | 15 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1898 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1819 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 21 | | Nyx | 9 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.923 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 55.66% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if remembering their presence" | | 1 | "as though listening to words spoken too softly for any but her to hear" | | 2 | "appeared last overlaid with faint images of faces she did not know yet somehow recognized: one with eyes like Isolde’s, another lost between realms" | | 3 | "appeared ahead faintly shimmering once more, her legs trembled and the watch on her wrist had advanced only twelve minutes from the moment of entry" |
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| 94.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.054 | | wordCount | 1898 | | matches | | 0 | "not sky but shifting constellations" | | 1 | "neither welcome nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 86.27 | | std | 46.91 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 143 | | 1 | 123 | | 2 | 106 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 152 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 127 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 147 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 114 | | 12 | 99 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 111 | | 15 | 96 | | 16 | 132 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 110 | | 20 | 125 | | 21 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 318 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment her boots pressed the familiar leaf litter of Richmond Park; the next, the ground turned yielding, covered in thick moss the color of new emeralds." | | 1 | "She brushed a cluster of bluebells taller than her forearm; the stems leaned toward her fingers, petals parting like lips before resealing when she drew back." | | 2 | "A scent rose—wet stone and crushed mint layered over something older, like the memory of a feast left to cool." | | 3 | "She checked the watch on her left wrist beside the crescent scar; the second hand crawled forward, paused, then skipped two ticks backward before resuming." | | 4 | "She dipped her fingers; the liquid accepted them without resistance or ripple, closing over her skin like honey until she withdrew." | | 5 | "Aurora’s fingers found the hilt of the leaf-shaped blade at her hip; the moonsilver was cold as river stone against her palm." | | 6 | "She felt the passage of something greater instead—an hour compressed into each hundred steps, or perhaps a day stretched thin." | | 7 | "Halfway through, Aurora noticed tracks in the grass—narrow, cloven, older than their own passage yet still glowing faintly." | | 8 | "Shapes formed within it—tall figures walking parallel to their path—then dissolved before any detail could fix." | | 9 | "Reflections moved within it—feasts under amber skies, courts of shadow, doorways that opened onto London streets she recognized." | | 10 | "The trees around them had grown faces in their bark—human, fae, and stranger—watching with neither welcome nor warning." | | 11 | "Leaves outside their boundary lay in their expected autumn carpet; no wildflowers bloomed among them." |
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| 91.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1834 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "shoulder-high beside snowdrops," |
| | adverbCount | 79 | | adverbRatio | 0.0430752453653217 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010905125408942203 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 14.94 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.501 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 56.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3464566929133858 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 27.55% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead faint shapes moved beneath:" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, bright blue eyes" | | 1 | "She brushed a cluster of" | | 2 | "It gave, then rose to" | | 3 | "She walked, listening." | | 4 | "She checked the watch on" | | 5 | "She kept walking." | | 6 | "They followed the suggestion of" | | 7 | "Its surface lay still, glass-clear," | | 8 | "She dipped her fingers; the" | | 9 | "Her fingers came back dry" | | 10 | "They turned from the pool" | | 11 | "She rested one palm against" | | 12 | "It pulsed once in time" | | 13 | "She straightened, breath caught." | | 14 | "They moved without sound, matching" | | 15 | "She did not draw it." | | 16 | "They left the crystal ring" | | 17 | "They drank, the water tasting" | | 18 | "She felt the passage of" | | 19 | "They crossed the silver field" |
| | ratio | 0.223 | |
| 59.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora moved between the paired" | | 1 | "The shift left a faint" | | 2 | "She paused, bright blue eyes" | | 3 | "Nyx flickered at her shoulder," | | 4 | "Isolde walked ahead without a" | | 5 | "The clearing opened in impossible" | | 6 | "Petals caught the strange gold" | | 7 | "She brushed a cluster of" | | 8 | "A scent rose—wet stone and" | | 9 | "A path presented itself, barely" | | 10 | "Aurora tested the ground with" | | 11 | "It gave, then rose to" | | 12 | "She walked, listening." | | 13 | "The wind carried fragments of" | | 14 | "She checked the watch on" | | 15 | "Heat crawled along her neck." | | 16 | "She kept walking." | | 17 | "Nyx whispered without turning, voice" | | 18 | "Isolde answered without breaking stride," | | 19 | "They followed the suggestion of" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 41.32% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time the boundary" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 25.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx flickered at her shoulder, a tall silhouette of living shadow that solidified just enough for violet eyes to meet hers, then thinned again to glide alongsid…" | | 1 | "Isolde walked ahead without a sound, silver hair drifting as if underwater, leaving no mark on the moss where her feet should have pressed." | | 2 | "Petals caught the strange gold light and returned it in soft prisms that crawled across Aurora’s sleeves and hands, warm and weightless." | | 3 | "Instead faint shapes moved beneath: outlines of figures walking in circles, flowers blooming and withering in the same instant, and once the silhouette of a cro…" | | 4 | "Low vibration trembled the air and entered Aurora’s bones, a subsonic pulse that matched the pendant’s faint warmth." | | 5 | "The surface drank the heat from her skin and returned it colder and cleaner, leaving her fingertips tingling for long moments afterward." | | 6 | "When she leaned closer, the nearest flower rotated on its stem to face her, revealing a core that held a single pinpoint of steady gold." | | 7 | "A second, smaller waterfall appeared where none should have been, cascading from moss-covered rock into a basin that reflected not sky but shifting constellatio…" | | 8 | "Farther in, the canopy thinned to reveal true night above, stars arranged in unfamiliar patterns that moved slowly as they walked." | | 9 | "Beneath those stars the ground flattened into a sweep of silver grass that hummed underfoot like strings." | | 10 | "They led toward a ruin half-buried in mist: three broken pillars and a fallen lintel carved with leaf-shaped motifs that matched the dagger she carried." | | 11 | "It burst into silent sparks that floated upward, reforming into a brief image of a table heavy with food before scattering." | | 12 | "A cluster of mushrooms the size of dinner plates glowed with shifting internal light that matched the rhythm of the stars overhead." | | 13 | "Reflections moved within it—feasts under amber skies, courts of shadow, doorways that opened onto London streets she recognized." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |