| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she whispered again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 81.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1926 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "utterly" | | 5 | "suddenly" | | 6 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1926 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "calculated" | | 8 | "lilt" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "comforting" | | 17 | "vibrated" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 217 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 218 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 33 | | totalWords | 1926 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Just some hippie hangout," | | 2 | "Kids smoke there at night." | | 3 | "Cool-headed Rory. Always so smart. Look where that got you." | | 4 | "Stay. Remember. We kept her for you. She sings so beautifully down here." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1907 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 0.63 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | Dreams | 1 | | October | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | London | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Intelligence | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Stupid | 1 | | Cardiff | 3 | | Evan | 4 | | Rory | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Dreams" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Intelligence" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like her mother's voice but weren'" | | 1 | "quite make out in the darkness" | | 2 | "as if sleeping" | | 3 | "looked like a garden but wasn't" | | 4 | "something like hunger" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1926 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 218 | | matches | | 0 | "heard that voice" | | 1 | "knew that laugh" | | 2 | "owned that hand" |
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| 60.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 50.68 | | std | 18.33 | | cv | 0.362 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 90 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 73 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 62 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 50 | | 25 | 48 | | 26 | 53 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 56 | | 31 | 69 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 77 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "being pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 321 | | matches | | 0 | "was making" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was still coming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 218 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 220 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.02727272727272727 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00909090909090909 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 218 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 218 | | mean | 8.83 | | std | 6 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 54.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.38073394495412843 | | totalSentences | 218 | | uniqueOpeners | 83 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just some hippie hangout,* Eva" | | 1 | "Only questions that multiplied like" | | 2 | "Just the flowers." | | 3 | "Always the flowers, their stems" | | 4 | "Only that wrong moonlight." | | 5 | "Always so smart." |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have come alone." | | 1 | "She had followed the pull" | | 2 | "Her friend had laughed it" | | 3 | "It had grown warmer with" | | 4 | "She slipped between two massive" | | 5 | "she muttered, her voice sounding" | | 6 | "She pressed her palm over" | | 7 | "She shook it off." | | 8 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 9 | "She'd told Yu-Fei she was" | | 10 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 11 | "she called, hating how her" | | 12 | "She straightened slowly and continued" | | 13 | "They were something else." | | 14 | "She blinked hard." | | 15 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 16 | "She had heard that voice" | | 17 | "She backed toward the center" | | 18 | "It swung on its chain," | | 19 | "Its glow pulsed faster now," |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 81.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 140 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's boots sank into the" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have come alone." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 3 | "The silver chain felt heavier" | | 4 | "The ancient oaks loomed ahead," | | 5 | "She had followed the pull" | | 6 | "An old map from Eva's" | | 7 | "Her friend had laughed it" | | 8 | "*Kids smoke there at night.*" | | 9 | "It had grown warmer with" | | 10 | "Hel portals, the old texts" | | 11 | "Gateways to places that shouldn't" | | 12 | "Aurora needed answers about what" | | 13 | "Dreams of black branches reaching" | | 14 | "She slipped between two massive" | | 15 | "The air changed instantly." | | 16 | "The Grove opened before her" | | 17 | "Moonlight that didn't belong to" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "Lilies that should have died" |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 27.03% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | 0 | "Now a wet dragging sound," |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Sweet with the cloying aroma of wildflowers that had no business blooming in late October." | | 1 | "Aurora crouched beside it, running her fingers over weathered carvings that might have been runes once." | | 2 | "Each bloom contained a miniature face at its center, eyes closed as if sleeping." | | 3 | "The wrongness had settled in her bones now, a cold certainty that had nothing to do with the dropping temperature." | | 4 | "Small black orbs that reflected her own terrified expression back at her a thousand times over." | | 5 | "Something that sang in her mother's voice while it tried to pull her through." | | 6 | "Low vibrations that traveled up through her bones and set her teeth chattering." | | 7 | "She felt the displacement of air, heard the soft exhale of breath that wasn't hers." | | 8 | "Their stems braided themselves into patterns that matched the carvings on the stones." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, her voice sounding too loud in the unnatural stillness" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora needed (need)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "she hissed (hiss)" | | 5 | "she whispered again (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.875 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.857 | |