| 91.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She laughed once [once]" | | 1 | "His fingers closed lightly [lightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.459 | | leniency | 0.919 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |
| 82.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1717 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1717 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "intensity" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 72 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1702 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 997 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Ptolemy" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 3 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Eva | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 6 | | French | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "French" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Whitechapel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like granting permission to a stor" | | 1 | "felt like a lifetime ago—London nights" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.588 | | wordCount | 1702 | | matches | | 0 | "not the scar, but close" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 71.28% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 54.9 | | std | 21.93 | | cv | 0.399 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 101 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 74 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 65 | | 17 | 68 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 77 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 109 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 81 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 79 | | 30 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The heterochromatic eyes—one the color of warmed amber, the other an ink-black absence—fixed on her with the same measured intensity she remembered too well." | | 1 | "The scent of him—cardamom and something darker, metallic—slipped past her into the room where Ptolemy’s tail flicked once from the top of a teetering stack of books." | | 2 | "The attraction had never left; it simply learned to sit very still." | | 3 | "He stopped an exact distance away—close enough that she could see the rain droplets beading on the shoulders of his suit, far enough that she could breathe." | | 4 | "The childhood accident felt like a lifetime ago—London nights, the way he had once traced that same mark in the dim light of the flat above the bar, murmuring something in French about old bloodlines before catching himself." | | 5 | "Ptolemy had vanished under the sofa; the flat held only the two of them and the hundred unsaid sentences." | | 6 | "The attraction had never been simple; it had always carried the undercurrent of risk, of doors opening onto other realities." | | 7 | "She felt the slow, steady rhythm beneath—too steady for a man standing in the middle of an accusation." | | 8 | "“Then give me time to make it whole.” His fingers closed lightly over hers where they rested on his chest—not trapping, only anchoring." |
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| 91.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1011 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.04945598417408507 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010880316518298714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 19.56 | | std | 12.47 | | cv | 0.638 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 38 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 55 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 50.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair was still" | | 1 | "Her voice came out lower" | | 2 | "He inclined his head, that" | | 3 | "He glanced past her shoulder" | | 4 | "You deserve better than a" | | 5 | "She stepped back." | | 6 | "He stopped an exact distance" | | 7 | "She laughed once, short and" | | 8 | "His voice stayed even, but" | | 9 | "She leaned against the counter," | | 10 | "She had asked what he" | | 11 | "He had only shaken his" | | 12 | "she said now" | | 13 | "He set the cane against" | | 14 | "She could hear the sizzle" | | 15 | "His voice had gone quieter," | | 16 | "She moved around the counter," | | 17 | "She heard the bitterness in" | | 18 | "He reached out then, slowly" | | 19 | "His fingers brushed the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.435 | |
| 16.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The door yielded with the" | | 1 | "Aurora swung it inward and" | | 2 | "His platinum hair was still" | | 3 | "The heterochromatic eyes—one the color" | | 4 | "Her voice came out lower" | | 5 | "He inclined his head, that" | | 6 | "Aurora kept one hand on" | | 7 | "The scent of him—cardamom and" | | 8 | "He glanced past her shoulder" | | 9 | "The hurt was still there," | | 10 | "You deserve better than a" | | 11 | "The attraction had never left;" | | 12 | "She stepped back." | | 13 | "The motion felt like granting" | | 14 | "Ptolemy proved the point by" | | 15 | "Lucien closed the door behind" | | 16 | "He stopped an exact distance" | | 17 | "She laughed once, short and" | | 18 | "The motion hid the way" | | 19 | "His voice stayed even, but" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it stirred again, uninvited," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside, the flat waited, books and cat and cooling tea and the man who had once left her bed empty." |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora kept, the other hovering near the latch" | | 1 | "His voice had, the edges of an accent she rarely heard creeping in" |
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| 95.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She laughed once (laugh)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.162 | | leniency | 0.324 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.108 | |