| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1959 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 66.82% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1959 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "mechanical" | | 10 | "unravel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 81.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "tended to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 83 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1944 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1479 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Metropolitan | 1 | | Town | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 2 | | Michael | 1 | | Hale | 9 | | Crowe | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 12 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Oxford-educated | 1 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Vale | 2 | | Morris | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Market" | | 3 | "Michael" | | 4 | "Hale" | | 5 | "Crowe" | | 6 | "Kowalski" | | 7 | "Eva" | | 8 | "Museum" | | 9 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Town" | | 2 | "British" | | 3 | "Oxford-educated" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.858 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to move against the light" |
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| 97.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.029 | | wordCount | 1944 | | matches | | 0 | "not from the cash box but from the victim’s mind" | | 1 | "not the identity of the killer, but the nature of the crime" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 62.71 | | std | 36.47 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 103 | | 1 | 143 | | 2 | 95 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 127 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 112 | | 13 | 84 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 94 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 135 | | 23 | 93 | | 24 | 89 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 58 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 31 |
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| 87.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "was, exposed" | | 1 | "been forced" | | 2 | "been rifled" | | 3 | "been etched" | | 4 | "was arranged" | | 5 | "been etched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 251 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "The air down here was thick, clammy with the scent of wet concrete and something sharper underneath—incense, ozone, and a faint metallic tang that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Quinn adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, noting the time—1:23 a.m.—and swept her gaze across the scene." | | 2 | "The memory of her old partner flared briefly—three years gone, his death still wrapped in paperwork that read like nonsense—and Quinn pushed it down." | | 3 | "Its casing wore a patina of verdigris; protective sigils had been etched deeply into the face." | | 4 | "It was cold—colder than the ambient air warranted." | | 5 | "Inside lay a thick roll of notes—old sterling mixed with unfamiliar coins stamped with unrecognizable crests—and a silver amulet pulsing with soft inner light." | | 6 | "The market’s lingering occupants hovered at the periphery—hooded figures and wide-eyed vendors muttering in languages that hurt to parse." | | 7 | "She had a habit of tucking stray curls behind her left ear when nervous; she performed it now, twice in quick succession." | | 8 | "Yet faint indentations remained—circular, slightly melted at the edges, as if something had pressed down from a great height without physical mass." | | 9 | "It had been an extraction—information taken not from the cash box but from the victim’s mind or memory, facilitated by something that could slip between worlds." | | 10 | "The clique’s shadow lengthened in her mind—Aurora Vale, Eva, the others they ran with." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1495 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.031438127090301006 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008695652173913044 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 14.95 | | std | 12.22 | | cv | 0.817 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 69 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 36 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 38 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 62.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4153846153846154 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 58.48% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Too many coincidences for Quinn’s" | | 1 | "Perhaps not the identity of" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots rang against the" | | 1 | "She had heard the name" | | 2 | "She moved toward the knot" | | 3 | "He stood over the body" | | 4 | "His eyes were open, clouded" | | 5 | "Its casing wore a patina" | | 6 | "She pried the instrument free" | | 7 | "It was cold—colder than the" | | 8 | "she echoed, tasting the word" | | 9 | "She unbuttoned the pocket." | | 10 | "She had a habit of" | | 11 | "She had crossed paths with" | | 12 | "Her voice was quiet, educated," | | 13 | "She turned the compass evidence" | | 14 | "She had moved to the" | | 15 | "She swept her flashlight across" | | 16 | "Her pulse kicked." | | 17 | "It had been an extraction—information" | | 18 | "She looked back at Eva," | | 19 | "Her satchel bulged with books" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 65.26% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 1 | "The air down here was" | | 2 | "Her boots rang against the" | | 3 | "None had prepared her for" | | 4 | "The platform opened out like" | | 5 | "Bolts of silk embroidered with" | | 6 | "The Veil Market." | | 7 | "She had heard the name" | | 8 | "The market had been forced" | | 9 | "Quinn adjusted the worn leather" | | 10 | "Something was already wrong." | | 11 | "The disruption looked too theatrical," | | 12 | "She moved toward the knot" | | 13 | "DS Michael Hale spotted her" | | 14 | "He stood over the body" | | 15 | "Hale was competent, but he" | | 16 | "Morris had possessed it in" | | 17 | "The memory of her old" | | 18 | "Quinn crouched beside the corpse" | | 19 | "Elias Crowe lay on his" |
| | ratio | 0.789 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 2.34% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The air down here was thick, clammy with the scent of wet concrete and something sharper underneath—incense, ozone, and a faint metallic tang that clung to the …" | | 1 | "Bolts of silk embroidered with moving sigils hung beside tables laden with stoppered vials of swirling liquid, bundles of herbs that whispered when disturbed, a…" | | 2 | "He stood over the body with the casual confidence of a man who had already slotted the evidence into a familiar box." | | 3 | "The wound edges carried a faint bluish sheen that caught the floodlights at odd angles, as though cauterized by something other than heat." | | 4 | "The market’s lingering occupants hovered at the periphery—hooded figures and wide-eyed vendors muttering in languages that hurt to parse." | | 5 | "Round glasses magnified green eyes that flicked toward Quinn with obvious recognition." | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski clutched her worn leather satchel to her chest as though it might shield her, freckled face pale beneath the harsh lights." | | 7 | "And now here she was, standing at the edge of a murder scene that reeked of the same unreality that had swallowed Morris." | | 8 | "Yet faint indentations remained—circular, slightly melted at the edges, as if something had pressed down from a great height without physical mass." | | 9 | "It had been an extraction—information taken not from the cash box but from the victim’s mind or memory, facilitated by something that could slip between worlds." | | 10 | "She remained on the platform as the floodlights hummed and the strange market wares cast elongated shadows that seemed to move against the light." | | 11 | "And somewhere in the spinning needle of the brass instrument, in the spiral burned into old London tile, the thread that would unravel both crimes waited to be …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn called, voice carrying clear across the platform" | | 1 | "she told, voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.19 | | leniency | 0.381 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |