| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "treacherous" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "pumping" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "gloom" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "familiar" | | 14 | "scanning" | | 15 | "encounter" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "navigating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 39.59% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1611 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.36% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1589 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Morris | 3 | | Camden | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | English | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tomas | 1 | | Herrera | 3 | | Rain | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Market" | | 5 | "English" | | 6 | "Saint" | | 7 | "Christopher" | | 8 | "Tomas" | | 9 | "Herrera" | | 10 | "Rain" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Camden" |
| | globalScore | 0.934 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 52.60% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if guarding something small and vital" | | 1 | "appeared beneath Camden only when the moon was full and the forgotten station served its hidden purpose" | | 2 | "as if sensing pursuit" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1611 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 134.25 | | std | 43.87 | | cv | 0.327 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 149 | | 1 | 123 | | 2 | 143 | | 3 | 115 | | 4 | 109 | | 5 | 162 | | 6 | 148 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 186 | | 9 | 137 | | 10 | 187 | | 11 | 141 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.12 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't bother checking the time now; the watch served as an anchor, a reminder of the partner who'd once synced his steps to hers." | | 1 | "Tonight's suspect moved like one of theirs—confident in the night, too quick for coincidence." | | 2 | "A courier on a bicycle nearly clipped her shoulder; she sidestepped without breaking stride." | | 3 | "This man knew shortcuts through alleys Quinn might have missed; he slipped between two shuttered stalls and toward a boarded-up side entrance she recognized from old case files—an access point to one of the abandoned Tube stations that ran beneath the area." | | 4 | "But the suspect was down there with whatever he'd carried from the clique's bar, and the trail she'd followed for weeks—tips about off-the-books dealings, medical supplies moved without records—led straight through that darkness." | | 5 | "Yet the market legends she'd heard in hushed interviews suggested this place wasn't just any black market; it was the Veil Market, a shifting den of enchanted contraband that appeared beneath Camden only when the moon was full and the forgotten station served its hidden purpose." | | 6 | "He pulled a small object from his pocket—a pale, carved bone no larger than a finger, etched with faint symbols that caught the weak light." | | 7 | "The scar along his left forearm caught the light when he moved—Tomas Herrera, she realized with a jolt, the former paramedic whose unlicensed treatments had surfaced in her files." | | 8 | "Forward, however, and she might lose the suspect in the maze of stalls or encounter forces she still didn't fully comprehend—the same forces that had claimed her partner three years ago." | | 9 | "The market's sounds enveloped her—the shuffle of feet on stone, the clink of bottles, whispers that hovered at the edge of comprehension." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1534 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "short curly dark hair" | | 1 | "later under controlled conditions." |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.02216427640156454 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007822685788787484 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 19.41 | | std | 9.08 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 51.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3493975903614458 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "He was a lean figure" | | 1 | "She had spotted him emerging" | | 2 | "He veered left into a" | | 3 | "She blinked it from her" | | 4 | "He glanced back once, a" | | 5 | "Her left wrist held the" | | 6 | "She didn't bother checking the" | | 7 | "He cut across traffic, ignoring" | | 8 | "She closed to within fifteen" | | 9 | "She could still retreat, call" | | 10 | "Her partner's loss had taught" | | 11 | "She descended, boots echoing on" | | 12 | "He pulled a small object" | | 13 | "She paused there, one hand" | | 14 | "He was deep in conversation," | | 15 | "Her jaw set harder." | | 16 | "She angled her body, took" | | 17 | "She sidestepped a hunched figure" | | 18 | "She had followed this far" |
| | ratio | 0.238 | |
| 41.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through" | | 1 | "He was a lean figure" | | 2 | "The streets here in Soho" | | 3 | "She had spotted him emerging" | | 4 | "Quinn's voice cut through the" | | 5 | "He veered left into a" | | 6 | "Quinn followed without hesitation, her" | | 7 | "Rain plastered her closely cropped" | | 8 | "She blinked it from her" | | 9 | "He glanced back once, a" | | 10 | "Quinn's lungs burned, but she" | | 11 | "Her left wrist held the" | | 12 | "She didn't bother checking the" | | 13 | "DS Morris had vanished three" | | 14 | "Quinn had buried the reports" | | 15 | "Tonight's suspect moved like one" | | 16 | "He cut across traffic, ignoring" | | 17 | "A courier on a bicycle" | | 18 | "The city lights bled into" | | 19 | "She closed to within fifteen" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the chase had pulled" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain hammered London's streets in relentless sheets, turning asphalt into treacherous mirrors that fractured with each passing headlight." | | 1 | "He was a lean figure in a soaked black jacket, shoulders hunched, pushing past clusters of late-night stragglers who shielded themselves with battered umbrellas…" | | 2 | "Quinn followed without hesitation, her five-foot-nine frame tight with military discipline, arms pumping in a rhythm that had carried her through eighteen years…" | | 3 | "He cut across traffic, ignoring the blare of horns, and Quinn mirrored him, weaving between vehicles that sprayed her with additional sheets of water." | | 4 | "She closed to within fifteen yards, close enough to note the suspect's short, purposeful gait and the way his hand hovered near his jacket pocket as if guarding…" | | 5 | "This man knew shortcuts through alleys Quinn might have missed; he slipped between two shuttered stalls and toward a boarded-up side entrance she recognized fro…" | | 6 | "Yet the market legends she'd heard in hushed interviews suggested this place wasn't just any black market; it was the Veil Market, a shifting den of enchanted c…" | | 7 | "He pulled a small object from his pocket—a pale, carved bone no larger than a finger, etched with faint symbols that caught the weak light." | | 8 | "Quinn froze against a pillar, water pooling at her feet, watching as he pressed the bone token against a seam in the concrete." | | 9 | "The wall shivered, then parted with a grinding sound, revealing a narrow passage lit by hanging lanterns that swayed as if stirred by an unseen breeze." | | 10 | "Lantern light flickered across vendors whose faces were obscured by hoods or scarves, their wares laid out on crates: glass vials swirling with iridescent liqui…" | | 11 | "Voices murmured in overlapping languages, some familiar snatches of English mixed with tones that made the air feel denser." | | 12 | "Forward, however, and she might lose the suspect in the maze of stalls or encounter forces she still didn't fully comprehend—the same forces that had claimed he…" | | 13 | "The market's sounds enveloped her—the shuffle of feet on stone, the clink of bottles, whispers that hovered at the edge of comprehension." | | 14 | "Torchlight from a nearby stall revealed iron bars holding writhing shadows that might have been birds or worse." | | 15 | "She sidestepped a hunched figure examining a knife with runes along its blade, her eyes tracking the suspect as he approached a information broker whose stall b…" | | 16 | "Herrera glanced up then, his gaze cutting across the hall and landing on Quinn with brief recognition before he turned away, melting back into the crowd." | | 17 | "The suspect lingered by a stall selling banned substances, his silhouette tense as if sensing pursuit." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "car roofs, but the man didn't slow" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |