| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 84.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1928 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1928 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "footfall" | | 4 | "unraveling" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "marble" | | 11 | "glistening" | | 12 | "fleeting" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "scanned" | | 15 | "cascading" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 204 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 204 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 204 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1928 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When she squeezed, it sighed a tiny sound like relief." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1928 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 21 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Prince | 2 | | Sunday | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Like | 3 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Belphegor" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Like" | | 8 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.955 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 138 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if tasting the realm through sight alone" | | 1 | "felt like one creature waking up" | | 2 | "looked like a sunken garden arranged in c" | | 3 | "looked like her own childhood streets in" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.519 | | wordCount | 1928 | | matches | | 0 | "not berries but small roasted birds, golden-skinned" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 204 | | matches | | |
| 91.79% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 37.8 | | std | 17.82 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 57 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 59 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 46 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 67 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 87 | | 46 | 40 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 204 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 362 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 204 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1933 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 68 | | adverbRatio | 0.03517847904811174 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00982928091050181 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 204 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 204 | | mean | 9.45 | | std | 5.65 | | cv | 0.598 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 57.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.35784313725490197 | | totalSentences | 204 | | uniqueOpeners | 73 | |
| 16.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the hedges stopped their" |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the shimmering" | | 1 | "Her bare feet left the" | | 2 | "We go now or not" | | 3 | "She stepped into the distortion." | | 4 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 5 | "Her straight black hair stuck" | | 6 | "It looks poured from a" | | 7 | "Her fingers brushed a vine." | | 8 | "I feel it already." | | 9 | "She yanked her hand back." | | 10 | "They moved down a narrow" | | 11 | "She plucked one free." | | 12 | "Her voice came out rough." | | 13 | "It sighed at me." | | 14 | "It hit the ground and" | | 15 | "Her scar itched." | | 16 | "She scratched at it without" | | 17 | "They feed on the echo" | | 18 | "She spotted movement ahead and" | | 19 | "We should not be seeing" |
| | ratio | 0.254 | |
| 46.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 163 | | totalSentences | 197 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the tangle" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared hot" | | 2 | "She paused at the shimmering" | | 3 | "Nyx uncoiled from the darkness" | | 4 | "Shadows twist differently on the" | | 5 | "Isolde drifted closer, silver hair" | | 6 | "Her bare feet left the" | | 7 | "Every threshold carries teeth." | | 8 | "Some bite only after one" | | 9 | "Aurora gripped the pendant tighter." | | 10 | "The pull dragged at her" | | 11 | "We go now or not" | | 12 | "She stepped into the distortion." | | 13 | "The world wrenched sideways." | | 14 | "Colors smeared, then snapped apart." | | 15 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 16 | "The air tasted thick enough" | | 17 | "Rory blinked hard." | | 18 | "Her straight black hair stuck" | | 19 | "It looks poured from a" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 197 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.50% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde appeared a few paces away, her lavender eyes half-lidded as if tasting the realm through sight alone." | | 1 | "Herbs crushed beneath Rory's steps sent up fresh bursts of rosemary and fennel that mingled with the sweeter rot of fallen fruit fermenting on the ground." | | 2 | "Rory's bright blue eyes tracked a cluster of pears that rotated slowly on their stems, each one etched with faint lines resembling recipes." | | 3 | "A thin trail of syrup leaked out, carving a miniature river that sprouted new vines as it flowed." | | 4 | "The unease coiled tighter in her gut, mixing with the growing hunger until both felt like one creature waking up." | | 5 | "It cast long shadows that behaved strangely, bending toward the food-bearing plants instead of away from the light." | | 6 | "Platters covered its surface, piled with meats glistening under glazes, breads still rising though no oven stood nearby, and wines that swirled in their decante…" | | 7 | "Hedges shaped from living herb plants rose taller than Rory's head, their leaves patterned with veins that glowed soft violet." | | 8 | "Another circle contained fountains where liquid chocolate flowed uphill before cascading down in deliberate rhythms that matched distant heartbeats." | | 9 | "The liquid swirled patterns that looked like her own childhood streets in Cardiff, complete with tiny figures running." | | 10 | "Its petals bore tiny mouths that whispered recipes in languages long dead." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |