| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.104 | | leniency | 0.208 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2395 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.98% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2395 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "wavered" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "echoes" | | 3 | "tinged" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "echo" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 229 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 272 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2395 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 72 | | wordCount | 1816 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.6 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 29 | | Nyx | 21 | | Isolde | 15 | | One | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "One" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.702 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 90.48% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "looked like smoke from fires" | | 2 | "as if breathing" | | 3 | "appeared farther away though they had taken only a few steps" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2395 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 272 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 69 | | mean | 34.71 | | std | 14.39 | | cv | 0.415 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 45 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 29 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 51 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 37 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 319 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 272 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1818 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.029152915291529153 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0038503850385038503 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 272 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 272 | | mean | 8.81 | | std | 3.9 | | cv | 0.443 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 45.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.2610294117647059 | | totalSentences | 272 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it showed an expanse" | | 1 | "Then she spoke near a" | | 2 | "Then the image dissolved." | | 3 | "Instead smooth ground of pale" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "Their colors shifted from deep" | | 1 | "Their form wavered between solid" | | 2 | "Her steps pressed no indent" | | 3 | "She touched the silver chain." | | 4 | "Her fingers traced lines burned" | | 5 | "Its edge stayed cold against" | | 6 | "She moved past thick trunks" | | 7 | "She checked the device." | | 8 | "They reached a wider clearing." | | 9 | "Their stems bent toward the" | | 10 | "Their silhouette stretched toward a" | | 11 | "She brushed dirt away." | | 12 | "Their eyes brightened." | | 13 | "She held the blade over" | | 14 | "Their steps left no print" | | 15 | "She gazed into the reflection" | | 16 | "It watched them then withdrew." | | 17 | "Their form grew denser." | | 18 | "She ran her free hand" | | 19 | "They passed under the arch" |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 24.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 195 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pressed through the final" | | 1 | "Moss gave under her boots" | | 2 | "The change hit at once." | | 3 | "Air thickened and carried an" | | 4 | "Flowers spread in clusters across" | | 5 | "Their colors shifted from deep" | | 6 | "Nyx slipped forward as a" | | 7 | "Their form wavered between solid" | | 8 | "Violet eyes tracked movements in" | | 9 | "Isolde walked beside them." | | 10 | "Her steps pressed no indent" | | 11 | "The pendant at Aurora's throat" | | 12 | "She touched the silver chain." | | 13 | "Nyx answered in a thread" | | 14 | "Isolde paused at the nearest" | | 15 | "Her fingers traced lines burned" | | 16 | "Aurora kept the blade in" | | 17 | "Its edge stayed cold against" | | 18 | "She moved past thick trunks" | | 19 | "Sap clung to the cut" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 224 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved past thick trunks where bark folded into shapes that resembled half-open mouths." | | 1 | "Inside each curtain lay brief glimpses of tables piled high with fruits that bled light when cut in the visions." | | 2 | "The forest floor rose in gentle waves covered by blooms that shifted hue with each breath of the group." | | 3 | "They formed patterns that echoed the carvings on the boundary stones." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.104 | | leniency | 0.208 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |