| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.49% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1417 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "echoes" | | 6 | "dances" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "raced" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.77% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1334 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Fae | 4 | | Nyx | 10 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.938 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "ropes that seemed to pulse with life" | | 1 | "looked like apples in gold red but others" | | 2 | "felt like cool mist against skin" | | 3 | "appeared then dissolved" |
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| 58.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.411 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | | 0 | "No trail existed before but" | | 1 | "Not the grove itself but distant scenes of amber skies over infinite vineyards" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 24.02 | | std | 16.2 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 46 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 243 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 174 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.005747126436781609 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 19.68 | | std | 14.62 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 60 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 58 | | 35 | 33 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 46 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 65.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4027777777777778 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Then unease returned. The motes" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Her black hair caught on" | | 1 | "She scanned the clearing ahead" | | 2 | "Their humanoid form held faint" | | 3 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 4 | "They left the pool. The" | | 5 | "They entered the ring. The" | | 6 | "They moved on. A glade" | | 7 | "They waited in silence. The" |
| | ratio | 0.133 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped past the ancient" | | 1 | "Vines draped over the boulders" | | 2 | "Her black hair caught on" | | 3 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 4 | "She scanned the clearing ahead" | | 5 | "Nyx followed in a glide" | | 6 | "Their humanoid form held faint" | | 7 | "Isolde entered last. Her silver" | | 8 | "The light inside the grove" | | 9 | "Aurora felt the change press" | | 10 | "She drew the Fae-Forged Blade." | | 11 | "The three moved deeper along" | | 12 | "Nyx's whisper voice broke the" | | 13 | "Every breath echoes back in" | | 14 | "Aurora kept forward. Her bright" | | 15 | "Isolde raised one hand. Her" | | 16 | "The grove reveals layer by" | | 17 | "Aurora paused at a small" | | 18 | "Discovery struck when they spotted" | | 19 | "Nyx leaned over the edge." |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "To deeper exploration they exited" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 3.11% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped past the ancient oak standing stones that marked the grove boundary." | | 1 | "The light inside the grove differed from the park. It held an inner radiance that came from leaves and petals themselves. Flowers bloomed year-round in this poc…" | | 2 | "The three moved deeper along a path that revealed itself between twisted trunks. No trail existed before but their steps created one. Sounds from Richmond Park …" | | 3 | "Discovery struck when they spotted the first pool. Water lay flat as polished metal. No ripples crossed its surface until they approached. Then reflections appe…" | | 4 | "They left the pool. The path twisted around ancient trees with bark that held carved patterns visible only from side angles. Runes for protection or summoning f…" | | 5 | "Isolde added action to her words by touching a flower that stayed vibrant under her fingers." | | 6 | "The group reached a larger clearing dominated by a single massive tree. Its trunk spanned wider than three people side by side. Leaves overhead filtered light i…" | | 7 | "One fruit dropped as they watched. It split on impact and spilled juice that formed running patterns on the moss before soaking in. The smell rose sweet heavy w…" | | 8 | "A stream cut across the next section. Water flowed over stones that glowed with the same inner light. Creatures swam in the current. Transparent bodies with tin…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "The grove reveals (reveal)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.056 | | leniency | 0.111 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |