Run: 2026-05-01-01KQHSCNC8KZTWADJCCTZT0XQH

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Duration:
1m 49s
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$0.020398
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora yanked the door inward, the hinges protesting with a low groan that echoed down the stairwell. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, his charcoal suit fitting flush across his frame beneath the single bulb overhead. One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane while his heterochromatic eyes held steady on her face. The scent of cardamom and chili from the curry house below drifted upward, sharp against the dust from Eva's stacked scrolls. Ptolemy arched his back from atop a pile of books, ears flattened. Aurora kept one palm pressed to the wood frame, refusing to yield ground. Lucien stepped forward anyway, the cane tapping once against the worn floorboards as he crossed into the flat. She closed the door but left the first deadbolt untouched. "You tracked me through Eva." "Through whispers and old favours." He set the cane against a chair piled with research notes, then brushed a finger along the edge of a yellowed page. "The Frenchman hears what others overlook." Aurora folded her arms, the crescent scar on her wrist catching a thin shaft of light from the window. "We settled the score months ago. Leave before I change my mind." Lucien turned, his slicked-back platinum blond hair unmoving under the room's dim glow. "The score shifted. Your delivery routes draw eyes again. The kind that cross into my territory." She moved past him toward the narrow bed where she had tossed her jacket earlier. The fabric smelled faintly of oil and fried rice from her shift at the restaurant. "Eva's notes stay closed to you." He followed, boots muted on the rug. "Your translations progress further than before. The binding sigils on the third scroll match patterns from Avaros. You sensed the shift too." Aurora picked up a clay fragment from the desk and turned it in her fingers. The rough surface scratched her skin. "Sense or not, your help arrives late. I handled the last breach alone." The memory hung between them. Lucien had appeared without warning then as well, after an alley skirmish near Tower Bridge where his blade had cut through a summoner faster than human reflexes allowed. She had stitched a wound on his side with shaking hands, close enough to catch the faint metallic trace beneath his cologne. Gone by morning, no trace beyond a note that read only his name. "You left town without asking for cover," he said now, voice low and even. "I tracked the wrong lead for three weeks before realising the pair of you had split east." Aurora set the fragment down harder than needed. It clinked against another. "I fled what I could control. You offered nothing but glances and half-truths about your father." Ptolemy wound between Lucien's legs, purring once before batting at the cane's base. Lucien crouched briefly and scratched behind the cat's ears, the motion fluid despite the confined space. "Half-truths kept you breathing. Full ones pull in entities that do not bargain." He stood again, closer now. The tailored jacket pulled across his shoulders, and the single black eye caught the light while the amber one remained steady. Aurora backed against the desk edge, the old wood pressing into her hip. She could feel the pulse at her throat quicken, a reaction she refused to acknowledge when his attention lingered on the straight fall of her black hair against her collar. "The ancient terms on that table speak of a vessel sealed across bloodlines. Your father's position in Cardiff courts draws such attention. One name summons the rest." She reached for a kettle on the side table, fingers brushing his sleeve by inches. Hot water splashed into two mismatched cups as the whistle had already gone quiet moments earlier. "Father stays out of this. My fights belong here." Lucien accepted the cup without comment, his fingers brushing hers in the exchange. The contact lingered a beat longer than necessary. Steam rose, carrying the sharp bite of cheap tea. "Then allow me access to the remaining pages. My languages cover the gaps in your Latin." Aurora sipped, the liquid scalding her tongue. "Access demands trust. Trust requires answers you withheld last time." He set the cup aside untouched. The cane tipped forward when his grip tightened on it again. "Answers come paired with risk. The night you stitched that gash I took a blade meant for you. Absence followed because pursuit started at your door." The flat seemed smaller with each word, scrolls brushing her legs as she shifted weight. Her bright blue eyes locked onto the contrast of his suit against the chaos of books. She caught the faint trace of something darker beneath the leather smell, a reminder of his mixed lineage without speaking the word aloud. He noticed the glance and answered it with a step closer. "Complicated leaves scars beyond wrists." His free hand hovered near hers on the desk. "The ex tracks through intermediaries now. Delivery logs from the Golden Empress caught attention." Aurora set the cup down, liquid sloshing over the rim. "Evan belongs to a past I buried. Your arrival drags it up fresh." Lucien reached past her, pulling a thin ledger from under a stack. Pages fluttered, revealing dates and addresses in her handwriting. "Buried poorly. The man hires from the same circles that birthed my own blood. I broker knowledge there." She snatched the ledger back, the motion bringing them chest to chest for an instant. Heat from his frame crossed the gap. Her scar pulsed again, old pain mixing with the charged air between them. Ptolemy jumped onto the bed, tail lashing against the quilt as if sensing the shift. "Brokerage costs more than I pay," she said. The words came quieter. "Last time you vanished after the job, the silence hurt more than the chase." Lucien leaned the cane against the wall. The blade concealed inside stayed hidden for now. "Silence served protection. Visibility invites the reach of Avaros kin that answer no summons from books." Aurora placed the ledger aside and turned toward the window once more. Outside, Brick Lane carried the low rumble of late traffic and distant shouts from market stalls closing. She traced a finger along the glass, leaving a faint mark in the dust. "Protection reads like control when spoken from the other side." He joined her there, shoulder near hers but not touching. The single lightbulb flickered once overhead. "Control dissolves when threats multiply. I arrive unannounced because letters leave trails." Aurora faced him again. Proximity left little room for the desk between them. Her shoulder-length black hair fell forward as she tilted her head back to meet both eyes. The amber one held a warmth absent before, while the black absorbed the light. She caught herself noting the line of his jaw, the precise fit of the charcoal fabric. "Then speak plainly now. What binding do the scrolls point toward?" Lucien opened his mouth to answer, but a sharp scrape sounded from the stairwell below. Heavy boots climbed faster than normal foot traffic warranted. The flat's security offered three deadbolts, yet none sat engaged beyond the first. Ptolemy hissed from the bed, fur rising along his spine. Lucien snatched the cane upright in one motion, the hidden blade sliding free with a whisper that cut the air. The footsteps halted at the landing just outside the door. A second set joined them, followed by the metallic click of a lock pick engaging the remaining mechanisms. Aurora reached for the nearest heavy tome, ready to swing if needed, while Lucien's free hand found her wrist above the scar in a grip both guiding and possessive. The doorknob rattled under force from the other side.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1283
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"fluttered"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"could feel"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"reminder"
5"fluttered"
6"pulsed"
7"charged"
8"silence"
9"traced"
10"flickered"
11"warmth"
12"whisper"
13"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount938
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva1
Aurora11
Tower1
Bridge1
Lucien12
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Tower"
1"Bridge"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore0.86
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed smaller with each word, scrolls brushing her legs as she shifted weight"
1"as if sensing the shift"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1283
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
81.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean38.88
std16.97
cv0.436
sampleLengths
055
164
215
333
431
529
636
729
834
968
1031
1128
1242
1369
1427
1540
1646
1717
1843
1965
2028
2123
2239
2350
2426
2531
2643
2710
2828
2959
3011
3167
3266
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences95
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount940
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.027659574468085105
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0031914893617021275
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean13.51
std5.8
cv0.429
sampleLengths
017
119
219
321
412
513
618
710
85
927
106
1119
1212
1313
1416
1515
1615
176
187
1922
2015
216
2213
235
2428
2522
2613
2714
2817
298
304
3116
3213
3316
3413
355
3621
3713
3830
3927
4015
4116
429
4313
448
459
4616
477
4810
496
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences71
matches
0"She closed the door but"
1"He set the cane against"
2"She moved past him toward"
3"He followed, boots muted on"
4"She had stitched a wound"
5"he said now, voice low"
6"It clinked against another."
7"He stood again, closer now."
8"She could feel the pulse"
9"She reached for a kettle"
10"He set the cup aside"
11"Her bright blue eyes locked"
12"She caught the faint trace"
13"He noticed the glance and"
14"His free hand hovered near"
15"She snatched the ledger back,"
16"Her scar pulsed again, old"
17"She traced a finger along"
18"He joined her there, shoulder"
19"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
ratio0.296
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"Aurora yanked the door inward,"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"The scent of cardamom and"
3"Ptolemy arched his back from"
4"Aurora kept one palm pressed"
5"Lucien stepped forward anyway, the"
6"She closed the door but"
7"He set the cane against"
8"Aurora folded her arms, the"
9"Lucien turned, his slicked-back platinum"
10"She moved past him toward"
11"The fabric smelled faintly of"
12"He followed, boots muted on"
13"Aurora picked up a clay"
14"The rough surface scratched her"
15"The memory hung between them."
16"Lucien had appeared without warning"
17"She had stitched a wound"
18"he said now, voice low"
19"Aurora set the fragment down"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora yanked the door inward, the hinges protesting with a low groan that echoed down the stairwell."
1"Ptolemy wound between Lucien's legs, purring once before batting at the cane's base."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice low and even"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7527%