| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1943 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1943 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "quivered" | | 3 | "intricate" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "echoes" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "cataloged" | | 14 | "potential" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "etched" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "pulse" | | 19 | "measured" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "depths" | | 22 | "silence" | | 23 | "echo" | | 24 | "sentinel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 124 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1943 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 1901 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Rory | 1 | | Aldric | 1 | | Aurora | 20 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.974 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recognizing her presence" | | 1 | "as if testing the stability" | | 2 | "seemed real time flow" | | 3 | "seemed smaller in scale now or perhaps the minutes outside advanced along different rates" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1943 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 38.86 | | std | 34.59 | | cv | 0.89 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 130 | | 1 | 124 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 114 | | 10 | 90 | | 11 | 92 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 84 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 68 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 77 | | 29 | 66 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 110 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 45 | | 44 | 73 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 58 | | 48 | 59 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 306 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 88 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.022727272727272728 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022727272727272728 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 56 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 56 | | mean | 34.7 | | std | 31.12 | | cv | 0.897 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 124 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 114 | | 16 | 90 | | 17 | 92 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 84 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 68 | | 25 | 74 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 77 | | 35 | 66 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 110 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 45 |
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| 54.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 56 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt the shift immediately" | | 1 | "We explore those layers. Keep" | | 2 | "Her speech emerged as riddle" | | 3 | "They advanced as one unit" | | 4 | "They continued walking through the" | | 5 | "They circled the wall together" | | 6 | "They resumed movement along the" | | 7 | "They turned from the pedestal" | | 8 | "Her eyes took in the" |
| | ratio | 0.164 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crossed the threshold marked" | | 1 | "The boundary shimmered faintly around" | | 2 | "She felt the shift immediately" | | 3 | "The familiar trees of Richmond" | | 4 | "Nyx slipped from the shadows" | | 5 | "The grove unfolded in an" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered on the wind" | | 7 | "The air here carries echoes" | | 8 | "Aurora replied without pause or" | | 9 | "We explore those layers. Keep" | | 10 | "Isolde walked ahead without sound" | | 11 | "Her speech emerged as riddle" | | 12 | "Layers reveal truths to those" | | 13 | "They advanced as one unit" | | 14 | "The soundscape shifted the further" | | 15 | "A small spring opened in" | | 16 | "Nyx circled the spring with" | | 17 | "The waters call to trapped" | | 18 | "The group left the spring" | | 19 | "This light writes the land's" |
| | ratio | 0.982 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crossed the threshold marked by the ancient oak standing stones that bordered the hidden area." | | 1 | "The grove unfolded in an explosion of alien growth that assaulted the senses with its vibrancy. Wildflowers bloomed in rings around their feet in colors shiftin…" | | 2 | "Isolde walked ahead without sound of footfall. The flowers parted for her passage as if recognizing her presence." | | 3 | "They advanced as one unit deeper into the thick growth. Moss covered paths curved between thick trunks that glowed faintly with internal light. Each trunk bore …" | | 4 | "The soundscape shifted the further they penetrated the area. Birds sang tunes that looped back on themselves creating a cycle without end. Insects droned in rhy…" | | 5 | "Nyx circled the spring with caution. Their form flickered between solid and shadow as if testing the stability." | | 6 | "They continued walking through the next area. Each step sank into earth that gave way gently then firmed under pressure. Aurora noted the sensation in detail. I…" | | 7 | "Discovery came in the form of a wall of standing stones inside the grove proper. These differed from the boundary ones in size and detail. Their surfaces carved…" | | 8 | "A low growl emanated from beyond the wall. The sound echoed without clear source or direction. Aurora raised the blade higher in defense posture. Her stance shi…" | | 9 | "Aurora led them around the wall to continue the path. Deeper growth awaited beyond. Fruits hung from branches in heavy clusters. Each fruit displayed different …" | | 10 | "The group pressed past the fruit trees into new terrain. A field of tall grass replaced the dense trees ahead. Each blade of grass emitted a note when moved by …" | | 11 | "Wonder filled the moment as the melody rose to a crescendo then faded behind them as they cleared the field. The grass field ended at a cliff edge overlooking a…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |