Run: 2026-05-01-01KQHSF2B54DV37WKWTSAFP7PZ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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Rory yanked the deadbolt back with more force than necessary. The chain rattled like an accusation. Lucien stood on the narrow landing, platinum hair slicked back, charcoal suit cut sharp enough to draw blood. One amber eye caught the light from the bare bulb overhead, the black one swallowed it whole. Her pulse slammed against her throat. "You." "Evening, Rory." His voice carried the faint Marseille lilt that once made her knees unreliable. The ivory-handled cane rested against his left leg, elegant as ever. "You look ready to slam the door in my face. Again." She tightened her grip on the edge of the wood. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring like a traitor. The tabby had always liked him. "How did you find me?" Lucien lifted one shoulder in a movement too fluid for a man carrying a concealed blade. "Information is what I trade in. You know that." His mismatched gaze drifted past her shoulder into the cluttered chaos of Eva's flat. Books balanced in precarious towers. Scrolls spilled across the faded rug like fallen soldiers. "Though I expected something less... scholarly. You always preferred chaos you could control." The words landed like a hook behind her ribs. She remembered the last time he'd said something similar, silk sheets tangled around them, his mouth against the crescent scar on her wrist. Before everything fractured. "Don't." The word came out sharper than she intended. He tilted his head, studying her the way he studied ancient contracts written in dead languages. "Three months, Rory. Not even a note." "You left first." She hated how her voice cracked on the last word. Hated more that he noticed. "Did I?" Lucien stepped closer. The scent of him hit her, bergamot and something darker, like smoke from a fire you couldn't see. "Or did you run before I could explain what my father demanded?" The mention of his demon sire sent ice skittering down her spine. She remembered the night he'd told her the truth, half-demon, bound by blood contracts older than London itself. The way his black eye had bled into crimson when he lost control. The way he'd begged her to leave before he hurt her. She hadn't listened then. Not until Evan found her again and Lucien had... No. She wouldn't think about that. "Explain it now then." Rory crossed her arms, the small scar on her wrist catching the light. "Or better yet, don't. I have delivery shifts starting at dawn and Eva's due back any minute." "Liar." His lips curved, not quite a smile. "Eva's in Prague chasing some obscure grimoire. I made sure of it." The floor seemed to shift beneath her feet. "You what?" "Relax." He lifted a gloved hand. "I merely suggested a lead she couldn't resist. For her own research. Not everything I do is manipulation, despite what you think." Ptolemy chose that moment to abandon her and pad over to Lucien, pressing against his expensive trousers. The half-demon crouched with surprising grace for a man who carried centuries in his veins, scratching behind the cat's ears. The simple domesticity of it twisted something painful in her chest. "Traitor," she muttered to the cat. To herself. Lucien looked up at her through those impossible eyes. "He remembers me. Some things don't change, even when people do." "People change when they have to." Rory stepped back, allowing him entrance despite every instinct screaming otherwise. The flat felt smaller with him in it. The curry house smells from downstairs, normally comforting, now mixed with his cologne until she couldn't think straight. "You shouldn't be here." "Yet here I am." He straightened, cane tapping once against the floorboards. The blade inside whispered against its sheath. "Because someone is looking for you. Someone from your past." The air left her lungs. "Evan." "Not him." Lucien's jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath the perfect line of his jaw. "Though that particular cockroach has been sniffing around the East End again. No, this is worse. A collector. Deals in rare bloodlines and pretty lawyers who ask too many questions about demon contracts." Her stomach dropped. The Pre-Law degree she'd abandoned in Cardiff had come back to bite her in ways she never anticipated. "How rare?" "Rare enough that your mother's Welsh blood mixed with your father's Irish fire makes you a conduit." He moved deeper into the flat, fingers trailing over a stack of Eva's research notes. "A walking key to realms that should stay locked. My father mentioned your name in the wrong circles. Before I could stop him." Rory sank onto the edge of the threadbare sofa, books shifting dangerously beside her. The weight of his words pressed against her chest. All those nights she'd spent delivering curry and pretending normalcy, and the supernatural underworld had been circling closer. "Why tell me this now? After months of nothing?" "Because I couldn't stay away any longer." The admission seemed to cost him. His fingers tightened on the cane until the ivory handle creaked. "Every lead I chased, every favour I called in, it all led back to you. To us." "Us." She laughed, but the sound came out hollow. "There is no us, Lucien. You made that clear when you told me to disappear." "I told you to disappear because the alternative was watching my father rip your soul out through your pretty blue eyes." His voice dropped, rougher now. French accent thickening with emotion he rarely showed. "You think I wanted that? You think I enjoyed waking up to an empty bed and your scent still on my skin?" The raw edge in his tone did dangerous things to her resolve. She remembered those mornings. The way he'd trace the line of her spine with careful fingers, as if afraid she'd vanish. The way his heterochromatic eyes had softened only for her. "Stop." Rory pushed to her feet, needing distance. The flat's cramped space offered none. Everywhere she looked, memories crowded in. The corner where he'd kissed her against the bookshelves until her lips bruised. The kitchen table where he'd laid out demonic contracts for her to decipher, their heads bent close together. "You don't get to do this. Show up looking like sin in a suit and talk about what you lost. I built something here. A life without demons and fixers and men who hide blades in their walking sticks." "Yet you still wear the scarf I gave you." His gaze dropped to her throat where midnight silk peeked from beneath her jumper. "The one that hides the mark I left when I lost control." Her hand flew to her neck before she could stop it. The small scar there, barely visible but always felt, throbbed under her fingertips. "It's cold in here." "Another lie." Lucien closed the distance between them. Not touching. Never touching unless she allowed it. But close enough that his breath stirred her shoulder-length black hair. "Your heart is racing. I can hear it. Half-demon perks." "Don't use that on me." She tilted her chin up, meeting those mismatched eyes. Bright blue against amber and black. "Don't you dare." "What should I use then?" His voice had gone velvet-rough. "The truth? That I tracked you from Cardiff to London because the thought of you with anyone else made me want to burn half the city? That I paid Yu-Fei Cheung extra to make sure your delivery routes stayed safe? That I've spent three months destroying every threat to you from the shadows because I couldn't bear the idea of you knowing I still watched over you?" Each confession landed like a blow. Rory's back hit the wall of books behind her. A scroll tumbled to the floor between them. Ptolemy pounced on it, batting at the ancient paper with glee. "You had no right." But her voice had lost its steel. "None." "I know." Lucien set his cane aside, the movement deliberate. Without the prop he seemed more dangerous, more real. The tailored charcoal suit hugged shoulders she remembered digging her nails into. "I know I don't. But here we are. You in your chaotic sanctuary and me unable to stay away any longer." The space between them crackled. She could feel the heat of him, the restrained power that came from his father's realm. Avaros. The name alone sent shivers across her skin. Yet beneath the supernatural danger lurked something painfully human. The way his platinum hair had fallen across his forehead. The faint scar on his own wrist, mirror to hers, from a blood oath he'd taken to protect her. "Why now?" she whispered. "Really." "Because the collector moves in three days." His hand lifted, hovered near her cheek without touching. "And because I can't watch you face this alone. Not when every instinct I possess, human and demon both, screams that you're mine to protect." The possessiveness should have angered her. Instead it kindled something low in her belly that she'd tried to smother for months. Memories flooded back unbidden. His mouth on hers in the rain outside Silas' bar. The way he'd spoken French against her throat when he thought she was sleeping. The desperate way he'd held her after Evan's attack, blood on his knuckles and terror in his black eye. "I hate you." The words lacked conviction. "Good." Lucien's lips curved into that dangerous half-smile she remembered too well. "Hate me all you want. Just let me keep you breathing." Her hand moved of its own accord, fingers brushing the lapel of his suit. The material felt warm from his body heat. Beneath it, his heart thundered in time with hers. "This doesn't mean anything." "It means everything." He captured her wrist, thumb tracing the crescent scar there. The touch burned. "It always has." The flat seemed to shrink further, books and scrolls fading into background noise. Only Lucien remained, solid and dangerous and achingly familiar. His heterochromatic gaze dropped to her mouth. The air thickened until she could barely draw breath. "Tell me to leave," he said, voice barely above a whisper. "Say it and I'll walk out that door. Fight this war on your own like the stubborn Welsh-Irish hellcat I fell for." Her fingers curled into his lapel. Pulling him closer. Pushing him away. Both at once. "I should." "But you won't." His free hand came up to cradle the back of her neck, careful, always so careful with her. "Because you feel it too. This pull. This unfinished business between us." Rory's eyes fluttered shut as his thumb brushed her lower lip. The scent of him overwhelmed her now. Bergamot and smoke and something electric that spoke of realms beyond this one. Her body remembered his touch even as her mind screamed warnings about complicated histories and demon blood and men who fixed problems by creating new ones. "Damn you," she breathed. "Already am." His mouth hovered a breath from hers. "Question is, are you coming with me this time?" The choice hung between them, heavy as the ancient tomes surrounding them. Outside, London traffic hummed its ceaseless song. Inside, her heart warred with three months of carefully constructed distance. Lucien's breath mingled with hers. His body radiated heat that promised both salvation and destruction. She opened her eyes. Met his mismatched stare. Saw the hunger there, the fear, the love he'd never quite managed to name. Her decision crystallized in the space between one heartbeat and the next. The front door's remaining deadbolts suddenly clicked into place behind them. Both of them froze. Lucien's expression hardened. "We aren't alone." Rory's blood turned to ice as a familiar voice slithered from the shadows near Eva's bedroom. "Miss me, darling?" Evan stepped into the light, knife glinting in his hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.031
effectiveRatio0.028
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1957
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"carefully"
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100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
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totalAiIsms30
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word"sanctuary"
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word"thundered"
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word"whisper"
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word"fluttered"
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word"electric"
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word"ceaseless"
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word"constructed"
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word"crystallized"
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word"glinting"
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highlights
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2"silk"
3"fractured"
4"down her spine"
5"comforting"
6"perfect"
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14"chaotic"
15"sanctuary"
16"could feel"
17"restrained"
18"thundered"
19"tracing"
20"familiar"
21"whisper"
22"fluttered"
23"electric"
24"ceaseless"
25"constructed"
26"crystallized"
27"glinting"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"The weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences138
matches(empty)
91.10% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences138
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1957
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1317
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
Eva3
Books1
Hated1
London2
Evan3
Lucien13
Ptolemy3
Pre-Law1
Cardiff1
Rory8
French2
Bright1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Books"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Rory"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"seemed more dangerous more real"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1957
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences178
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean30.58
std20.02
cv0.655
sampleLengths
051
16
21
337
430
566
635
79
823
918
1035
1154
1213
136
1434
1520
1610
1728
1848
198
2020
2147
2229
236
2448
2523
2655
2750
2841
2924
3056
3143
3290
3335
3428
3537
3623
3777
3834
3912
4052
4168
425
4341
4468
457
4623
4735
4819
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was sleeping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences178
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1021
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03525954946131244
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0068560235063663075
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean10.99
std7.79
cv0.709
sampleLengths
010
16
218
317
46
51
615
711
811
910
109
116
125
1316
1423
155
169
1713
189
1923
203
219
2216
237
2413
255
265
2718
2812
2912
3018
3113
3211
334
349
351
365
3717
3817
398
4012
418
422
436
4422
4517
4620
4711
486
492
70.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.449438202247191
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners80
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences132
matches
0"Everywhere she looked, memories crowded"
1"Bright blue against amber and"
2"Instead it kindled something low"
3"Only Lucien remained, solid and"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences132
matches
0"Her pulse slammed against her"
1"His voice carried the faint"
2"She tightened her grip on"
3"His mismatched gaze drifted past"
4"She remembered the last time"
5"He tilted his head, studying"
6"She hated how her voice"
7"She remembered the night he'd"
8"She hadn't listened then."
9"She wouldn't think about that."
10"His lips curved, not quite"
11"He lifted a gloved hand"
12"she muttered to the cat"
13"He straightened, cane tapping once"
14"Her stomach dropped."
15"He moved deeper into the"
16"His fingers tightened on the"
17"She laughed, but the sound"
18"His voice dropped, rougher now"
19"She remembered those mornings."
ratio0.288
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences132
matches
0"Rory yanked the deadbolt back"
1"The chain rattled like an"
2"Lucien stood on the narrow"
3"Her pulse slammed against her"
4"His voice carried the faint"
5"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
8"The tabby had always liked"
9"Lucien lifted one shoulder in"
10"His mismatched gaze drifted past"
11"Books balanced in precarious towers."
12"Scrolls spilled across the faded"
13"The words landed like a"
14"She remembered the last time"
15"The word came out sharper"
16"He tilted his head, studying"
17"She hated how her voice"
18"Lucien stepped closer"
19"The scent of him hit"
ratio0.848
37.88% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Before everything fractured."
ratio0.008
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The half-demon crouched with surprising grace for a man who carried centuries in his veins, scratching behind the cat's ears."
1"The way he'd trace the line of her spine with careful fingers, as if afraid she'd vanish."
2"She could feel the heat of him, the restrained power that came from his father's realm."
3"Her body remembered his touch even as her mind screamed warnings about complicated histories and demon blood and men who fixed problems by creating new ones."
4"His body radiated heat that promised both salvation and destruction."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"His lips curved, not quite a smile"
1"He straightened, cane tapping once against the floorboards"
2"Lucien's jaw tightened, a muscle jumping beneath the perfect line of his jaw"
3"He moved, fingers trailing over a stack of Eva's research notes"
4"He captured, thumb tracing the crescent scar there"
5"he said, voice barely above a whisper"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.139
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.111
87.0876%