| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1715 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "loosely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1715 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "perfect" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "crystalline" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "grave" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1715 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1715 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.7 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Hel" | | discoveredNames | | Silas | 1 | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Malphora | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 12 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Malphora" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 86.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared beneath her hand, spiralling into view as if her touch had summoned them" | | 1 | "not quite need oxygen" | | 2 | "as though recognising an old signature" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1715 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | | |
| 80.48% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 51.97 | | std | 22.43 | | cv | 0.432 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 59 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 86 | | 12 | 79 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 68 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 67 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 70 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 295 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1715 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own straight black hair" |
| | adverbCount | 81 | | adverbRatio | 0.04723032069970846 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009329446064139942 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 10.09 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 47.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.32941176470588235 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the pendant’s warmth anchored" | | 1 | "Instead the grove pressed back," | | 2 | "Instead the gap had narrowed." | | 3 | "Instead she lengthened her stride," | | 4 | "Instead she walked forward, one" | | 5 | "Even the faint creak of" | | 6 | "Then it went dark." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 94.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "She had followed the artefact" | | 1 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 2 | "She took one cautious step." | | 3 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 4 | "She had come seeking the" | | 5 | "Her breath misted, though the" | | 6 | "She forced her gaze up" | | 7 | "Her scar, the small crescent" | | 8 | "She rubbed it without thinking," | | 9 | "She crossed to the nearest" | | 10 | "She snatched her hand away." | | 11 | "Its crimson glow spilled across" | | 12 | "She exhaled slowly through her" | | 13 | "She chose a different gap," | | 14 | "Her stomach lurched with the" | | 15 | "They wore her names the" | | 16 | "She refused to turn." | | 17 | "Their sweet scent thickened until" | | 18 | "It tugged, a physical pull" | | 19 | "She planted her feet." |
| | ratio | 0.313 | |
| 50.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 123 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the last" | | 1 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 2 | "Heat flared against her palm," | | 3 | "She had followed the artefact" | | 4 | "She scanned the ring of" | | 5 | "Each one stood twice her" | | 6 | "The air tasted metallic, as" | | 7 | "She took one cautious step." | | 8 | "The grass gave beneath her" | | 9 | "A faint sigh drifted from" | | 10 | "Aurora tilted her head, listening." | | 11 | "The sound repeated, closer, shaped" | | 12 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "The pendant reacted to Hel" | | 14 | "This pocket of ground clearly" | | 15 | "She had come seeking the" | | 16 | "A way to make sure" | | 17 | "Another step carried her between" | | 18 | "The temperature dropped." | | 19 | "Her breath misted, though the" |
| | ratio | 0.82 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the wildflowers stretched out" | | 1 | "If the portal lay there," | | 2 | "Now the footfalls came from" | | 3 | "If the portal was Hel," |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The wood vibrated, a low hum that travelled up her arm and settled behind her eyes." | | 1 | "Letters appeared beneath her hand, spiralling into view as if her touch had summoned them." | | 2 | "The old white line had flushed red, as though blood moved just beneath the surface again." | | 3 | "Yet the impression remained, burned onto her retina: long fingers, skin the colour of moonlight on bone, eyes that reflected her own bright blue back at her but…" | | 4 | "She felt its height, its patience, the way it studied the scar on her wrist as though recognising an old signature." | | 5 | "She dropped, not far, only far enough for her knees to strike packed earth that should not exist beneath the grove." | | 6 | "Their petals opened wider, revealing centres that were not centres at all but small, waiting mouths." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |