| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 79.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1955 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1955 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "searing" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "glistening" | | 5 | "porcelain" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "quivered" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "lurched" | | 14 | "intricate" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "dance" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "perfect" | | 19 | "footfall" | | 20 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 95.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 182 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1955 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1955 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Aurora | 19 | | Dymas | 3 | | Sunday | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Aldric | 2 | | London | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 7 | | One | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Aldric" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae-forged" | | 1 | "Dymas" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though digesting centuries of fallen fruit" | | 1 | "seemed engineered for indulgence" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.512 | | wordCount | 1955 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water but with molten chocolate" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 30.55 | | std | 27.09 | | cv | 0.887 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 96 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 65 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 74 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 102 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 59 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 64 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 39 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 45 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 81 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 87 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "were candied" | | 1 | "being possessed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 357 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 182 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1964 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.03309572301425662 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007128309572301426 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 182 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 182 | | mean | 10.74 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 58.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 182 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 19.27% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Further on, orchards crowded close," |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 1 | "She drew a sharp breath." | | 2 | "Her steps left the ground" | | 3 | "She lifted her face to" | | 4 | "She scanned the terrain rolling" | | 5 | "She took one cautious step," | | 6 | "Her stomach answered with a" | | 7 | "She swallowed hard and kept" | | 8 | "She traced one groove with" | | 9 | "It was warm." | | 10 | "I remember the pull." | | 11 | "She plucked nothing, yet a" | | 12 | "Its chill anchored her." | | 13 | "She drew it partway, let" | | 14 | "They pressed deeper." | | 15 | "She jerked back." | | 16 | "Their shadow stretched across it" | | 17 | "She crested the low hill" | | 18 | "She dug her nails into" | | 19 | "We don’t touch." |
| | ratio | 0.249 | |
| 17.80% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 153 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the veil" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 2 | "Amber light flooded her vision," | | 3 | "She drew a sharp breath." | | 4 | "The air coated her tongue" | | 5 | "Nyx condensed from a thread" | | 6 | "Violet light flickered in the" | | 7 | "This realm remembers every hunger" | | 8 | "Isolde crossed last, silver hair" | | 9 | "Her steps left the ground" | | 10 | "She lifted her face to" | | 11 | "Aurora flexed her left wrist," | | 12 | "She scanned the terrain rolling" | | 13 | "Hills draped in vineyards sloped" | | 14 | "Each cluster pulsed with faint" | | 15 | "Some apples shone translucent, revealing" | | 16 | "Others dripped sap that hardened" | | 17 | "She took one cautious step," | | 18 | "The ground beneath her feet" | | 19 | "A breeze stirred, carrying distant" |
| | ratio | 0.884 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Her steps left the ground unmarked, stems of wild grasses straightening behind her as if she had never passed." | | 1 | "Some apples shone translucent, revealing seeds that swirled like tiny galaxies." | | 2 | "The ground beneath her feet undulated gently, as though digesting centuries of fallen fruit." | | 3 | "Platters covered its length, piled with meats lacquered in fruit reductions, towers of pastries layered with creams that still quivered, bowls overflowing with …" | | 4 | "Their form flickered, growing thinner, then denser, as though the display tested their control." | | 5 | "The architecture twisted in ways that hurt to follow, curves becoming sharp angles before smoothing again." | | 6 | "Crystal fruits chimed from delicate stems, each note carrying a different fragrance, vanilla, then clove, then something that reminded her of her mother’s Sunda…" | | 7 | "Their movements grew restless, the humanoid silhouette stretching taller then compressing as though the realm’s excess fed old memories of mortal weakness." | | 8 | "The pendant now burned steady heat against her chest, guiding them onward through arches formed by living vines." | | 9 | "Isolde remained visible but untouched, as though the realm itself refused to acknowledge her completely." | | 10 | "Two chefs presented living sculptures made of edible gels that shifted shapes according to the audience’s murmurs." | | 11 | "One dragon-shaped trunk offered scaled pears that breathed tiny clouds of cinnamon steam." | | 12 | "Another formed a coiled serpent heavy with segmented oranges that hissed softly when plucked by invisible hands." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |