Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8VH3VDTPN6RYNFC3B1C1V6

Run Details

Duration:
50.1s
Cost:
$0.000719
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain streaked the windows of The Raven's Nest, blurring the neon green glow of the sign outside into a sickly smudge against the Soho pavement. Inside, the air smelled of stale hops, clove cigarettes, and the damp wool of a dozen patrons. Aurora leaned against the mahogany bar, her black hair clinging to her forehead in thin, wet strands. She traced the crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb, a rhythmic motion that anchored her to the present. Silas polished a pint glass with a white cloth, his movements methodical. His silver signet ring caught the dim light every time he rotated the glass. He shifted his weight, his left knee popping with a dry click that echoed in the quiet lull of the evening. The door groaned open, admitting a gust of cold air and a man who looked like he had stepped out of a different decade. He wore a tailored charcoal overcoat that cost more than Rory's yearly rent, but his shoulders slumped under the weight of it. His eyes scanned the room, landing on Aurora. The recognition hit him like a physical blow. "Rory?" The voice sounded like gravel grinding under a boot. Aurora stiffened. She didn't turn immediately. She watched the man's reflection in the mirrored backsplash of the bar, seeing the ghost of a boy she had once loved. "Julian." She turned slowly. Julian stood five feet away, his face leaner than she remembered, the boyish roundness replaced by sharp angles and deep-set lines around his mouth. He looked polished, sterile, and entirely out of place among the faded maps and black-and-white photographs lining the walls. Julian took a step forward, then paused, as if afraid she might vanish if he moved too fast. "I heard you moved to London. I didn't think... I didn't know where to look." "I didn't leave a map." Silas paused his polishing, his hazel eyes flicking between the two. He didn't ask for introductions. He simply slid a coaster toward Julian and stepped back, giving them a wide berth. Julian glanced at the coaster, then back at her. He reached out a hand, then dropped it to his side. "You look different. Your hair is shorter." "Five years is a long time, Julian. People change their hair. They change their lives." "I saw the news about your father. The barrister's retirement." "He retired. I escaped. There's a difference." Julian managed a thin, brittle smile. He signaled Silas for a drink without looking away from her. Silas poured a double scotch, the amber liquid splashing against the glass. Julian took a sip, his hand trembling just enough to make the ice clink. "I tried to write. In the beginning." "The letters never came." "I wrote them. I just couldn't find the courage to post them. I kept them in a mahogany box under my bed until the ink started to fade." Aurora let out a short, sharp laugh that didn't reach her blue eyes. She shifted her weight, her delivery jacket still smelling of the Golden Empress's fried ginger and garlic. "Courage is a funny word for someone who just wanted to make sure the door was locked before he decided to miss me." Julian winced. He leaned against the bar, the expensive fabric of his coat bunching. "I was terrified, Rory. My father... the expectations. I thought if I stayed, I'd end up a shadow of him. I thought leaving was the only way to save myself." "And you did? Save yourself?" He looked around the dim bar, his gaze lingering on a framed photograph of a blurred cityscape from the fifties. "I have a partnership at the firm. A house in Richmond. A car that drives itself." "Sounds like a gilded cage." "It's a stable life." "Stability is just another word for standing still." The silence stretched between them, heavy and suffocating. Aurora felt the ghost of an old ache in her chest, a phantom limb of the girl who had waited by the phone in Cardiff until the dial tone became the only soundtrack of her nights. Julian reached for her hand, his fingers grazing the sleeve of her jacket. She pulled back, not violently, but with a clinical precision. "Why now, Julian? Why walk into a dive bar in Soho on a Tuesday night?" "I was in the city for a hearing. I remembered you mentioned this neighborhood once. I just... I needed to see if you were real." "I'm real. I deliver noodles and live above a bar. I'm very tangible." Julian's expression crumbled, the mask of the successful lawyer slipping to reveal a hollowed-out exhaustion. He looked at her—really looked at her—and saw the hardness in her jaw, the way she held herself like a shield. "You hate me." "Hate takes energy. I'm just tired." "I thought about you every day for three years. Every time I closed a case, every time I looked at the rain, I wondered if you were still wearing that silver locket." Aurora reached up to her neck. The chain was gone. "I sold it to pay my first month's deposit on this flat." Julian closed his eyes. A single, sharp breath escaped him. He looked like he wanted to apologize, to spill a torrent of regrets and justifications, but the words seemed to choke him. "I missed the version of you that believed in me." "That version died in Cardiff." Silas cleared his throat, stepping back in to retrieve the empty glass. His voice was a low rumble, cutting through the tension. "You want another, or are you heading back to the suburbs?" Julian looked at Silas, then back to Aurora. The distance between them felt wider than the ocean, despite the few inches of mahogany separating them. "I should go." "Probably." Julian straightened his coat, the fabric snapping back into place. He looked like the partner at the firm again, the polished surface restored. He lingered for a second, his gaze drifting to the crescent scar on her wrist. "Does it still hurt?" Aurora looked at the scar, then looked him dead in the eye. "Only when it rains." Julian nodded slowly. He turned and walked toward the door, his footsteps echoing on the wooden floor. He stopped at the threshold, the green neon light casting a sickly pallor over his shoulder. He didn't look back. He stepped out into the Soho rain, and the door clicked shut behind him. Aurora didn't move. She stared at the spot where he had stood, the scent of his expensive cologne still lingering, clashing with the smell of old beer and frying oil. Silas slid a fresh glass of water toward her. "He had the look." "What look?" "The look of a man who just realized he's holding a ticket for a train that left a decade ago." Aurora picked up the glass and drank, the cold water hitting the back of her throat. She watched the rain blur the world outside, turning the street into a smudge of grey and neon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
82.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"tangible"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"rhythmic"
2"methodical"
3"weight"
4"echoed"
5"scanned"
6"silence"
7"tangible"
8"tension"
9"footsteps"
10"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1174
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount813
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Rory1
Aurora10
Julian13
Silas7
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Aurora"
4"Julian"
5"Silas"
6"Empress"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.7
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like he had stepped out of a diffe"
1"sounded like gravel grinding under a boot"
2"looked like he wanted to apologize, to sp"
3"looked like the partner at the firm again"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.852
wordCount1174
matches
0"not violently, but with a clinical precision"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.57
std16.55
cv0.846
sampleLengths
079
147
262
31
437
51
646
718
815
95
1031
1120
127
1315
1410
157
1643
177
184
1928
2030
2123
2214
2330
245
2520
2616
275
284
298
3044
3123
3215
3325
3413
3536
363
376
3832
3910
4012
4132
4210
435
4422
4511
4625
473
481
4938
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences97
ratio0.01
matches
0"He looked at her—really looked at her—and saw the hardness in her jaw, the way she held herself like a shield."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount819
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03907203907203907
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013431013431013432
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.1
std7.71
cv0.637
sampleLengths
025
117
217
320
412
514
621
724
822
98
108
111
129
132
144
1522
161
173
1824
1919
2018
2115
225
2311
245
2515
269
2711
287
2915
3010
317
326
3311
3412
3514
367
374
3828
3913
4017
4123
422
4312
4430
455
4620
4716
485
494
41.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.26804123711340205
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
33.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences60
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"His silver signet ring caught"
2"He shifted his weight, his"
3"He wore a tailored charcoal"
4"His eyes scanned the room,"
5"She didn't turn immediately."
6"She watched the man's reflection"
7"She turned slowly."
8"He looked polished, sterile, and"
9"He didn't ask for introductions."
10"He simply slid a coaster"
11"He reached out a hand,"
12"He signaled Silas for a"
13"She shifted her weight, her"
14"He leaned against the bar,"
15"He looked around the dim"
16"She pulled back, not violently,"
17"He looked at her—really looked"
18"He looked like he wanted"
19"His voice was a low"
ratio0.467
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rain streaked the windows of"
1"Aurora leaned against the mahogany"
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"Silas polished a pint glass"
4"His silver signet ring caught"
5"He shifted his weight, his"
6"The door groaned open, admitting"
7"He wore a tailored charcoal"
8"His eyes scanned the room,"
9"The recognition hit him like"
10"The voice sounded like gravel"
11"She didn't turn immediately."
12"She watched the man's reflection"
13"She turned slowly."
14"Julian stood five feet away,"
15"He looked polished, sterile, and"
16"Julian took a step forward,"
17"Silas paused his polishing, his"
18"He didn't ask for introductions."
19"He simply slid a coaster"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar on her wrist with her thumb, a rhythmic motion that anchored her to the present."
1"The door groaned open, admitting a gust of cold air and a man who looked like he had stepped out of a different decade."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.4137%