| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1161 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "velvet" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "stark" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "enigmatic" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "resonated" | | 16 | "throb" | | 17 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "looked uneasy" |
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| 88.61% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1161 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 997 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 7 | | Shade | 4 | | London | 1 | | British | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Veil | 4 | | Isolde | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae-Forged" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.748 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like oil on water" | | 1 | "sounded like glass bells ringing in a bree" | | 2 | "felt like crushed velvet" | | 3 | "looked like deer, but their antlers were" | | 4 | "looked like a curtain of falling diamonds" | | 5 | "felt like cold silk, vibrating with an" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.861 | | wordCount | 1161 | | matches | | 0 | "not in heat this time, but in a rhythmic throb" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 22.76 | | std | 17.6 | | cv | 0.773 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 55 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 39 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 60 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 96.38% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 160 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "The water didn't flow; it floated in suspended, shimmering spheres that drifted upstream, colliding and merging into larger bubbles of liquid silver." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1006 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, blood-red shadows" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.02186878727634195 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002982107355864811 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.85 | | std | 6.52 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 37.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Her bare feet pressed into" | | 2 | "She drifted toward a thicket" | | 3 | "She reached out to touch" | | 4 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 5 | "She reached for the Fae-Forged" | | 6 | "They looked like deer, but" | | 7 | "Their eyes were void-black, reflecting" | | 8 | "It didn't walk so much" | | 9 | "It stopped inches from Aurora," | | 10 | "It sniffed the air, its" | | 11 | "It stepped back, its expression" | | 12 | "She watched a jellyfish pulse" | | 13 | "She looked at the Fae-Forged" | | 14 | "She reached out a hand," | | 15 | "It sounded urgent, stripped of" | | 16 | "She looked at Nyx, who" | | 17 | "She pressed her palm into" |
| | ratio | 0.234 | |
| 11.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks stood like" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between two gnarled" | | 2 | "The air shimmered, a translucent" | | 3 | "She paused, the Heartstone Pendant" | | 4 | "The Shade’s humanoid silhouette bled" | | 5 | "Isolde walked ahead, her silver" | | 6 | "Her bare feet pressed into" | | 7 | "Aurora crossed the threshold." | | 8 | "The roar of distant London" | | 9 | "The sky shifted from the" | | 10 | "Isolde didn't turn around." | | 11 | "She drifted toward a thicket" | | 12 | "The petals were translucent, shifting" | | 13 | "Aurora looked back." | | 14 | "The standing stones were gone," | | 15 | "Nyx’s voice drifted through the" | | 16 | "The Shade merged with the" | | 17 | "Isolde paused by a stream." | | 18 | "The water didn't flow; it" | | 19 | "Aurora approached the water, her" |
| | ratio | 0.896 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 26.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The water didn't flow; it floated in suspended, shimmering spheres that drifted upstream, colliding and merging into larger bubbles of liquid silver." | | 1 | "Aurora approached the water, her boots sinking into moss that felt like crushed velvet." | | 2 | "They looked like deer, but their antlers were made of polished quartz that refracted the gold veins of the sky into a thousand tiny rainbows." | | 3 | "The ground transitioned from moss to a translucent glass that revealed a subterranean world beneath their feet." | | 4 | "The moonsilver was now humming, a high-pitched frequency that resonated with the shimmer of the curtain." | | 5 | "The Shade looked uneasy, their silhouette blurring at the edges as if the purity of the grove were eroding them." | | 6 | "As she approached, the Heartstone Pendant flared again, not in heat this time, but in a rhythmic throb that matched the beating of her own heart." | | 7 | "The red glow of the stone collided with the diamond-light of the Veil, creating a clash of colors that painted the silver leaves in shades of violet and gold." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.19 | |