| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said shortly [shortly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 92.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1394 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1394 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "standard" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "quickened" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "electric" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "magnetic" | | 14 | "macabre" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1390 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1023 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Quinn | 16 | | Tube | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Miller | 11 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Market | 1 | | Harlow | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Miller" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Harlow" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.718 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a man who had been struck dow" | | 1 | "verdigris that seemed to hum against her skin" |
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| 56.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.439 | | wordCount | 1390 | | matches | | 0 | "Not north, not south, but straight into the floor, toward the dark, unmapped veins of" | | 1 | "not south, but straight into the floor, toward the dark, unmapped veins of" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 38.61 | | std | 23.38 | | cv | 0.606 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 54 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 82 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 87 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 46 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 79 |
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| 91.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "been struck" | | 1 | "was coated" | | 2 | "was obscured" |
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| 2.76% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "wasn't behaving" | | 2 | "was pointing" | | 3 | "was leading" | | 4 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thick, tasting of wet iron and something sharper—an ozone tang that set the hair on her arms standing up." | | 1 | "She didn't look at Miller; she looked at the victim." | | 2 | "To a casual observer—or a weary detective looking to finish a shift—it looked like a man who had been struck down in a struggle." | | 3 | "It hadn't pooled in the usual way; it seemed to have thickened into something almost gelatinous, clinging to the fabric of the coat in strange, geometric patterns." | | 4 | "The scent of ozone, the impossible blood, the bone token—it all pointed to the same place." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1030 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "deep, ink-black voids." |
| | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.030097087378640777 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008737864077669903 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 14.79 | | std | 9.68 | | cv | 0.654 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 52.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.4148936170212766 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 45.66% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the wound gave off" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 83.01% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch." | | 1 | "It had been three years" | | 2 | "He looked up as Quinn" | | 3 | "She stepped into the circle" | | 4 | "She didn't look at Miller;" | | 5 | "His eyes were wide, staring" | | 6 | "Her voice was low, a" | | 7 | "She didn't look at the" | | 8 | "She looked at the ground." | | 9 | "She leaned closer to the" | | 10 | "It was a dark, jagged" | | 11 | "It hadn't pooled in the" | | 12 | "She reached into her inner" | | 13 | "She pulled it out just" | | 14 | "It whirled in a frantic," | | 15 | "She turned her gaze away" | | 16 | "She thought of Eva." | | 17 | "She thought of the way" | | 18 | "She reached down and, with" | | 19 | "It was a fragment of" |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 7.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The descent into the Camden" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar" | | 2 | "The air here was thick," | | 3 | "She checked her watch." | | 4 | "The worn leather strap felt" | | 5 | "It had been three years" | | 6 | "The shout came from the" | | 7 | "Quinn quickened her pace, her" | | 8 | "DS Miller was standing over" | | 9 | "He looked up as Quinn" | | 10 | "Miller said, gesturing vaguely at" | | 11 | "Quinn didn't answer immediately." | | 12 | "She stepped into the circle" | | 13 | "She didn't look at Miller;" | | 14 | "The man lay sprawled against" | | 15 | "His eyes were wide, staring" | | 16 | "Her voice was low, a" | | 17 | "Miller said, pointing to the" | | 18 | "Quinn knelt beside the body," | | 19 | "She didn't look at the" |
| | ratio | 0.904 | |
| 68.49% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "To a casual observer—or a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat against the subterranean chill, her boots striking the damp concrete with a rhythmic, military precision that echoe…" | | 1 | "The air here was thick, tasting of wet iron and something sharper—an ozone tang that set the hair on her arms standing up." | | 2 | "The worn leather strap felt familiar against her left wrist, a grounded weight in a place that felt increasingly untethered." | | 3 | "To a casual observer—or a weary detective looking to finish a shift—it looked like a man who had been struck down in a struggle." | | 4 | "She reached into her inner pocket, her fingers brushing against the cold, irregular shape of the object she shouldn't have been carrying." | | 5 | "The small brass casing felt heavy, coated in a fine patina of verdigris that seemed to hum against her skin." | | 6 | "The face, etched with protective sigils that looked more like scratches than art, was obscured by the dim light, but she didn't need to see the markings to feel…" | | 7 | "The compass in her pocket pulsed again, a rhythmic throb that matched the beat of her own heart." |
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| 7.35% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Miller scoffed, though his tone lacked conviction" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice gaining a hard edge" | | 2 | "Miller asked, his face reddening" | | 3 | "Quinn snapped, her eyes flashing" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "Miller muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Miller warned (warn)" | | 3 | "Quinn snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.406 | | leniency | 0.813 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |