Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8VW5FB9PNRS8V45D2WC1HD

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Duration:
4m 42s
Cost:
$0.000560
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain didn't just fall; it hammered the London streets, turning the gutters into rushing black rivers and blurring the neon lights of Soho into bleeding smears of color. Detective Harlow Quinn stood in the recessed doorway of a closed tailor shop, her breath hitching in the damp air. She pulled her coat tighter, the fabric heavy with moisture, and checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The seconds ticked by with a rhythmic indifference to the storm. She had been tracking him for three blocks. Through the silver curtain of the downpour, she saw him. Tomás Herrera was moving with a frantic, uneven gait, his dark, curly hair plastered to his forehead. Even from this distance, the way he hunched his shoulders suggested a man carrying more than just the weight of the rain. He looked hunted. Quinn felt a familiar, cold tightening in her chest—the same sensation she’d felt three years ago, the night DS Morris had vanished into a darkness that no police report could ever adequately describe. She didn't wait for him to turn a corner. She stepped out into the deluge, her boots splashing heavily against the pavement. She moved with a practiced, military precision, ignoring the sting of the cold water against her face. Her eyes, sharp and brown, remained locked on the back of Herrera’s jacket. Herrera bolted. The moment he sensed her presence, he broke into a dead sprint. He ducked through a narrow alleyway, the scent of wet trash and old grease rising to meet her. Quinn lunged after him, her lungs burning as she navigated the labyrinthine shortcuts of the district. She passed the distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest, its light casting an emerald glow over the slick cobblestones, but she didn't slow down. The target was moving toward Camden, heading away from the well-lit main thoroughfares and toward the darker, more derelict edges of the city. "Police! Stop!" she shouted, though the wind snatched the words from her lips and tore them apart. He didn't stop. He was fast, fueled by a desperation that Quinn recognized all too well. As he leaped over a pile of discarded crates, his left sleeve slid up, revealing the jagged white line of a scar running along his forearm. It was a mark of violence, a mark of a life lived on the edge of something the Metropolitan Police weren't equipped to handle. The chase spilled out of the narrow alleys and onto the fringes of Camden. The streets here were wider, emptier, lit by the flickering orange of dying streetlamps. The rain had turned into a freezing mist that clung to her skin like a shroud. Quinn’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat that echoed the rhythm of her boots. She was forty-one, not twenty, and the physical toll of the pursuit was beginning to settle into her joints, but she refused to let her pace slacken. Discipline was all she had left. Herrera veered sharply left, diving toward a derelict entrance that should have been padlocked and boarded up. It was an old Tube station entrance, the iron railings rusted and choked with ivy. Instead of slowing, he slipped through the gap in the gate with an ease that suggested he had done this many times before. Quinn skidded to a halt at the mouth of the stairs. She drew her sidearm, the metal cold and reassuring in her grip, and scanned the darkness. The descent was a throat of shadow, leading down into a throat of stone. "Herrera! Come out with your hands up!" Silence. Only the distant, muffled roar of the city above and the rhythmic dripping of water from the cracked ceiling. She began the descent. The air changed almost immediately. The smell of ozone and rain was replaced by something thick, cloying, and ancient—the scent of burnt incense, copper, and damp earth. As she reached the bottom of the stairs, she realized she wasn't in a standard subway tunnel. The walls were no longer smooth concrete; they were lined with rough-hewn stone, and the light didn't come from overhead fluorescents, but from flickering lanterns and strange, glowing vials tucked into crevices. She stepped into a wide, vaulted chamber, and her breath caught. This was no abandoned station. It was a sprawling, subterranean bazaar. The Veil Market hummed with a low, subsonic energy that Quinn could feel in her teeth. Stalls were carved directly into the rock, draped in heavy velvets and silks that seemed to swallow the light. Figures moved through the gloom—some draped in heavy cloaks, others possessing silhouettes that were subtly, unnervingly wrong. She saw a merchant with skin the color of bruised plums bartering with a woman whose eyes glowed with a faint, rhythmic amber light. Nearby, a man held up a small, carved object—a bone token—and handed it to a guard who stood motionless as a statue. The market was a fever dream of illegal commerce. She saw shapes that looked like alchemical apparatuses, jars containing things that moved too much to be liquid, and scrolls that seemed to pulse with a life of their own. And there, near a stall selling blackened silver trinkets, was Herrera. He was leaning against a stone pillar, his chest heaving, his olive skin pale under the flickering light. He was clutching something to his chest, his knuckles white. He looked up, his warm brown eyes meeting hers across the crowded expanse of the market. There was no fear in his gaze, only a weary, profound exhaustion. Quinn froze. Her training screamed at her to move, to secure the suspect, to bring him back to the light of the station and the certainty of a cell. But the air here was heavy with secrets, and the sheer impossibility of the scene before her pulled at the tether of her logic. This was the territory she had suspected. This was the world that had taken Morris. The law was a blunt instrument, a hammer meant for the world of concrete and sunlight. Here, in the belly of the earth, the hammer felt useless, fragile. She looked at her watch. The leather strap was soaked, the ticking sound lost in the cacophony of the market—the low chanting, the clinking of strange metals, the whispered bargains in languages she didn't recognize. Herrera took a step back, melting into the crowd of hooded figures. He wasn't running anymore; he was disappearing. Quinn stood at the threshold of the market, her weapon heavy in her hand. If she stayed on the stairs, she remained a detective. She remained within the boundaries of the law, safe in the knowledge of what was real. If she stepped further into the gloom, she would be a trespasser in a world that didn't care for her badge. She thought of Morris. She thought of the unexplained, the impossible, and the void left in the wake of things that shouldn't exist. Slowly, Quinn lowered her weapon. She tucked it back into her holster and stepped off the stairs, her boots striking the stone floor of the Veil Market with a sound that felt like a transgression. She followed the curve of the crowd, moving deeper into the dark, chasing the man and the truth that lay hidden beneath the skin of the city.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1229
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"navigated"
4"echoed"
5"scanned"
6"silence"
7"standard"
8"could feel"
9"gloom"
10"pulse"
11"profound"
12"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
70.52% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1223
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1214
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Herrera6
Morris3
Raven1
Nest1
Camden2
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tube1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Raven"
5"Police"
6"Market"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"silks that seemed to swallow the light"
1"looked like alchemical apparatuses, jars"
2"felt like a transgression"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1223
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean45.3
std27.85
cv0.615
sampleLengths
080
18
285
352
42
595
617
766
893
955
1041
117
1220
1380
1411
1563
1646
1739
1811
1956
2068
2128
2235
2319
2461
2523
2662
83.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences79
matches
0"been padlocked"
1"was replaced"
2"were lined"
3"were carved"
4"was soaked"
61.11% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was clutching"
2"was disappearing"
3"wasn't running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences80
ratio0.1
matches
0"The rain didn't just fall; it hammered the London streets, turning the gutters into rushing black rivers and blurring the neon lights of Soho into bleeding smears of color."
1"Quinn felt a familiar, cold tightening in her chest—the same sensation she’d felt three years ago, the night DS Morris had vanished into a darkness that no police report could ever adequately describe."
2"The smell of ozone and rain was replaced by something thick, cloying, and ancient—the scent of burnt incense, copper, and damp earth."
3"The walls were no longer smooth concrete; they were lined with rough-hewn stone, and the light didn't come from overhead fluorescents, but from flickering lanterns and strange, glowing vials tucked into crevices."
4"Figures moved through the gloom—some draped in heavy cloaks, others possessing silhouettes that were subtly, unnervingly wrong."
5"Nearby, a man held up a small, carved object—a bone token—and handed it to a guard who stood motionless as a statue."
6"The leather strap was soaked, the ticking sound lost in the cacophony of the market—the low chanting, the clinking of strange metals, the whispered bargains in languages she didn't recognize."
7"He wasn't running anymore; he was disappearing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1223
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023712183156173343
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009811937857726901
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean15.29
std7.93
cv0.519
sampleLengths
029
120
220
311
48
510
617
722
83
933
109
1113
1217
1313
142
1512
1618
1716
1826
1923
2017
213
2213
2326
2424
2514
2614
2716
2816
2927
306
3117
3215
3323
3411
3516
3614
377
381
3919
404
415
4222
4317
4432
4511
465
476
4816
4919
42.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3375
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Instead of slowing, he slipped"
1"Only the distant, muffled roar"
2"Slowly, Quinn lowered her weapon."
ratio0.039
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences76
matches
0"She pulled her coat tighter,"
1"She had been tracking him"
2"He looked hunted."
3"She didn't wait for him"
4"She stepped out into the"
5"She moved with a practiced,"
6"Her eyes, sharp and brown,"
7"He ducked through a narrow"
8"She passed the distinctive green"
9"she shouted, though the wind"
10"He didn't stop."
11"He was fast, fueled by"
12"It was a mark of"
13"She was forty-one, not twenty,"
14"It was an old Tube"
15"She drew her sidearm, the"
16"She began the descent."
17"She stepped into a wide,"
18"It was a sprawling, subterranean"
19"She saw a merchant with"
ratio0.421
45.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rain didn't just fall;"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood in"
2"She pulled her coat tighter,"
3"The seconds ticked by with"
4"She had been tracking him"
5"Tomás Herrera was moving with"
6"He looked hunted."
7"Quinn felt a familiar, cold"
8"She didn't wait for him"
9"She stepped out into the"
10"She moved with a practiced,"
11"Her eyes, sharp and brown,"
12"The moment he sensed her"
13"He ducked through a narrow"
14"Quinn lunged after him, her"
15"She passed the distinctive green"
16"The target was moving toward"
17"she shouted, though the wind"
18"He didn't stop."
19"He was fast, fueled by"
ratio0.829
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Even from this distance, the"
1"If she stayed on the"
2"If she stepped further into"
ratio0.039
70.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Quinn’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat that echoed the rhythm of her boots."
1"Figures moved through the gloom—some draped in heavy cloaks, others possessing silhouettes that were subtly, unnervingly wrong."
2"Nearby, a man held up a small, carved object—a bone token—and handed it to a guard who stood motionless as a statue."
3"She saw shapes that looked like alchemical apparatuses, jars containing things that moved too much to be liquid, and scrolls that seemed to pulse with a life of…"
4"She thought of the unexplained, the impossible, and the void left in the wake of things that shouldn't exist."
5"She tucked it back into her holster and stepped off the stairs, her boots striking the stone floor of the Veil Market with a sound that felt like a transgressio…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she shouted, though the wind snatched the words from her lips and tore them apart"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
76.3663%