Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8VW5MVKY1KYPXS14NZR8ZZ

Run Details

Duration:
8.6s
Cost:
$0.002388
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest, stuttering in rhythmic pulses of electric hum. Inside, the air tasted of stale stout and old mahogany. Silas stood behind the scarred bar, his hazel eyes tracking the room with the clinical detachment of a man who still counted exits. He adjusted his silver signet ring, the polish catching the flicker of a low desk lamp. The front door groaned open. A woman stepped out of the downpour, her black hair plastered to her skull. She shook off a heavy trench coat, revealing a thin frame and a crescent-shaped scar tracing the bone of her left wrist. She scanned the room, her bright blue gaze snagging on the bar. Rory walked toward the counter, her boots leaving damp crescents on the floorboards. She caught sight of the grey-streaked auburn beard behind the wood. Her shoulders slumped an inch, the defensive shell she wore as a delivery driver slipping for a fraction of a second. Long time, Silas. He stopped wiping a crystal tumbler. His limp slowed his movement as he rounded the edge of the bar, the familiar hitch in his gait mirroring the heavy silence between them. He stopped a few feet away, hands buried deep in his pockets. The city has a way of shrinking when you stop looking for it, doesn't it? Rory hooked a stool with her heel and climbed up. She pressed her scarred wrist against the cool varnish of the bar. The movement was sharp, calculated, as if she expected the wood to burn her. She looked at the old maps peeling off the walls, the grainy photographs of faces she hadn't recognized in years. You kept the place. I thought you would have traded the secrets for a quiet garden in the countryside by now. The countryside has too many eyes. Here, the noise swallows the secrets whole. You look tired, Rory. That look in your eyes, the one that used to belong to a girl dreaming of law books in Cardiff, it’s gone. Did Evan take that, too? Rory reached for a bowl of pretzels, her fingers hovering before she clenched them into a fist. She didn't look at him. She stared at her own reflection in the back-bar mirror, past the rows of amber bottles and the dust on the shelves. Evan is a ghost. I stopped being a student the day I realized the law doesn't protect the people who need it most. I’m a delivery person now. I bring cold takeout to people who don't want to be seen. It pays the rent, and it doesn't ask for a thesis on jurisprudence. Silas reached under the bar and produced a glass of amber liquid, sliding it across the wood. It stopped an inch from her hand. I heard the whispers about a woman moving through London with that specific crescent scar. People in my line of work noticed a shift in the local ecosystem. Suddenly, doors unlocked that shouldn't have, and packages arrived at addresses that don't officially exist. She took a sip of the drink, the heat of it catching in her throat. She didn't flinch. She set the glass down with a precise, metallic clink. I found out that if you act like you belong everywhere, no one asks why you’re anywhere. You taught me that, decades ago. When we lived in that drafty flat near the university, you told me that a shadow is only dangerous if it stays in the light too long. Silas leaned his elbows on the bar, the weight of his posture betraying the knee he kept braced against the bottom shelf. He watched a drip of rain slide down the windowpane, his focus drifting. I taught you to survive. I didn't teach you to vanish. There is a difference between being a ghost and being dead, Rory. I look at you and I see a machine. Efficient. Cold. Everything you swore you would never be. You sold a version of the world that didn't exist, Silas. You sat in this chair, sipping the same bitterness you’re pouring me, and you talked about duty. But when the dust settled in Prague, you weren't concerned with duty. You were concerned with how to build a fortress out of broken history. I learned from the master. She gestured toward the bookshelf at the back of the room, the one that led to the secret space where the maps were real and the people were ghosts of a different sort. You have a back room full of men who are waiting for a signal. You have a signet ring that opens locks across the continent. Don't sit there acting like you’re surprised I turned out just as jagged as the tools you kept under your mattress. He rotated his ring, the silver catching the dim light. His expression didn't shift, but a vein pulsed in his temple. I did what I had to so you wouldn't end up a tragedy. I wanted you to have a life where your wrist stayed clean, where your nights weren't measured by how many exits you could name. I look at you and I realize my failure wasn't in keeping you safe. It was in thinking you could handle the truth without becoming part of the void. Rory stood up. She pulled her coat around her, the fabric stiff with damp. She didn't offer a smile, nor did she reach to touch his arm. The space between them was a chasm of years, filled with the debris of broken trust and the jagged edges of survival. You didn't fail me, Silas. You prepared me. There’s a world of difference. Next time I deliver here, make sure the order is ready when I arrive. I don't have the time to sit and mourn the people we were in Cardiff. She turned toward the door, her stride echoing on the wooden floor. She paused with her hand on the latch, the cold air from the street rushing in to stir the stale bar air. She didn't look back. She didn't need to. The city is waiting for the next package, and I don't like to be late. She stepped out into the night, the neon sign hissing as the rain intensified. Silas stared at the empty stool, then at the half-finished glass. He pulled a rag from his apron and began to wipe the spot where she had sat, his movements methodical, erasing the existence of her from the polished wood. He moved to the bookshelf, his limp pronounced, and pulled the spine of an old, leather-bound history book. The shelf clicked, shifting inward just enough to reveal the dark path behind the walls. He walked inside, leaving the bar to the silence, the maps, and the ghosts of everyone he had ever tried to save.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1146
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"efficient"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"methodical"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"electric"
2"flicker"
3"tracing"
4"scanned"
5"crystal"
6"familiar"
7"silence"
8"calculated"
9"weight"
10"efficient"
11"pulsed"
12"measured"
13"echoing"
14"methodical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
31.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"look"
1"look see"
2"look realize"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1146
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas7
Rory6
Cardiff2
Evan2
London1
Prague1
You10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1146
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
66.22% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean40.93
std15.62
cv0.382
sampleLengths
067
153
245
33
443
515
656
721
844
944
1053
1124
1243
1328
1450
1535
1641
1758
1833
1946
2021
2166
2249
2342
2442
2515
2654
2755
97.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences90
matches
0"were concerned"
1"surprised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs203
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences90
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1151
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"old, leather-bound history"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.015638575152041704
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0026064291920069507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.73
std6.8
cv0.534
sampleLengths
018
110
223
316
45
514
622
712
813
911
1021
113
126
1325
1412
1515
1610
1712
1814
1920
204
2117
226
237
244
2522
265
2717
285
2922
304
3119
325
3312
3413
3517
367
3715
3813
3915
4015
413
4210
4317
446
4527
4622
4713
485
496
32.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners28
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Suddenly, doors unlocked that shouldn't"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences88
matches
0"He adjusted his silver signet"
1"She shook off a heavy"
2"She scanned the room, her"
3"She caught sight of the"
4"Her shoulders slumped an inch,"
5"He stopped wiping a crystal"
6"His limp slowed his movement"
7"He stopped a few feet"
8"She pressed her scarred wrist"
9"She looked at the old"
10"You kept the place."
11"I thought you would have"
12"You look tired, Rory."
13"She didn't look at him."
14"She stared at her own"
15"I stopped being a student"
16"I’m a delivery person now."
17"I bring cold takeout to"
18"It pays the rent, and"
19"It stopped an inch from"
ratio0.636
16.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain lashed against the green"
1"Silas stood behind the scarred"
2"He adjusted his silver signet"
3"The front door groaned open."
4"A woman stepped out of"
5"She shook off a heavy"
6"She scanned the room, her"
7"Rory walked toward the counter,"
8"She caught sight of the"
9"Her shoulders slumped an inch,"
10"He stopped wiping a crystal"
11"His limp slowed his movement"
12"He stopped a few feet"
13"The city has a way"
14"Rory hooked a stool with"
15"She pressed her scarred wrist"
16"The movement was sharp, calculated,"
17"She looked at the old"
18"You kept the place."
19"I thought you would have"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"You have a signet ring that opens locks across the continent."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.5417%