Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8VW5TSKAG123MYAXCEYBE0

Run Details

Duration:
8m
Cost:
$0.000989
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory yanked the door open. The hallway of the Brick Lane complex smelled of frying garlic and damp concrete. Lucien stood there, a charcoal silhouette against the flickering fluorescent light of the corridor. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the silver tip clicking against the linoleum. Rain clung to his platinum hair, turning the strands into shards of glass. "My locks are new, Lucien." He didn't move. His amber eye caught the light, while the black one remained a void. He looked like he had stepped straight out of a boardroom in the 1920s, despite the London drizzle soaking into the wool of his shoulders. "Locks are merely suggestions for someone with my resources." Rory stepped back, not to invite him in, but to clear a path for the door to slam. He shifted his weight, sliding the tip of the cane into the doorframe. The movement was fluid, precise. He didn't push, but the barrier remained. "You vanished. Three months of silence. Then you show up at a flat that isn't on any of your maps." "I have a map for everything, Aurora." He stepped inside, the scent of expensive sandalwood and ozone trailing after him. He didn't wait for a gesture of welcome. He navigated the narrow entryway, his eyes scanning the chaos of the room. Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from a stack of ancient scrolls, landing with a soft thud on a mahogany side table. The cat hissed. "Still living in a library of madness, I see." Rory closed the door with a sharp click. She crossed her arms, her fingers grazing the crescent scar on her left wrist. The air in the flat felt suddenly thin, compressed by his presence. He filled the room, his tailored suit a stark contrast to her oversized delivery hoodie and leggings. "What do you want? Information? A favor? Or did you just miss the smell of curry from the downstairs shop?" Lucien paused. He turned to her, his expression a mask of polished indifference, but his gaze lingered on the pulse point of her neck. He shifted the cane to his left hand, the ivory handle gleaming. "I found something. Something regarding the Avaros lineage." "I stopped caring about your family tree the night you told me we were a mistake." The silence that followed stretched, taut as a piano wire. Lucien’s jaw tightened. He took a step closer, invading her space until she could see the faint gold flecks in his amber iris. He smelled of the cold night air and something metallic. "We were not a mistake. The timing was a disaster." "The timing was you choosing your secrets over me." Rory turned away, walking toward the kitchen nook. She grabbed a glass, her movements jerky. She didn't look at him, but she could feel him moving. He didn't walk so much as glide, his footsteps silent on the hardwood. He stopped just behind her, not touching, but close enough that the heat radiating from his chest warmed her back. "You always had a penchant for the dramatic, Laila." "Don't call me that." "Why? Because it reminds you of who you were when you actually trusted me?" Rory spun around, the glass nearly slipping from her grip. Her blue eyes flashed. "Trust is a luxury for people who don't get burned. You played a game with my life, Lucien. You treated me like a piece on your board." He reached out, his fingers hovering inches from her jawline. He didn't close the gap. The restraint was more agonizing than a touch. "I kept you distant to keep you breathing. The underworld doesn't take kindly to fixers with weaknesses." "And what was I? A liability?" "You were the only thing that made me forget I was half-monster." The words landed heavy. Rory felt the anger flicker, replaced by a hollow ache she had spent twelve weeks burying under double shifts and legal textbooks. She looked at his mouth, the thin, firm line of it, and remembered the taste of him—bitter coffee and something dark. "You don't get to come back here and say that." "I know." Lucien finally closed the distance. He set the cane against the wall and gripped her waist, his large hands pulling her flush against him. The impact knocked the breath from her lungs. He didn't kiss her; he buried his face in the crook of her neck, inhaling sharply. He sounded shattered, a hairline fracture in the perfect porcelain of his persona. "I couldn't stop thinking about the way you look when you're solving a puzzle. The way you bite your lip when you're close to the answer." Rory’s hands stayed at her sides for a heartbeat, then she felt her resolve crumble. She grabbed the lapels of his charcoal jacket, bunching the expensive fabric in her fists, and hauled him down. The kiss was a collision. It wasn't soft or tentative; it was a reclamation. It tasted of desperation and old grudges. Lucien groaned into her mouth, his grip tightening on her waist, lifting her slightly off her feet. He backed her into the kitchen counter, the edge of the granite digging into her lower back. She wrapped her legs around his hips, pulling him closer, needing to erase the gap the last three months had carved between them. His hands slid from her waist to her thighs, his palms hot through the thin fabric of her leggings. "I hate you," she whispered against his lips. "I suspect you do," he murmured, his voice a low vibration that rattled in her chest. He trailed kisses down her throat, his teeth grazing the sensitive skin just below her ear. Rory arched her back, her fingers digging into the platinum blond of his hair, pulling him back up to face her. His heterochromatic eyes were wide, the pupils blown. The poise was gone. The fixer, the broker, the impeccably dressed demon—he had vanished, leaving behind a man who looked starved. "Tell me to leave," he challenged, his breath ghosting over her skin. "Tell me you don't want this, and I will walk out that door and never return to this street." Rory looked at him, really looked at him. She saw the exhaustion in the corners of his eyes and the way his hand trembled slightly where it gripped the counter. She didn't say a word. Instead, she reached up and yanked his tie loose, pulling him back down into another bruising kiss. He swept a stack of research notes off the counter with one arm, sending papers fluttering to the floor like wounded birds. He hoisted her up onto the granite, his body slotting between her knees. "You're a disaster, Lucien." "And you're the only person who knows exactly how to fix me." He captured her lips again, his tongue tracing the seam of her mouth, demanding entry. Rory opened for him, her world narrowing down to the scent of sandalwood and the weight of him pressing her into the stone. The rain continued to lash against the windowpanes, blurring the lights of Brick Lane into a smear of neon gold and red, but inside the flat, the only thing that mattered was the friction of skin against fabric and the rhythmic thrum of two hearts trying to find the same beat again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1221
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"complex"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"stark"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"perfect"
count1
13
word"porcelain"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count1
17
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"complex"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"navigated"
4"scanning"
5"stark"
6"pulse"
7"gleaming"
8"could feel"
9"footsteps"
10"flicker"
11"shattered"
12"perfect"
13"porcelain"
14"resolve"
15"trembled"
16"tracing"
17"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount933
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
London1
Rory10
Lucien5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.964
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he had stepped straight out o"
35.93% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.641
wordCount1219
matches
0"not to invite him in, but to clear a path for the door to slam"
1"not touching, but close enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean27.09
std20.31
cv0.75
sampleLengths
059
15
241
39
443
520
67
757
89
951
1020
1136
128
1316
1443
1510
169
1759
189
194
2014
2114
2227
2323
2417
256
2612
2747
2810
292
3061
3126
3234
3355
3442
358
3616
3737
3829
3931
4052
4135
424
4312
4490
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
22.56% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences95
ratio0.042
matches
0"She looked at his mouth, the thin, firm line of it, and remembered the taste of him—bitter coffee and something dark."
1"He didn't kiss her; he buried his face in the crook of her neck, inhaling sharply."
2"It wasn't soft or tentative; it was a reclamation."
3"The fixer, the broker, the impeccably dressed demon—he had vanished, leaving behind a man who looked starved."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount936
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02564102564102564
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009615384615384616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.83
std7.39
cv0.576
sampleLengths
05
114
214
313
413
55
63
713
825
99
1018
1113
125
137
1420
157
1613
178
1813
1920
203
219
228
2314
2412
2517
2620
272
2822
2912
308
3116
3210
333
3420
3510
3610
379
388
397
4011
4113
4220
439
444
4514
4610
474
4827
4910
34.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.24210526315789474
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners23
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, she reached up and"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences71
matches
0"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
1"He didn't move."
2"His amber eye caught the"
3"He looked like he had"
4"He shifted his weight, sliding"
5"He didn't push, but the"
6"He stepped inside, the scent"
7"He didn't wait for a"
8"He navigated the narrow entryway,"
9"She crossed her arms, her"
10"He filled the room, his"
11"He turned to her, his"
12"He shifted the cane to"
13"He took a step closer,"
14"He smelled of the cold"
15"She grabbed a glass, her"
16"She didn't look at him,"
17"He didn't walk so much"
18"He stopped just behind her,"
19"Her blue eyes flashed."
ratio0.592
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory yanked the door open."
1"The hallway of the Brick"
2"Lucien stood there, a charcoal"
3"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
4"Rain clung to his platinum"
5"He didn't move."
6"His amber eye caught the"
7"He looked like he had"
8"Rory stepped back, not to"
9"He shifted his weight, sliding"
10"The movement was fluid, precise."
11"He didn't push, but the"
12"He stepped inside, the scent"
13"He didn't wait for a"
14"He navigated the narrow entryway,"
15"Ptolemy, the tabby, leaped from"
16"The cat hissed."
17"Rory closed the door with"
18"She crossed her arms, her"
19"The air in the flat"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien groaned into her mouth, his grip tightening on her waist, lifting her slightly off her feet."
1"Rory arched her back, her fingers digging into the platinum blond of his hair, pulling him back up to face her."
2"Rory opened for him, her world narrowing down to the scent of sandalwood and the weight of him pressing her into the stone."
3"The rain continued to lash against the windowpanes, blurring the lights of Brick Lane into a smear of neon gold and red, but inside the flat, the only thing tha…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he murmured, his voice a low vibration that rattled in her chest"
1"he challenged, his breath ghosting over her skin"
34.62% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"he challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.231
71.5887%