| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1253 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1253 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
| | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "oppressive" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "desire" | | 13 | "carried the weight" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "raced" | | 16 | "searing" | | 17 | "familiar" | | 18 | "fragmented" | | 19 | "crystalline" | | 20 | "chill" | | 21 | "shattered" | | 22 | "intricate" | | 23 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 87 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1252 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1252 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Aurora | 8 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 2 | | Dymasian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Dymasian" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "markings that seemed to writhe and shift whenever Aurora turned her head too quickly" | | 1 | "felt like a morsel caught in the throat" | | 2 | "looked like a jagged spear against the mo" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.799 | | wordCount | 1252 | | matches | | 0 | "not a place of earth and life, but a sprawling, twisted garden of indulgence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 43.17 | | std | 23.45 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 70 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 76 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 58 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 52 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 193 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "A hairline fissure raced across the horizon, revealing a glimpse of something darker—a vast, roiling expanse of heavy, obsidian clouds and floating landmasses that burned with an internal, volcanic light." | | 1 | "The blade didn't meet resistance; it sank into the stone as if it were water, slicing through the unseen threads that bound the grove to the Dymasian expanse." | | 2 | "The silence of the grove was no longer heavy or predatory; it was just empty." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1260 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "faint, sickly-sweet scent" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.029365079365079365 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005555555555555556 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.39 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.478 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 47.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3448275862068966 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, ribbons of liquid shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "They moved without disturbing a" | | 1 | "She stepped onto a path" | | 2 | "She climbed to her feet," | | 3 | "Their incorporeal hand reached into" | | 4 | "They recoiled, the shadow of" | | 5 | "It reacts to intent." | | 6 | "It was beautiful, but it" | | 7 | "She felt like a morsel" | | 8 | "It was not a place" | | 9 | "She caught the faint, sickly-sweet" | | 10 | "She found a pedestal carved" | | 11 | "It lacked any discernable seam" | | 12 | "She hesitated, the weight of" | | 13 | "She drew the moonsilver dagger." | | 14 | "They shattered like glass, raining" | | 15 | "She didn't hesitate." | | 16 | "She plunged the moonsilver dagger" | | 17 | "She looked at her wrist," | | 18 | "She waited for the trees" | | 19 | "They looked toward the boundary" |
| | ratio | 0.244 | |
| 58.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the standing" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over the threshold," | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her" | | 3 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 4 | "Violet eyes scanned the canopy" | | 5 | "They moved without disturbing a" | | 6 | "The Veil should feel taut" | | 7 | "Aurora touched the small crescent" | | 8 | "The Fae-Forged Blade pulsed with" | | 9 | "Every breath she took felt" | | 10 | "Isolde said the path would" | | 11 | "Nyx pointed a long, tapering" | | 12 | "The ancient oaks, once uniform" | | 13 | "Each trunk bore markings that" | | 14 | "She stepped onto a path" | | 15 | "The ground was alive." | | 16 | "Aurora crouched, reaching for a" | | 17 | "She climbed to her feet," | | 18 | "The contrast between the cold" | | 19 | "Nothing stays still here, Nyx." |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "If you seek a destination," | | 1 | "If that hunger spills through," |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 29.48% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant against her sternum warmed, a persistent, rhythmic thrumming that matched the quickening pace of her own pulse." | | 1 | "The Fae-Forged Blade pulsed with a faint, silvery luminescence that flickered in time with the shifting colors of the canopy." | | 2 | "The ancient oaks, once uniform and weathered, now glowed with bioluminescent veins that spiraled upward toward the amber-tinted sky." | | 3 | "She stepped onto a path paved with flat, smooth river stones that hummed under her weight, releasing soft, chime-like tones with every strike of her heel." | | 4 | "Aurora crouched, reaching for a patch of clover that shimmered like hammered bronze." | | 5 | "Instead, ribbons of liquid shadow poured from the stone basin, pooling into a basin that defied gravity, swirling upward into thin, hovering spheres of darkness…" | | 6 | "A hairline fissure raced across the horizon, revealing a glimpse of something darker—a vast, roiling expanse of heavy, obsidian clouds and floating landmasses t…" | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant scorched her chest, a sudden, searing spike of heat that forced her to gasp." | | 8 | "The blade sang as it left the sheath, a high-pitched, crystalline note that bit into the heavy air." | | 9 | "Nyx surged forward, their hands weaving intricate, flickering patterns in the air, creating a barrier of solidified gloom that shimmered between them and the we…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |