| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde warned softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.619 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |
| 78.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.68% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1397 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "enigmatic" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "sanctuary" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "racing" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "gloom" | | 18 | "surreal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 8 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1392 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1192 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Rory | 16 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.829 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "silhouette that seemed to swallow the light around them" | | 1 | "felt like a departure from the laws of" | | 2 | "golds that seemed to glow from within" | | 3 | "mushrooms that seemed to be breathing" | | 4 | "felt like a coal pressed against her sk" | | 5 | "bite that seemed to travel up her arm and settle in her bones, but she welcomed it" | | 6 | "felt like a physical weight" |
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| 56.32% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.437 | | wordCount | 1392 | | matches | | 0 | "no one behind her to warn but" | | 1 | "not by eyes, but by the environment itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 90.99% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 43.5 | | std | 20.38 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 44 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 76 | | 8 | 62 | | 9 | 54 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 61 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 62 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 62 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 76 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was humming" | | 1 | "were diving" | | 2 | "was biting" | | 3 | "were walking" | | 4 | "was looking" | | 5 | "was standing" | | 6 | "was freezing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Outside the ancient oak standing stones, the London breeze had been damp and smelled of wet pavement and exhaust; here, the atmosphere was thick, sweet, and heavy, like inhaling the scent of crushed jasmine and old honey." | | 1 | "Their voice didn't come from a throat; it was a soft, rushing sound, like wind whistling through a keyhole." | | 2 | "She did feel it—a strange, pressurized sensation, as if she were diving toward the bottom of a deep pool." | | 3 | "She walked with a terrifying grace, her feet brushing against the wildflowers that bloomed in impossible, neon hues—electric blues, deep magentas, and golds that seemed to glow from within." | | 4 | "The ground was a riot of bioluminescent flora; tiny, bell-shaped flowers chimed softly as they swayed, emitting a sound like distant crystal bells." | | 5 | "She felt an inexplicable sense of being watched—not by eyes, but by the environment itself." | | 6 | "Rory thought of Dymas—the stories of the amber skies and the suffocating excess of the gluttony realm." | | 7 | "It wasn't a lack of light, but a presence of something else—something hungry." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1205 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny, bell-shaped flowers" | | 1 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.026556016597510373 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009128630705394191 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 16.19 | | std | 7.9 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 31 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 47.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3488372093023256 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her hand instinctively" | | 1 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly," | | 2 | "Their voice didn't come from" | | 3 | "She did feel it—a strange," | | 4 | "She walked with a terrifying" | | 5 | "She reached down to adjust" | | 6 | "They pushed through a curtain" | | 7 | "Their trunks were translucent, looking" | | 8 | "It was a warning." | | 9 | "She knelt, reaching out a" | | 10 | "She looked at the small," | | 11 | "She felt an inexplicable sense" | | 12 | "She thought of the warmth" | | 13 | "It would be a corruption" | | 14 | "It wasn't a movement of" | | 15 | "It was subtle, a slight" | | 16 | "She drew the Fae-Forged blade." | | 17 | "It was a sharp, clean" | | 18 | "It wasn't a lack of" | | 19 | "She was a delivery girl" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 40.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the grove" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over a tangle" | | 2 | "She paused, her hand instinctively" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant was humming." | | 4 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly," | | 5 | "Rory whispered, though there was" | | 6 | "Nyx didn't walk so much" | | 7 | "The Shade’s form was a" | | 8 | "Their voice didn't come from" | | 9 | "Rory nodded, swallowing hard." | | 10 | "She did feel it—a strange," | | 11 | "Every step deeper into the" | | 12 | "a new voice drifted toward" | | 13 | "Isolde Varga moved ahead of" | | 14 | "She walked with a terrifying" | | 15 | "The petals simply sprang back" | | 16 | "Rory said, her voice regaining" | | 17 | "She reached down to adjust" | | 18 | "The moonsilver hilt was biting" | | 19 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped over a tangle of silver-veined ferns, her boots sinking into moss that felt less like vegetation and more like velvet upholstery." | | 1 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly, but a rhythmic vibration against her collarbone, a low-frequency pulse that mirrored the frantic thrum of her own heart." | | 2 | "The Shade’s form was a void in the shape of a man, six feet of living darkness that made the vibrant colors of the grove feel strangely muted by comparison." | | 3 | "She did feel it—a strange, pressurized sensation, as if she were diving toward the bottom of a deep pool." | | 4 | "She walked with a terrifying grace, her feet brushing against the wildflowers that bloomed in impossible, neon hues—electric blues, deep magentas, and golds tha…" | | 5 | "Rory walked toward the center, her gaze fixed on a cluster of iridescent mushrooms that seemed to be breathing." | | 6 | "As she approached, the Heartstone against her chest grew warmer, the crimson gem pulsing with a light that matched the sap in the trees." | | 7 | "It was subtle, a slight warping of the landscape that made the trees behind it look bent and broken." | | 8 | "The warmth of the Heartstone intensified, turning from a steady pulse to a sharp, insistent heat that felt like a coal pressed against her skin." | | 9 | "It was a sharp, clean sensation in a world that was becoming increasingly surreal." | | 10 | "The sweet scent of jasmine curdled, replaced by a metallic tang that coated the back of Rory’s throat." | | 11 | "A hairline fracture appeared in the air, a jagged tear that bled a light so dark it felt like a physical weight." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice regaining its steady, analytical edge" | | 1 | "Rory asked, her blue eyes wide as she scanned the perimeter" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice surprisingly steady despite the tremor in her knees" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned softly (warn)" | | 2 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.364 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |