| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory commanded more [more]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.625 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 87.92% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "standard" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "effortless" | | 15 | "enigmatic" | | 16 | "solitary" | | 17 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 31 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The Veil is thin here. A tear in the fabric. I can feel the pull." | | 1 | "Something moves in the periphery," | | 2 | "Not a thing. A feeling. A hunger that has no stomach." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1093 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 3 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Veil | 4 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Nyx | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.677 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "chill that seemed to warn her of the threshold ahead" | | 1 | "felt like walking through a curtain of" | | 2 | "wood that seemed to reach toward the amber clouds like grasping fingers" | | 3 | "as if sensing her warmth" | | 4 | "felt like a trap—a gilded cage designed" | | 5 | "looked like they were made of spun glass" | | 6 | "felt like a warning" | | 7 | "briars that seemed to have grown in the seconds since they had arrived" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 38.69 | | std | 22.45 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 86 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 54 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 50 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 46 |
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| 83.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "being squeezed" | | 1 | "been caught" | | 2 | "were made" | | 3 | "were narrowed" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was thrumming" | | 1 | "were pulling" | | 2 | "was biting" | | 3 | "was seeing" | | 4 | "were looking" | | 5 | "weren't looking" | | 6 | "was vibrating" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 5 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, heavy air of Richmond Park felt standard enough—the scent of wet earth, decaying leaves, and the distant, muffled hum of London traffic." | | 1 | "One moment they were a tall, solid silhouette of a person, standing six-foot-two with faintly glowing violet eyes; the next, they were a smudge of darkness against the bark of an oak, more incorporeal than a memory." | | 2 | "She could see it now—the Veil." | | 3 | "She gasped, lungs filling with air that was sweet—cloyingly sweet, like jasmine and crushed nectarines." | | 4 | "The sky above wasn't the bruised purple of a London dusk; it was a swirling canopy of amber and gold, as if the sun had been caught in a permanent state of setting." | | 5 | "The light here didn't come from a single source; it seemed to emanate from the flora itself, a soft, pervasive glow that made the edges of everything look blurred and dreamlike." | | 6 | "It felt like a trap—a gilded cage designed to make a traveler forget they were lost." | | 7 | "They weren't looking at Rory; they were looking into the deep, glowing thickets of the grove." | | 8 | "It was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, a steady, rhythmic warmth that felt like a warning." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1109 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "uneven, root-choked ground." | | 2 | "dense, silver-leafed briars" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03787195671776375 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012623985572587917 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 14.23 | | std | 8.17 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 31 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 50.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.367816091954023 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a sudden, sickening" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 77.89% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a smell, exactly," | | 1 | "It wasn't a steady beat," | | 2 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 5 | "She didn't turn around, but" | | 6 | "She looked to the shadow" | | 7 | "They shifted, their form rippling" | | 8 | "I can feel the pull.*" | | 9 | "She could see it now—the" | | 10 | "It wasn't a wall, but" | | 11 | "It blurred the trees behind" | | 12 | "She took a breath, tasted" | | 13 | "She gasped, lungs filling with" | | 14 | "She wasn't in Richmond Park" | | 15 | "She reached for her phone" | | 16 | "She looked entirely at home," | | 17 | "She turned her head slightly," | | 18 | "It felt like a trap—a" | | 19 | "They weren't looking at Rory;" |
| | ratio | 0.355 | |
| 45.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp, heavy air of" | | 1 | "It wasn't a smell, exactly," | | 2 | "Rory reached down, her fingers" | | 3 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 4 | "It wasn't a steady beat," | | 5 | "she whispered, her voice sounding" | | 6 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 8 | "The Half-Fae didn't so much" | | 9 | "Isolde was a ghost in" | | 10 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 11 | "She didn't turn around, but" | | 12 | "Rory muttered, though there was" | | 13 | "She looked to the shadow" | | 14 | "Nyx didn't answer with words." | | 15 | "They shifted, their form rippling" | | 16 | "A whisper, like wind rushing" | | 17 | "*The Veil is thin here." | | 18 | "A tear in the fabric." | | 19 | "I can feel the pull.*" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a steady beat, but a frantic, uneven pulse that mirrored the sudden skip in her heart." | | 1 | "Ahead of her, Isolde moved with a grace that defied the uneven, root-choked ground." | | 2 | "The moonsilver was biting cold even through her clothes, a sharp, metallic chill that seemed to warn her of the threshold ahead." | | 3 | "It wasn't a wall, but a shimmering distortion in the air, a heat haze that shouldn't exist in the cool London evening." | | 4 | "Rory stumbled, her boots hitting ground that felt far too soft, far too springy." | | 5 | "She gasped, lungs filling with air that was sweet—cloyingly sweet, like jasmine and crushed nectarines." | | 6 | "The sky above wasn't the bruised purple of a London dusk; it was a swirling canopy of amber and gold, as if the sun had been caught in a permanent state of sett…" | | 7 | "Giant, translucent flowers, some as large as umbrellas, pulsed with a rhythmic, bioluminescent light, casting long, swaying shadows across a landscape that defi…" | | 8 | "The trees weren't oaks or elms, but towering, twisted spires of silver wood that seemed to reach toward the amber clouds like grasping fingers." | | 9 | "The light here didn't come from a single source; it seemed to emanate from the flora itself, a soft, pervasive glow that made the edges of everything look blurr…" | | 10 | "As she moved, the flowers seemed to lean toward her, their petals curling slightly as if sensing her warmth." | | 11 | "It was no longer just pulsing; it was vibrating, a steady, rhythmic warmth that felt like a warning." | | 12 | "She looked back at the way they had entered, but the shimmering distortion of the Veil was gone, replaced by a wall of dense, silver-leafed briars that seemed t…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice sounding thin in the encroaching twilight" | | 1 | "Rory breathed, her eyes wide" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice low and urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Rory hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.556 | |