| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1362 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1362 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "profound" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "kaleidoscope" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "fleeting" | | 14 | "sense of" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "tapestry" | | 17 | "sanctuary" | | 18 | "scanning" | | 19 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1355 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1206 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 3 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Gluttony" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.92 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a change in the pressure of t" | | 1 | "darkness that seemed to absorb the very light that struggled to filter through the canopy" | | 2 | "sounded like a thousand voices chanting ju" | | 3 | "looked like a sheet of polished obsidian" |
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| 52.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.476 | | wordCount | 1355 | | matches | | 0 | "not her own, but something vast" | | 1 | "not whether we are trapped, but whether we are the hunters" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 90.88% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 50.19 | | std | 23.49 | | cv | 0.468 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 74 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 91 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 81 | | 25 | 69 | | 26 | 72 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was pulsing" | | 1 | "was talking" | | 2 | "were reacting" | | 3 | "were walking" | | 4 | "was rapidly being" | | 5 | "were beginning" | | 6 | "was trying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 81 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary between the park and the grove didn't feel like a wall; it felt like a change in the pressure of the air, a sudden, heavy thickness that made Aurora’s lungs work a little harder." | | 1 | "As she stepped past the shadow of the ancient oak standing stones, the familiar, muted sounds of Richmond Park—the distant hum of London traffic, the rustle of ordinary squirrels—vanished." | | 2 | "They didn't look afraid; they looked hungry, as if the shifting reality of the Fae-touched land was a feast they had been waiting to consume." | | 3 | "They didn't just grow; they pulsed." | | 4 | "A sudden, sharp scent—clove and ozone—hit Aurora’s nose." | | 5 | "A sense of overwhelming hunger—not her own, but something vast and gluttonous—washed over her, making her stomach twist in a sudden, violent knot." | | 6 | "She felt the weight of the world she had left behind—the cramped London flat, the smell of Yu-Fei’s restaurant, the mundane safety of the streets." |
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| 91.14% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1225 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "gluttonous—washed over her," |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.04326530612244898 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011428571428571429 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 81 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 81 | | mean | 16.73 | | std | 8.05 | | cv | 0.481 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 34 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 44.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.32098765432098764 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 26 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she saw a glimpse" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 1 | "It wasn't the frantic heat" | | 2 | "she murmured, though she wasn't" | | 3 | "They didn't look afraid; they" | | 4 | "She looked ahead, trying to" | | 5 | "They didn't just grow; they" | | 6 | "She felt the weight of" | | 7 | "It felt as though they" | | 8 | "She froze, her hand instinctively" | | 9 | "she asked, her voice barely" | | 10 | "It wasn't a sound, exactly." | | 11 | "It was a vibration in" | | 12 | "It was rhythmic, hypnotic, and" | | 13 | "It felt as though the" | | 14 | "They reached a clearing where" | | 15 | "She looked down at the" | | 16 | "She recoiled, stumbling back toward" | | 17 | "she demanded, turning to Nyx" | | 18 | "It was a place designed" | | 19 | "She reached for the Fae-forged" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 36.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary between the park" | | 1 | "Aurora slowed her pace, her" | | 2 | "She reached down, her fingers" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant was pulsing" | | 4 | "It wasn't the frantic heat" | | 5 | "she murmured, though she wasn't" | | 6 | "The Shade didn't so much" | | 7 | "Nyx’s violet eyes, faintly glowing" | | 8 | "They didn't look afraid; they" | | 9 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 10 | "She looked ahead, trying to" | | 11 | "The flora here defied every" | | 12 | "Wildflowers, vibrant and impossibly bright," | | 13 | "They didn't just grow; they" | | 14 | "a voice drifted from further" | | 15 | "Aurora turned her head slightly." | | 16 | "She felt the weight of" | | 17 | "Isolde had given it to" | | 18 | "The oaks gave way to" | | 19 | "The canopy above was so" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary between the park and the grove didn't feel like a wall; it felt like a change in the pressure of the air, a sudden, heavy thickness that made Auror…" | | 1 | "Aurora slowed her pace, her boots sinking into moss that felt less like vegetation and more like velvet-covered sponge." | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant was pulsing against her collarbone, a steady, rhythmic heat that mirrored her own quickening heartbeat." | | 3 | "It wasn't the frantic heat of a fever, but a warning, a low-frequency vibration that signaled they were no longer in the world she understood." | | 4 | "In the dim, perpetual twilight of the grove, their silhouette was a hole in the world, a patch of absolute darkness that seemed to absorb the very light that st…" | | 5 | "They didn't look afraid; they looked hungry, as if the shifting reality of the Fae-touched land was a feast they had been waiting to consume." | | 6 | "Isolde had given it to her with a look that had been more a command than a gift, telling her that beauty in this place was often a mask for something teeth-and-…" | | 7 | "The oaks gave way to towering, spindly structures with bark that shimmered like iridescent oil on water." | | 8 | "Nyx paused, their form flickering, momentarily becoming incorporeal as they merged with the shadow of a massive, twisting root." | | 9 | "It felt as though the grove were aware of them, an immense, multi-eyed consciousness watching their every step through the translucent leaves and the glowing fu…" | | 10 | "The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, the crimson gem beneath the silver casing glowing with a soft, rhythmic light that cast a red hue over the dark water." | | 11 | "The Shade’s presence brought a sudden chill, a vacuum of heat that made Aurora’s breath mist in the air." | | 12 | "The humming in the ground intensified, turning from a murmur into a steady, thrumming pulse that matched the rhythm of the pendant." | | 13 | "She was a delivery person from Cardiff, a woman who had spent her life trying to outrun her past." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice barely a breath" | | 1 | "Aurora said, the realization settling in her chest like lead" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered, more to herself than to Nyx" | | 3 | "Nyx replied, their voice sounding like wind rushing through a narrow canyon" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 3 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.529 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.556 | | effectiveRatio | 0.556 | |