| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.591 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1319 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "intensity" | | 8 | "predator" | | 9 | "symphony" | | 10 | "stark" | | 11 | "dance" | | 12 | "chaotic" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "warmth" | | 16 | "carried the weight" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "weight" | | 19 | "effortless" | | 20 | "dancing" | | 21 | "churn" | | 22 | "sanctuary" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 7.72% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1317 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1152 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | London | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 8 | | Shade | 4 | | Aurora | 18 | | Ring | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Seer" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Ring" | | 3 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 0.719 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like glass beads hitting stone, an" | | 1 | "quite there" | | 2 | "trees that seemed to have grown into a deliberate shape" | | 3 | "felt like staring at the sun" | | 4 | "felt like a trap closing shut" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1317 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.03% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 41.16 | | std | 19.29 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 33 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 55 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was thrumming" | | 1 | "were sharing" | | 2 | "was biting" | | 3 | "was already moving" | | 4 | "was pulsing" | | 5 | "was reacting" | | 6 | "wasn't just reacting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond grove didn't just feel different; it felt heavy, like breathing through silk." | | 1 | "It wasn't just warm; it was thrumming." | | 2 | "They pushed deeper into the grove, the sounds of the city—the distant hum of traffic, the siren of a police car, the muffled roar of the Ring Road—completely erased." | | 3 | "But it wasn't her face that caught her attention; it was the way the light from the water seemed to dance behind her, forming shapes that weren't quite there." | | 4 | "It wasn't just reacting to the grove; it was reacting to something *within* it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1157 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.036300777873811585 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011235955056179775 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 15.87 | | std | 7.52 | | cv | 0.474 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 46.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.37349397590361444 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the silver stream seemed" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 1 | "It wasn't just warm; it" | | 2 | "Their voice was a low" | | 3 | "It was a shifting, translucent" | | 4 | "It was beautiful, but it" | | 5 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 6 | "They reached a small stream" | | 7 | "Her bright blue eyes looked" | | 8 | "She forced herself to focus" | | 9 | "It was pulsing harder now," | | 10 | "It wasn't just reacting to" | | 11 | "They climbed a gentle rise," | | 12 | "Her silver hair cascaded down" | | 13 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 14 | "Her voice wasn't loud, but" | | 15 | "She didn't look at Nyx," | | 16 | "She gripped the pendant through" | | 17 | "She drifted across the ground" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 71.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over the threshold" | | 2 | "Here, the petals were vibrant," | | 3 | "She reached up, her fingers" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant felt unnaturally" | | 5 | "It wasn't just warm; it" | | 6 | "Rory whispered, though the sound" | | 7 | "The Shade moved with a" | | 8 | "Nyx’s violet eyes flickered, scanning" | | 9 | "Their voice was a low" | | 10 | "Aurora looked up." | | 11 | "It was a shifting, translucent" | | 12 | "It was beautiful, but it" | | 13 | "They pushed deeper into the" | | 14 | "Aurora muttered, her hand instinctively" | | 15 | "The moonsilver metal was biting" | | 16 | "Nyx countered, their form flickering" | | 17 | "They reached a small stream" | | 18 | "Her bright blue eyes looked" | | 19 | "A sudden movement in the" |
| | ratio | 0.778 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 5.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped over the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, her boots sinking into a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't have been blooming in the bi…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant felt unnaturally warm against her skin, a steady, rhythmic heat that mirrored her own quickening pulse." | | 2 | "Nyx’s violet eyes flickered, scanning the perimeter with an intensity that made the hair on Aurora’s arms stand up." | | 3 | "It was a shifting, translucent veil of light, a shimmering distortion that made the heavens look like oil on water." | | 4 | "In their place was a symphony of the alien: the rhythmic clicking of insects that sounded like glass beads hitting stone, and the low, melodic sighing of the tr…" | | 5 | "The moonsilver metal was biting cold through her jacket, a grounding sensation in a world that felt increasingly untethered." | | 6 | "There were no walls, only the interlacing limbs of trees that seemed to have grown into a deliberate shape." | | 7 | "Her silver hair cascaded down her back like a waterfall of moonlight, and her skin possessed a translucence that made her seem more spirit than flesh." | | 8 | "When her lavender eyes landed on Aurora, the girl felt a sudden, sharp chill, as if the warmth of the Heartstone had been momentarily sucked away." | | 9 | "Nyx hissed, a sound like steam escaping a valve, and their form grew denser, darker, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asked, her breath hitching" | | 1 | "Aurora breathed, the word escaping her before she could censor it" | | 2 | "Nyx corrected, their voice tight" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 4 | "the Shade warned (warn)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |