Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8W42QADW06ZG3BW57J5TMA

Run Details

Duration:
2m 13s
Cost:
$0.000636
Provider:
DekaLLM

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks loomed like petrified giants, their gnarled limbs interlacing to form a heavy, suffocating canopy. Between the trunks, the standing stones rose from the earth, slick with moss that felt more like velvet than vegetation. Rory felt the Heartstone pendant thrum against her collarbone. The crimson gem pulsed with a rhythmic, heavy warmth, a heat that bled through her shirt and settled deep in her chest. Isolde moved toward the first stone. Her silver hair caught the dying light of the afternoon, trailing behind her like a comet's tail. She glided across the uneven ground, her feet finding purchase on roots and stones without making a single sound. No leaves crunched under her weight. No dirt shifted. Nyx drifted beside them, a silhouette of darkness that seemed to absorb the meager light. Their violet eyes flickered, two glowing sparks in the gloom. The shadow they cast didn't follow the laws of the sun; it stretched toward the stones, independent and hungry. "The boundary thins. The breath of the world holds its peace." Isolde stopped before the threshold of the stones. She reached out, her fingers hovering inches from the weathered granite. Rory tightened her grip on the hilt of the Fae-Forged blade tucked into her belt. The moonsilver felt biting, a sharp, unnatural cold that numbed her palm. "Is it safe?" The shadow beside her swirled, a localized gust of wind that smelled of ozone and old parchment. "Safety is a concept for those tied to the soil. Here, the shadows have teeth." The voice arrived as a whisper carried on a breeze, though no wind moved the leaves. Nyx’s form rippled, the edges of their silhouette blurring into the darkening air. Rory took a breath, the air tasting of copper and crushed jasmine. She stepped forward. The moment she crossed the line between the stones, the world fractured. A shimmer, like heat rising from asphalt, distorted her vision. The sound of the distant London traffic—the muffled roar of the M4 and the hum of life beyond Richmond Park—vanished. It didn't fade; it snapped out of existence, replaced by a silence so profound it made her ears ring. The light changed. The pale, amber glow of the approaching sunset vanished. In its place, a pervasive, iridescent twilight bathed the grove. The sky above the canopy wasn't blue or black, but a swirling bruised violet, streaked with veins of gold that pulsed in time with Rory’s own heartbeat. "Look at the flowers." Nyx pointed a dark, indistinct limb toward the ground. Beneath the trees, the forest floor erupted in a riot of impossible colors. Wildflowers, larger than Rory's head, glowed with internal bioluminescence. Petals of translucent teal and neon peach vibrated softly, emitting a low, melodic hum that resonated in Rory’s teeth. Some blossoms pulsed with a slow, rhythmic light, while others snapped shut like tiny mouths whenever a shadow passed over them. Rory knelt, reaching out toward a cluster of bell-shaped blooms. They radiated a soft, lavender light. As her hand drew near, the flowers leaned toward her, their stems stretching with a fluid, muscular grace. "The roots drink the memories of the walkers." Isolde stood a few paces ahead, her lavender eyes wide and unblinking. She stared into the thicket where the trees grew so close their bark seemed to merge into a single, living wall. Rory pulled her hand back. The warmth of the Heartstone intensified, the crimson glow of the gem brightening until it cast long, flickering shadows against the glowing flora. The sensation was no longer a mere pulse; it was a frantic drumming, an alarm. "We need to keep moving. This place... it feels heavy." Rory glanced down at her wrist. The small, crescent-shaped scar stood out starkly against her skin. She felt a sudden, inexplicable urge to check the time. She pulled her watch from her pocket. The second hand stuttered, jerked backward, and then began to spin in a rapid, dizzying circle. "The sun stays fixed, yet the moon has already climbed the sky." Isolde gestured upward. Through the gaps in the shifting canopy, Rory saw stars—not the distant, twinkling points of the London sky, but massive, swirling nebulae that looked close enough to touch. They moved with a predatory speed, racing across the violet expanse like sparks thrown from a forge. A sudden, sharp crack echoed through the grove. It wasn't a branch breaking. It sounded like glass shattering under immense pressure. Rory spun around, the moonsilver blade clearing its sheath in one fluid motion. The metal sang, a high, clear note that seemed to repel the encroaching shadows. Nyx drifted closer, their form expanding, growing taller and more solid. The violet glow in their eyes deepened to a fierce, burning amethyst. "Something watches from the spaces between." The shadows beneath the glowing ferns began to stretch. They didn't move with the light; they moved against it, creeping upward along the trunks of the trees like ink spilled on silk. The hum of the flowers rose in pitch, turning from a melody into a discordant, frantic drone. Rory pressed her back against the rough bark of a massive oak. The wood felt warm, almost like skin. It pulsed beneath her touch, a slow, subterranean thrum that suggested the entire grove was a single, breathing organism. "Isolde, where are we going?" The seer didn't turn. She walked deeper into the thicket, her silver hair the only constant in the shifting kaleidoscope of light and shadow. "To the heart of the hunger, where the truth is swallowed whole." Rory forced her legs to move. The ground felt spongy, yielding like moss-covered peat, but with an underlying elasticity that made every step feel uncertain. She stepped over a root that looked suspiciously like a coiled serpent, its bark textured with scales that shimmered in the teal light. The air grew thicker, tasting of honey and rot. Every breath felt like swallowing velvet. The deeper they ventured, the more the flora changed. The flowers grew larger, more aggressive, their petals serrated and tipped with glowing nectar that dripped like molten gold onto the forest floor. A heavy scent, sweet and cloying, filled Rory's lungs. It made her head swim. She blinked, trying to clear the haze, and saw a trail of footprints in the luminous moss. They weren't hers. They weren't Nyx's. They were delicate, spindly impressions that looked as though they had been pressed into the earth by something weightless. The footprints led directly toward a wall of dense, thorned briars that glowed with a sickly, pale green light. "Someone was here." Rory pointed at the marks. Nyx drifted over the prints, their shadowy mass hovering just above the surface. "The past is a shadow that refuses to fade." The Heartstone gave a violent, singular thud against Rory's chest, a jolt of heat so intense it forced a gasp from her lungs. The crimson light of the pendant flared, illuminating a path through the briars that hadn't been there a moment before. The thorns pulled back, recoiling like living things, revealing a narrow, winding trail that disappeared into a fog of swirling, iridescent mist. The silence returned, heavier than before, broken only by the rhythmic, frantic thrumming of the stone against her skin.
created_at"2026-05-10T11:59:50.003Z" 5/10/2026, 11:59:50 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count4
3
word"rhythmic"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"resonated"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"racing"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
19
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"velvet"
2"pulsed"
3"rhythmic"
4"warmth"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
7"gloom"
8"whisper"
9"fractured"
10"silence"
11"profound"
12"vibrated"
13"resonated"
14"pulse"
15"racing"
16"echoed"
17"silk"
18"kaleidoscope"
19"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
25.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1112
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Fae-Forged1
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Rory16
Nyx6
Isolde4
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.781
windowScore0.667
14.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"darkness that seemed to absorb the meager light"
1"sounded like glass shattering under immens"
2"note that seemed to repel the encroaching shadows"
3"felt like swallowing velvet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.826
wordCount1210
matches
0"not the distant, twinkling points of the London sky, but massive, swirling nebulae"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.14
std19.46
cv0.692
sampleLengths
068
151
244
311
419
527
63
717
815
929
1015
1161
1249
134
149
1562
1634
178
1833
1943
2010
2149
2212
2348
2421
2527
2623
276
2849
2938
305
3124
3212
3348
3447
3556
3619
373
385
3913
409
4165
4219
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been pressed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs172
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences97
ratio0.062
matches
0"The shadow they cast didn't follow the laws of the sun; it stretched toward the stones, independent and hungry."
1"The sound of the distant London traffic—the muffled roar of the M4 and the hum of life beyond Richmond Park—vanished."
2"It didn't fade; it snapped out of existence, replaced by a silence so profound it made her ears ring."
3"The sensation was no longer a mere pulse; it was a frantic drumming, an alarm."
4"Through the gaps in the shifting canopy, Rory saw stars—not the distant, twinkling points of the London sky, but massive, swirling nebulae that looked close enough to touch."
5"They didn't move with the light; they moved against it, creeping upward along the trunks of the trees like ink spilled on silk."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1119
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02680965147453083
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0071492403932082215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean12.47
std6.33
cv0.507
sampleLengths
017
120
29
322
46
517
619
76
83
915
1010
1119
1211
138
1411
1515
1612
173
1817
1915
2016
2113
2212
233
2412
2510
2620
2719
283
299
3010
3127
324
339
3413
359
3619
3721
3810
396
4018
418
4212
4321
445
4523
4615
4710
486
4910
35.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.27835051546391754
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences85
matches
0"Her silver hair caught the"
1"She glided across the uneven"
2"Their violet eyes flickered, two"
3"She reached out, her fingers"
4"She stepped forward."
5"It didn't fade; it snapped"
6"They radiated a soft, lavender"
7"She stared into the thicket"
8"She felt a sudden, inexplicable"
9"She pulled her watch from"
10"They moved with a predatory"
11"It wasn't a branch breaking."
12"It sounded like glass shattering"
13"They didn't move with the"
14"It pulsed beneath her touch,"
15"She walked deeper into the"
16"She stepped over a root"
17"It made her head swim."
18"She blinked, trying to clear"
19"They weren't hers."
ratio0.259
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The ancient oaks loomed like"
1"Rory felt the Heartstone pendant"
2"The crimson gem pulsed with"
3"Isolde moved toward the first"
4"Her silver hair caught the"
5"She glided across the uneven"
6"Nyx drifted beside them, a"
7"Their violet eyes flickered, two"
8"The shadow they cast didn't"
9"Isolde stopped before the threshold"
10"She reached out, her fingers"
11"Rory tightened her grip on"
12"The moonsilver felt biting, a"
13"The shadow beside her swirled,"
14"The voice arrived as a"
15"Nyx’s form rippled, the edges"
16"Rory took a breath, the"
17"She stepped forward."
18"The moment she crossed the"
19"A shimmer, like heat rising"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The crimson gem pulsed with a rhythmic, heavy warmth, a heat that bled through her shirt and settled deep in her chest."
1"The shadow beside her swirled, a localized gust of wind that smelled of ozone and old parchment."
2"Petals of translucent teal and neon peach vibrated softly, emitting a low, melodic hum that resonated in Rory’s teeth."
3"Through the gaps in the shifting canopy, Rory saw stars—not the distant, twinkling points of the London sky, but massive, swirling nebulae that looked close eno…"
4"It pulsed beneath her touch, a slow, subterranean thrum that suggested the entire grove was a single, breathing organism."
5"The ground felt spongy, yielding like moss-covered peat, but with an underlying elasticity that made every step feel uncertain."
6"The flowers grew larger, more aggressive, their petals serrated and tipped with glowing nectar that dripped like molten gold onto the forest floor."
7"They were delicate, spindly impressions that looked as though they had been pressed into the earth by something weightless."
8"The footprints led directly toward a wall of dense, thorned briars that glowed with a sickly, pale green light."
9"The thorns pulled back, recoiling like living things, revealing a narrow, winding trail that disappeared into a fog of swirling, iridescent mist."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.5450%