| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1128 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "synchronized" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "dancing" | | 17 | "searing" | | 18 | "mechanical" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1123 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1102 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 | | London | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Jennifer" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like wet velvet" | | 1 | "felt like a trap" | | 2 | "looked like a long, spindly limb, the col" | | 3 | "felt like a coal pressed against her st" | | 4 | "sounded like a thousand insects colliding" | | 5 | "felt like a steel cable pulling her bac" | | 6 | "felt like wet cartilage" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.89 | | wordCount | 1123 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a human laugh, but a series of rapid-fire clicks" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 23.89 | | std | 16.74 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "were already darkening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't the gentle pulse she knew; it was a rhythmic, insistent heat that seeped through her shirt and bit into her skin." | | 1 | "The noise of the city—the screech of the Tube, the relentless thrum of traffic, the echoes of Evan’s voice still rattling in the back of her skull—had become a physical weight." | | 2 | "The grove didn't echo; it absorbed sound." | | 3 | "It didn't just pulse now; it vibrated, a frantic warning that mirrored the sudden spike in her own heart rate." | | 4 | "The thought usually comforted her—a chance to disappear—but now it felt like a trap." | | 5 | "It wasn't just soft; it was tacky, clinging to the soles of her boots with a wet, sucking sound." | | 6 | "They didn't run; they shifted." | | 7 | "One moment they were thirty feet away, half-hidden by a fern; the next, they were ten feet away, their elongated fingers grazing the bark of the trees." | | 8 | "It didn't have teeth; it had rows of needle-thin cilia that vibrated." | | 9 | "She looked at the standing stones—only ten feet away." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 811 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "dense, ink-black voids" |
| | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.027127003699136867 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004932182490752158 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 10.03 | | std | 6.21 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 35.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.25 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the stillness remained, thick" | | 1 | "Then, a mirroring rustle to" | | 2 | "Just a smooth expanse of" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 54.34% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 1 | "It wasn't the gentle pulse" | | 2 | "She came for the silence." | | 3 | "She pivoted, her black hair" | | 4 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 5 | "It didn't just pulse now;" | | 6 | "She remembered the warnings about" | | 7 | "It looked like a long," | | 8 | "It moved with a fluid," | | 9 | "She backed away from the" | | 10 | "It wasn't just soft; it" | | 11 | "She stared at the ground." | | 12 | "She spun around, swinging her" | | 13 | "It wasn't a greeting." | | 14 | "It was an echo, stripped" | | 15 | "Her boots struggled against the" | | 16 | "They didn't run; they shifted." | | 17 | "It felt like a coal" | | 18 | "She reached the first standing" | | 19 | "It was a laugh." |
| | ratio | 0.414 | |
| 10.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped over the threshold" | | 1 | "The Fae Grove stretched before" | | 2 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 4 | "It wasn't the gentle pulse" | | 5 | "She came for the silence." | | 6 | "The noise of the city—the" | | 7 | "Here, the silence felt absolute." | | 8 | "Rory walked toward the center" | | 9 | "The wildflowers, deep purples and" | | 10 | "The swaying continued for three" | | 11 | "A snap echoed from the" | | 12 | "She pivoted, her black hair" | | 13 | "The shadows between the massive" | | 14 | "The word dropped flat." | | 15 | "The grove didn't echo; it" | | 16 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 17 | "The heat had intensified." | | 18 | "It didn't just pulse now;" | | 19 | "She remembered the warnings about" |
| | ratio | 0.899 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove stretched before her, a lush basin of wildflowers that shimmered under a moon that looked too large and too white for the London sky." | | 1 | "It wasn't the gentle pulse she knew; it was a rhythmic, insistent heat that seeped through her shirt and bit into her skin." | | 2 | "The shadows between the massive oaks were dense, ink-black voids that swallowed the moonlight." | | 3 | "Just a smooth expanse of translucent skin stretched over a skull, with two milky, oversized eyes that reflected the light like a cat's." | | 4 | "It crouched on all fours, its limbs bending at impossible angles, its skin shimmering with the same iridescent hue as the wildflowers." | | 5 | "It didn't have teeth; it had rows of needle-thin cilia that vibrated." | | 6 | "It was a low-frequency drone that rattled her teeth and made her vision blur." | | 7 | "She kicked wildly, her heel connecting with something that felt like wet cartilage." | | 8 | "She lay on her back, gasping for air, staring up at the normal, distant moon." | | 9 | "Three long, translucent bruises in the shape of thin fingers were already darkening on her skin, pulsing with a faint, iridescent glow." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |