| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 83.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1214 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1214 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "long shadow" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "reminder" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "churn" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "could feel" | | 18 | "desire" | | 19 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.58% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1210 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "You bring the flavor of Dymas with you, Isolde said, her voice melodic and strangely hollow." | | 1 | "I was told you might know why, she said, keeping her tone level." | | 2 | "The barrier is weeping, Isolde murmured, looking down at the amber glow." | | 3 | "Isolde, tell me how to stop it, Rory demanded." | | 4 | "The path is narrow, she whispered, and the fog is closing in." |
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| 92.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 71 | | wordCount | 1210 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Rory | 14 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Varga | 1 | | Seer | 3 | | Dymas | 5 | | London | 2 | | Gluttony | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Carter | 1 | | Dymasian | 1 | | Prince | 1 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Shade" | | 7 | "Veil" | | 8 | "Varga" | | 9 | "Seer" | | 10 | "Dymas" | | 11 | "Gluttony" | | 12 | "Fae" | | 13 | "Carter" | | 14 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.921 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a bruise on the fabric of the" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.826 | | wordCount | 1210 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just a crack, but a tear" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 50.42 | | std | 26.8 | | cv | 0.532 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 109 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 72 | | 6 | 82 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 100 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 95 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was replaced" | | 1 | "were fixed" | | 2 | "was told" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 195 | | matches | | |
| 9.97% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory looked back, wanting to see the entrance—the oak stones—but there was only a shimmering distortion, the Veil rippling like water under a breeze." | | 1 | "She did not turn as they approached; she didn't need to." | | 2 | "She felt caught between two prisons—one of fire and appetite, and one of stillness and riddles." | | 3 | "She could feel the pull—a craving for something she couldn't name, a desire for the abundance, the excess, the warmth." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1218 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own long-lost humanity," |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.028735632183908046 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010673234811165846 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 14.07 | | std | 6.99 | | cv | 0.497 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 44.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3372093023255814 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by a" | | 1 | "She reached up to touch" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes traced the" | | 3 | "It was a pocket tucked" | | 4 | "It is not silence." | | 5 | "It is a hesitation." | | 6 | "They pushed deeper, passing through" | | 7 | "It looked like a bruise" | | 8 | "She did not turn as" | | 9 | "Her footsteps had left no" | | 10 | "You bring the flavor of" | | 11 | "It clings to your pulse," | | 12 | "I was told you might" | | 13 | "My life in London is" | | 14 | "She gestured toward the center" | | 15 | "It was a culinary abyss," | | 16 | "She reached into her jacket," | | 17 | "I’m just a delivery person," | | 18 | "I bring food to people" | | 19 | "I’m not a guardian." |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 65.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "It was replaced by a" | | 2 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 3 | "She reached up to touch" | | 4 | "The crimson gem was warm," | | 5 | "Their violet eyes traced the" | | 6 | "The Grove was not merely" | | 7 | "It was a pocket tucked" | | 8 | "The moonsilver dagger remained unnervingly" | | 9 | "The Shade tilted their head." | | 10 | "The voice that came out" | | 11 | "It is not silence." | | 12 | "It is a hesitation." | | 13 | "The world here is waiting" | | 14 | "They pushed deeper, passing through" | | 15 | "Rory looked back, wanting to" | | 16 | "It looked like a bruise" | | 17 | "The wild, tangled forest gave" | | 18 | "The Seer’s silver hair pooled" | | 19 | "She did not turn as" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "If it fully ignites, the" | | 1 | "If the Veil is failing," |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 49.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by a humid, floral warmth that tasted of nectar and heavy, overripe fruit." | | 1 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue eyes adjusting to a light that didn't seem to have a singular source." | | 2 | "They pushed deeper, passing through a cluster of luminescent ferns that curled away from their touch." | | 3 | "She gestured toward the center of the glade, where the earth seemed to thin, revealing a view that brought a sharp, metallic gasp to Rory’s throat." | | 4 | "It was a culinary abyss, a kingdom of indulgence that made Rory’s stomach churn." | | 5 | "Rory looked at Nyx, whose violet eyes seemed to hold the echoes of their own long-lost humanity, and then at the Heartstone, which was now vibrating with a low,…" | | 6 | "I’m not a sacrifice, Rory said, her voice sharpening with the quick, cold clarity that had kept her alive in the worst parts of London." | | 7 | "I am the shadow that remains when the lights fail, Aurora." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |