Run: 2026-05-10-01KR8WE44VBG5Q6TH64NX7VX5S

Run Details

Duration:
8.7s
Cost:
$0.002700
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stared at the three heavy deadbolts of Eva’s flat, her thumb tracing the jagged, pale crescent on her left wrist. The wood grain looked tired under the flickering hallway light. She reached for the top lock, her nails scraping the brass, when the door swung inward with a sharp metallic clatter. Lucien leaned against the doorframe, his charcoal suit pressed to a razor’s edge. One amber eye tracked her every breath, while the other—pool-black and swallowing light—searched the dim corridor behind her. He rested his weight on the ivory handle of his cane, the tip resting millimeters from her worn sneaker. You left without finishing the drink, let alone the conversation. Rory pushed past him into the cramped living space. The air smelled of old parchment and the faint, ozone-heavy tang that always clung to his tailored sleeves. She kicked a stack of research notes aside to clear a path toward the window. Ptolemy the tabby cat blinked from atop a bulging bookcase, tail twitching in rhythmic annoyance at the intrusion. The conversation ended the moment you decided my life was merely another ledger entry for your Avaros contacts. Lucien clicked the lock shut behind him. The sound echoed like a gunshot. He moved with a predator’s grace, shedding his coat and hanging it on a hook that groaned under the weight. He stood too close. The scent of sandalwood and something sharper, something distinctly cold, flooded her senses. He smelled like winter in a city that had forgotten how to freeze. Transactions require honesty, Aurora. I provided the information you requested. You simply disliked the price of the truth. She whirled around, stopping inches from his chest. She looked up, locked into that mismatched gaze. He stood 5’11”, a wall of silk and unspoken intent. She kept her jaw tight, refusing to let the familiar pull of his presence soften her edges. She remembered the heat of his palm against her shoulder during that night in the warehouse, the way he had shielded her from the glass shards. She also remembered the way he had walked away afterward without a backward glance. Price? You sold me out to the syndicate the moment we hit the pavement. He didn't blink. He lowered his voice, a velvet rasp that hummed against her collarbone. He reached out, his gloved fingers hovering near her throat before he curled them back into a fist at his side. I kept you off their radar. There is a distinct difference between being sold and being preserved. You think yourself a player, but you are a pawn on a board you refuse to label. Rory laughed, a brittle, sharp sound that didn't reach her eyes. She gestured to the surrounding clutter—the scrolls, the maps covered in red ink, the sheer volume of secrets Eva kept under lock and key. She paced, boots clicking against the floorboards. She grabbed a stray book, tossing it back onto the pile with unnecessary force. I’m nobody’s pawn. I’m the one who makes the deliveries. I’m the one who carries the weight while you broker deals from the safety of your charcoal suits. Why are you here, Lucien? And do not tell me you were in the neighborhood. He stepped toward her, invading her space until she backed into the desk piled high with dusty tomes. He braced a hand on either side of her hips. The ivory cane clattered to the floor, rolling beneath the armchair. He didn't look at it. His focus remained pinned to her eyes, his pupils dilating as he leaned in. I require a courier. Not just any courier. One who can navigate the tunnels beneath the City without drawing the attention of the watchers. Is that what this is? Recruitment? After three months of silence, you show up at my door, unannounced, expecting me to drop everything to run your errands? Her heartbeat thudded against her ribs, a frantic rhythm she hated him for inducing. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Ptolemy leaped from the bookshelf, thudding onto the carpet, weaving between their legs. Lucien didn't look down. He traced a slow, infuriating line down her arm, stopping right where his gloved thumb grazed the scar on her wrist. I could have sent a request through the standard channels. He didn't wait for her to respond. He lowered his head, his forehead resting against hers. His breath was cool, a stark contrast to the sudden flare of heat in her belly. I wanted to see if the bruises had faded. Rory stiffened. She pushed against his chest, but he stayed pinned to her, immovable as marble. She saw the flick of his black eye, the way his composure slipped just enough to show the jagged, desperate hunger hiding underneath. He was always so careful, so curated, yet here he was, invading her sanctuary with his pride and his secrets. My bruises are none of your concern. You left us on complicated terms for a reason. Keep it that way. The lies taste bitter on your tongue, Aurora. You haven't left the flat after dark in a week. You are waiting for something. Or someone. She shoved him harder this time, creating enough space to pivot toward the kitchen alcove. She grabbed a kettle, her hands shaking as she filled it with water. She needed the noise, the distraction of the stovetop. She needed to stop looking at the way his platinum hair caught the room’s dim light, or the way his tailored trousers bunched at his knees as he followed her. I’m waiting for the work to end. I’m waiting for a life where I don’t have to check the locks every twenty minutes. Something you clearly don’t understand, given your life is built on shadows. He stepped into the kitchen, his presence swallowing the small space. He stood behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from him. He rested a hand on the counter edge, trapping her between the stove and his reach. You think I choose the shadows? I am part of them. You are the one who chooses to live within the light while tethered to the darkness. That makes you dangerous, Rory. Why did you really come to London? To escape Evan, or to find a place where the shadows would finally notice you back? She turned, her back hitting the counter. The kettle whistled, a shrill, piercing shriek that shredded the tension of the room. She reached past him to kill the flame, her sleeve brushing his shoulder. He grabbed her wrist—not the scarred one, but the other, pinning her palm against the tile. I came here to disappear. And you are the largest hole in my plans. He moved then, swift and decisive, his hand sliding behind her neck to pull her forward. The kiss wasn't gentle. It was a collision of history and pent-up anger, a desperate, bruising claim that ignored the years of distance and the layers of dishonesty. It tasted like peppermint, ozone, and the inevitable failure of all her precautions. She gripped the lapels of his suit, twisting the fabric until her knuckles turned white. She kissed him back with the same ferocity, letting the frustration of the last three months pour into the space between them. He broke the kiss, his lips lingering against hers, his breath hitching. She could see the reflection of her own confusion and desire in his heterochromatic gaze—one golden, one dark, both entirely focused on her. You haven't changed, he murmured, his voice a low vibration against her skin. You were the one who arrived unannounced, Lucien. Don't act surprised that the gate wasn't locked.
created_at"2026-05-10T12:05:19.139Z" 5/10/2026, 12:05:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"pawn"
count2
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"traced"
count1
13
word"standard"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"marble"
count1
16
word"sanctuary"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"echoed"
4"predator"
5"silk"
6"unspoken"
7"familiar"
8"velvet"
9"pawn"
10"navigate"
11"silence"
12"traced"
13"standard"
14"stark"
15"marble"
16"sanctuary"
17"could feel"
18"tension"
19"desire"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1280
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1215
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Avaros1
Aurora2
Price1
Lucien5
City1
Rory5
London1
Evan1
You11
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"You"
places
0"City"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like winter in a city that had for"
1"tasted like peppermint, ozone, and the in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.781
wordCount1280
matches
0"not the scarred one, but the other, pinning her palm against the tile"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"surprised that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.65
std19.6
cv0.521
sampleLengths
052
150
210
360
418
563
618
783
814
936
1034
1156
1243
1358
1424
1527
1658
1710
1832
199
2059
2120
2225
2367
2435
2542
2655
2750
2814
2957
3037
3135
3213
3316
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"being sold"
1"being preserved"
2"is built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was, invading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences50
ratio0.08
matches
0"One amber eye tracked her every breath, while the other—pool-black and swallowing light—searched the dim corridor behind her."
1"Rory laughed, a brittle, sharp sound that didn't reach her eyes. She gestured to the surrounding clutter—the scrolls, the maps covered in red ink, the sheer volume of secrets Eva kept under lock and key. She paced, boots clicking against the floorboards. She grabbed a stray book, tossing it back onto the pile with unnecessary force."
2"She turned, her back hitting the counter. The kettle whistled, a shrill, piercing shriek that shredded the tension of the room. She reached past him to kill the flame, her sleeve brushing his shoulder. He grabbed her wrist—not the scarred one, but the other, pinning her palm against the tile."
3"He broke the kiss, his lips lingering against hers, his breath hitching. She could see the reflection of her own confusion and desire in his heterochromatic gaze—one golden, one dark, both entirely focused on her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount293
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, ozone-heavy tang"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.030716723549488054
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.010238907849829351
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean25.6
std18.36
cv0.717
sampleLengths
021
110
221
313
418
519
610
79
818
915
1018
1118
127
136
1420
154
1613
1713
184
196
208
218
228
2367
2414
2536
2634
2756
2843
2958
3024
3127
3258
3310
3432
359
3659
3720
3825
3967
4035
4142
4255
4350
4414
4557
4637
4735
4813
4916
44.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.28
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences49
matches
0"She reached for the top"
1"He rested his weight on"
2"You left without finishing the"
3"She kicked a stack of"
4"He moved with a predator’s"
5"He stood too close."
6"He smelled like winter in"
7"I provided the information you"
8"You simply disliked the price"
9"She whirled around, stopping inches"
10"She looked up, locked into"
11"He didn't blink. He lowered"
12"I kept you off their"
13"I’m nobody’s pawn. I’m the"
14"He stepped toward her, invading"
15"I require a courier. Not"
16"Her heartbeat thudded against her"
17"I could have sent a"
18"He didn't wait for her"
19"I wanted to see if"
ratio0.653
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences49
matches
0"Rory stared at the three"
1"The wood grain looked tired"
2"She reached for the top"
3"Lucien leaned against the doorframe,"
4"He rested his weight on"
5"You left without finishing the"
6"Rory pushed past him into"
7"The air smelled of old"
8"She kicked a stack of"
9"Ptolemy the tabby cat blinked"
10"The conversation ended the moment"
11"Lucien clicked the lock shut"
12"The sound echoed like a"
13"He moved with a predator’s"
14"He stood too close."
15"The scent of sandalwood and"
16"He smelled like winter in"
17"Transactions require honesty, Aurora."
18"I provided the information you"
19"You simply disliked the price"
ratio0.939
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"He moved with a predator’s grace, shedding his coat and hanging it on a hook that groaned under the weight."
1"He didn't blink. He lowered his voice, a velvet rasp that hummed against her collarbone. He reached out, his gloved fingers hovering near her throat before he c…"
2"Rory laughed, a brittle, sharp sound that didn't reach her eyes. She gestured to the surrounding clutter—the scrolls, the maps covered in red ink, the sheer vol…"
3"He stepped toward her, invading her space until she backed into the desk piled high with dusty tomes. He braced a hand on either side of her hips. The ivory can…"
4"Her heartbeat thudded against her ribs, a frantic rhythm she hated him for inducing. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Ptolemy leaped from the books…"
5"She shoved him harder this time, creating enough space to pivot toward the kitchen alcove. She grabbed a kettle, her hands shaking as she filled it with water. …"
6"He stepped into the kitchen, his presence swallowing the small space. He stood behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from him. He rest…"
7"She turned, her back hitting the counter. The kettle whistled, a shrill, piercing shriek that shredded the tension of the room. She reached past him to kill the…"
8"He moved then, swift and decisive, his hand sliding behind her neck to pull her forward. The kiss wasn't gentle. It was a collision of history and pent-up anger…"
9"She gripped the lapels of his suit, twisting the fabric until her knuckles turned white. She kissed him back with the same ferocity, letting the frustration of …"
10"He broke the kiss, his lips lingering against hers, his breath hitching. She could see the reflection of her own confusion and desire in his heterochromatic gaz…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
71.4897%